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"Waiting Outside The Lines 18" My legs were strong, but my knees were weak. My feet were steady, but my ankles were loose and clumsy. I was standing on solid ground, sure enough...but my head was so far in the clouds that the weightlessness made it difficult to walk at all...not knowing if I was suddenly going to fall, face first, into the dirt...or float away into the blue skies above. It took a few odd looks from other cast members and set workers to realize that I was grinning fr
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Believe it or not, the 'movie trailer' that I put together for the "Billy Chase" series has just recently surpassed 10 THOUSAND views on YouTube! And that is waaaaay above any other story trailer that I've made so far! So big thanks to you guys for checking it out and making it successful! You ROCK for that! And, if you haven't been yet, be sure to check out the Comicalityshack Youtube channel! There is an entire week's worth of stuff for you to enjoy there! Funny stuff, informative stuff, inspirational stuff, gay short films, coming out vids...just go and have fun. Alright? Life is good!
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Billy Chase 416 Continues The Binge!
Comicality replied to Comicality's topic in Comicality's Shack Clubhouse's Cafe
Of course I do! I read everything when I can. I don't always reply, because if I did that I wouldn't have time to write new chapters and people would throw rotten tomatoes at me for taking so long. But I read them. I just really hope that you keep in mind that (A) It's just a fictional story, and I deliberately put obstacles and conflicts into it for "Billy" to face and learn from in a 'story' sense. It's supposed to make for a good story. And (...he's a teenager. He's experiencing all of these things for the first time and dealing with them the best that he knows how. He's never had a committed boyfriend before, or a zit, or a Summer job, or more than a few sips of alcohol. As adults we can look back and say "He's so stupid and frustrating and annoying and I HATE him for making poor choices!", but he's a kid. That's why I sometimes step in and say, "Jesus Christ, give the poor kid a break and let him learn on his own." Some readers are really unfairly HARSH when it comes to this series, and I just ask them to remember what it was like to be his age. We weren't perfect either, you know? I wanted the story to reflect that. It's not meant to frustrate and annoy anybody. It's meant to be a realistic expression of how it was for a LOT of gay teens growing up. Not all, but a lot. So...I definitely read the comments. All feedback is good feedback. I just think that you might enjoy the series more if you relaxed a bit on poor Billy and tried to see things from his angle every once in a while. -
Sunday - How can a random Sunday, a day off from work, turn out to be so stressful? It was nice and sunny outside, birds were chirping, a gentle breeze was blowing through the trees...it's like one of those perfect Summer days that you remember for years to come, you know? But I guess a good day involves a lot more than decent weather and a smile. You know, at the risk of sounding selfish, I still want to actually enjoy the rest of my Summer vacation. Instead, my mom has gotten it in her
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This "GFD" spinoff takes you all back to the Old West! So check it out, and let me know what ya think! More to come! https://www.voy.com/17262/24645.html Also, be sure to look for many other vampire goodies at the GFD: Blood Bank fansite! Have fun, and feel free to add a story of your OWN if you get the itch! https://gfdbloodbank.com/
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I truly hope you guys enjoy it! Let me know what ya think! https://www.gayauthors.org/forums/story/comicality/leftwithoutwords
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"Left Without Words 5" It might have been a dream or something, or it could have been the demanding beams of sunlight pouring in through my bedroom window, that woke me up today...but if I had a guess, I'd say it was the fact that I was trembling with infatuated tremors before I could even open my eyes. Thoughts of me and Deme getting together to ride out to the park...just the two of us...I don't know, it had me dizzy with the promise behind its seemingly innocent opportunity. I don't kno
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Enjoy! I hope you like it! Let me know what you think when you get a chance! https://www.gayauthors.org/forums/story/comicality/thesecretlifeofbillychase9
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Saturday - It wasn't really a surprise to wake up to another few messages from Jimmy his morning. Did I not answer him last night? I'm not really sure. Can't remember. I'm only putting some major thought into it right now because it sounded like Jimmy was sliding right back into 'worry mode' over not hearing from me yet. I can't understand why. It's barely been 24 hours since he sent me his last message. What's he getting all antsy for? It's not like I didn't have to work yesterday. An
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So enjoy. K? https://www.gayauthors.org/forums/story/comicality/myonlyescape
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"My Only Escape 23" On a normal day, I would slow my pace down to a turtle race in order to spend as much quality time with Brody as I possibly could. Something about a silent breeze and a dash of early morning sunlight brought an extra sense of angelic grace to his already stunning beauty. Like...every time you think you've seen the absolute peak of his sensual, yet boyishly bashful, allure...it catches you from another angle. And you're forced to re-evaluate just how gorgeous one boy co
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The first 'vampire'/'werewolf' crossover story that I've ever written continues! The new chapter is now on the Library! https://www.voy.com/17262/24604.html And if you want to read the earlier chapters, as well as a ton of other "Gone From Daylight" stories, be sure to check out the "Blood Bank" website! Have a blast! http://www.gfdbloodbank.com/
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Hope you guys like the new chapter! And if you get a moment, let me know what you think! https://www.gayauthors.org/story/comicality/aclassbyhimself
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"A Class By Himself 27" I notice that Tanner and I always allow for an extended moment of eye contact before we're forced to go our separate ways for morning classes. There's, like...this electric charge in the air that tries so valiantly to keep us bound together for just a FEW tender moments longer before we were ripped apart again. My eyes drink in every last drop of beauty. I don't dare to blink for fear that I might miss some minute detail and I'll be forced to go hours before my
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This will be the THIRD miniseries that has spun off from the rapidly growing "Shelter" series! Each one taking on a different character from the main cast! So check out the first chapter of the three part series! And let me know what ya think! https://www.voy.com/17262/24594.html
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Waiting Outside The Lines 17 Posted!
Comicality replied to Comicality's topic in Comicality's Shack Clubhouse's Cafe
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"Waiting Outside The Lines 17" The closer we got to this 'Mingus' boy, the more beautiful he became. Frighteningly so. Perhaps it was my gentle struggle with the fact that I was being physically pushed in his direction by Asa and Chandler simultaneously that caused Mingus to notice our approach. He didn't seem distressed, necessarily, but I did see him straighten up a bit, a very slight gesture with his hand to lightly brush the few loose strands of blond hair off of his forehead. Wow...
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Love and zombies! Can't go wrong there. Enjoy! And let me know what you think! https://www.gayauthors.org/forums/story/comicality/shelter
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Chapter 4: New Arrivals When you're a teenager...one of the most frustrating things about a situation like the one I'm in, sleeping in a room full of random people...is waking up with morning wood and not having a private way to 'take care of it' before getting out of bed. It was actually more like morning IRON today, as horny as I was. God, I missed the days of having my own room and a closed door to hide my sins from the rest of the world. I could have splashed the ceiling with the seme
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The third short series tie-in to the "Shelter" zombie apocalypse story is almost ready, and will start posting it's 3 chapter run next Friday! This one centers around the 'Preston Miles' character of the story, and will hopefully give you a little background on him, as well allow you to have some fun! (Maybe even a creepy chill every now and then!) So check it out when you get a chance!
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Hope you guys enjoy it! Sex-ay! Hehehe!
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Just letting you know that a new chapter has been posted! Hope you like it! Let me know what you think! https://www.gayauthors.org/forums/story/comicality/thesecretlifeofbillychase9
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