kubikra

I love the story line, but your editors missed way to many errors in spelling and grammar. This is not to be critical, but informative. You are telling a astounding story and great at transitions keeping your readers engaged. Bully for you

I am so impressed with this story line and the way it is carried out. Just enough humor to be realistic and fits the story line. I am also pleased to see that you have a good beta reader/edditor and they care as much about your story as you, It shows through clearly. This story flows so smothly and makes it a joy to read.

Good Day, I have read this chapter many times and made my friends read it also and we all agree that you should come back to this story and continue the tale. You have started and amazing tale that should be told. Ron