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I can't remember most of what happened while I was healing. I assume that I slept the majority of the time. I can remember small snippets, but attempting to force my memory only causes a long-lasting headache that harms more than helps. What I can remember isn't much of anything, either. A few times, I felt something - the rustle of blankets around me, being moved to a more comfortable position, a hand on my own. Sometimes, I heard things - low murmurings, distant arguments, soft crying. And, oc
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Chapter 14 - Sprinting
xXxAmorexXx commented on xXxAmorexXx's story chapter in Chapter 14 - Sprinting
I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. Maybe I can sort a few things out for you (if you don't want to know these things, don't read ahead. They aren't spoilers to the story, just more information about the Adjusting universe). First of all, while John is still alive and alpha of his pack, Brian is still an Alpha wolf - he was born as one. He doesn't own a pack of his own right now, but he's still an alpha wolf. The wolves in this story find love a lot like humans - some believe it is fate and they have a soul mate, while others believe they just fall in love. But, no, there are no "mates" as in "ohmygoshijustmetyouandiloveyouletshaveeightbabiesandbehapyforever". Of course, they can stil find someone they love and settle down with. And, of course, they have religion too - so, some do believe they have one wolf they are "destined" to be with. I don't know who "jas" is, and the other questions you have I plan to answer in the chapters to come hope this helped! -
Running. It was nothing new to me. Others considered it a fun pastime, or maybe an evil forced upon them by their malevolent dictator, otherwise known as the gym teacher. However, to me, it was as much a part of my life as breathing. Sometimes, I wished my life didn't rely so thoroughly upon it. Sometimes, I wished I could just take a break from it all. Sometimes, I wished it would all just end. Of course, none of my wishes would ever be granted. The howls of wolves were getting lou
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"Why do you ignore me, Adrian?" I was breathing hard as pain lacerated my body. Bites, bruises, cuts, blood, and spent white seed decorated my once pale skin. I couldn't stand to look at myself. I kept my eyes shut as often as possible. "Adrian..." My muscles were tense as my breathing labored through the pain, sweat dripping from my pores to try to cool off my overheated skin. "You know that I wouldn't let them hurt you if you just accepted me, Adrian." Tears began to seep out fro
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I'm glad you like the twist--at least, I think you did Nobody on my other site seemed to get it--they all just complained "mate this, mate that." I'm happy you weren't expecting it--I wanted to make it as shocking as possible. And yes, I through a huge wrench in the works >
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When I awoke, I didn't react the same way I had the previous time I woke up in a strange location. I didn't dismiss my nightmare, nor did I snuggle down into my blankets in an attempt to fall back asleep. I didn't have a temporary case of amnesia upon coming out of my dreams. No, when I awoke, it was in fear and an immediate remembrance of what had happened. Cold metal cut into my naked wrists and ankles as I laid spread eagled on a large bed. The room was close to pitch black; I could har
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The next twenty minutes were a blur of rushed movement, screaming babies, and worried adults. Wolves who were too weak to fight crowded into the large basement of the pack house with the children; calming the pups and keeping them distracted from what was happening above. I didn't want to be shoved into the basement like some pup who couldn't fight. I was stronger than that. Immediately after telling me what happened, Brian had done just that--shoved me downstairs with the pups and the wolve
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Chapter 9 - Flashbacks
xXxAmorexXx commented on xXxAmorexXx's story chapter in Chapter 9 - Flashbacks
Adrian definitely deserves some happiness -
“Mommy?” I called out. “Daddy?” No response. Suddenly, I heard a loud cry from the last door on the right. My heart stuttered for a moment before I ran as fast as my legs could carry me down that hall. “Mommy!” I yelled out, fearing the worst. I reached the door and paused, listening to what was happening inside. I heard constant whimpers and whines, scaring me even more. “Mommy?” I slowly reached out and grabbed the doorknob with a trembling hand. “Daddy?" I opened the door and froze in sh
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Chapter 8 - Information
xXxAmorexXx commented on xXxAmorexXx's story chapter in Chapter 8 - Information
Thank you, I'm gad you enjoyed it -
Chapter 8 - Information
xXxAmorexXx commented on xXxAmorexXx's story chapter in Chapter 8 - Information
Thank you, I'm gad you enjoyed it -
After walking for fifteen minutes in our human forms, Jude and I agreed on running the rest of the way back in our wolf forms. It was getting colder and Jude would get hypothermia if he walked the rest of the way back in only my jacket. So we stripped our clothes off, folded them up, and shifted into our animal forms. Jude picked up the jacket in his mouth while I pick up the rest of my clothes in my own before setting off. We decided to settle our pace at a jog, following the group's scent back
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Brian can be a tough guy to like, so I understand that
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Glad you like it!
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Hahah nope, their ages are correct. Brian and Alex act the way they act for very specific reasons that will later be revealed Brian isn't exactly jealous of Alex, he just feels like he has no right to sit in on those meetings--which he technically shouldn't be sitting in on.
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Thank you for pointing out the mistake in the sentences, that was *not* intentional (but it's fixed now). I'm just in love with Adrian. Of course, I know his whole back-story and future, so I just want to hug him tightly! Anyway, Alex is really interesting too, and I like him Glad you're enjoying my characters! (:
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I'm happy that you're enjoying it! Yeah, Alex just evokes this strong, almost hulking image in my mind
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Alex was furious with me tracking down a rogue. "Do you have any idea how dangerous this is?!" he almost shouted at Brian. The six of us who were in the office earlier were all standing at the edge of the woods. We had waited until night time to go for our hunt. Brian stood in a relaxed pose, his hands stuck in his pockets, his eyes showing how little he cared about what Alex was saying. Alex was the complete opposite, with his green eyes flashing with fury. He seemed even taller than normal
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Thank you, I'm glad you liked it
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Chapter 4 - Salutations
xXxAmorexXx commented on xXxAmorexXx's story chapter in Chapter 4 - Salutations
I'm glad you're enjoying it! I'm sorry for the ambiguity--for the chapters that I haven't written yet, I'll start trying to add more detail and/or information to lessen the confusion -
Chapter 4 - Salutations
xXxAmorexXx commented on xXxAmorexXx's story chapter in Chapter 4 - Salutations
I'm glad you're enjoying it! Sorry for the ambiguity Alphas naturally have more power than all other wolves. It's a character trait that people and wolves alike can just naturally sense upon first meeting them. Alphas exude power, so in this way even rogues can sense the power. However, for packs, their Alpha's power works over them even stronger than any other. It's kind of like when you have and older sibling and parents. Although your older siblings can be put in charge (i.e. being more 'powerful'), your parents (or your pack's Alpha) is always the number one authority that you refer to. -
Alex is slightly younger than Brian, so Brian has much more power than him, although you are right in that Alex is more powerful than the average wolf because of his lineage. Yeah, I really need to add more detail... once the story is complete, I plan on going back and tearing it up and fixing it Thank you for the criticism!
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I see what you mean as to adding more details, but don't expect too many changes yet. I plan on finishing the story first, then going back and doing some severe editing. However, please don't think I'm discounting your criticism! It really is helpful because I wouldn't have thought of that, so thank you!
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No no no no.... Yikes, I'll have to fix that. Sandra Bullock is Maria, sorry
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No no no no.... Yikes, I'll have to fix that. Sandra Bullock is Maria, sorry
