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    Superhero

    Erge43 commented on Graeme's story chapter in Superhero

    I think that you are the best writer in GA and this story is one of your bests! Bravo!!
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    James Place

    Erge43 commented on Dark's story chapter in James Place

    As a first chapter it is an interesting piece, as a whole story it's only a bad joke. if that's your idea of becoming a "serious" writer, you can start again.
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    Monday

    Erge43 commented on faxity's story chapter in Monday

    Oh, come on, man! This is getting too silly! Wake up from your Disney fairy land! Until now Ben and Asher looked like two nice, normal teenagers. All of a sudden they start behaving like a couple of frustrated, guilt ridden old spinsters from some victorian novel. Teenagers are not like that and if you have really met some like that, you should send them to a shrink to find out what's wrong with them.
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