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This is a thrilling first chapter, you have me wanting so much more. The suspense in it is so real and it made me think of various other scenarios that could take place.
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Thank you so much for the review I have to say you may find it creepy but Mikhail seems to enjoy the little things about Brian that creep you out. As for your suspicions I will respect your wishes and not confirm or deny them. This chapter is one of the important ones that help with understanding Mikhail. Mikhail's life is a fun adventure that we are all sure to enjoy
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Thank you so much for the review I have to say you may find it creepy but Mikhail seems to enjoy the little things about Brian that creep you out. As for your suspicions I will respect your wishes and not confirm or deny them. This chapter is one of the important ones that help with understanding Mikhail. Mikhail's life is a fun adventure that we are all sure to enjoy
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I woke up on Saturday feeling anxious as hell; it was as if this coming night was going to be the biggest performance of my life. How did I get talked into attending this party? How am I going to be around him all night? I had a hard time sleeping but I remembered I had rehearsals. For once I was up in time. So, I took my time to get ready and even managed to squeeze in breakfast with the parents. “Your mother and I thought about a few things regarding your behaviour,” my father said as he was
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Marvin's Point of View; The Start of a War
Grunge_Ken commented on Grunge_Ken's story chapter in Marvin's Point of View; The Start of a War
Thank you very much Cole, I'll make sure to keep the story as exciting as possible. I trust you'll tell me when I'm getting stale or out of line, right? -
Marvin's Point of View; The Start of a War
Grunge_Ken commented on Grunge_Ken's story chapter in Marvin's Point of View; The Start of a War
Hahahaha I actually thought of you when I added Marvin's point of view, as the fourth chapter. It initially was supposed to go somewhere else but I moved it here to add dimension. With that being said, I'm very glad you liked the chapter . I'll bring you more Marvin chapters maybe, even, back-to-back Marvin chapters -
Marvin's Point of View; The Start of a War
Grunge_Ken commented on Grunge_Ken's story chapter in Marvin's Point of View; The Start of a War
Thank you very much for your review. I was scared that the fight scene might be too much but I love the fact that it is being well recieved. Mikhail is a cheeky bugger with a wicked tongue I'm sure his bound to fight someone else sooner or later. Marv is such a shocker and you'll keep finding this out in future chapters. He did care for what Lisa felt in the start of their relationship but near the end he lost his feelings and the phucks he had about her. Usually in S.A club scenes poeple want to avoid the bar as much as possible. If you can afford to buy your night supply at the beginning of the night then you do that and enjoy your night. But then this is all based on my personal experiences. -
Watching Mikhail and David leave the club made me nervous. What if David decided to bash Mikhail? What if I had sent Mikhail to his death? I wouldn’t be able to live with myself if anything happened to him. I told myself to relax but I was never good at talking myself into doing this, so I took a shot and my thoughts seemed to clear up a little. Miranda had become a regular at the karaoke stage; she even got me to join her. It was a good night of ridiculous behaviour; Mike tried to make out with
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Marvin, David, and Mikhail are you trying to suggest a love triangle? IS that something you thing would happen? Other than that Thank you very much for your kind words I'll try keep everything exciting.
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I feel like he has his own reasons, and we'll find out soon enough.
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Thank you ... David and Mikhail are just, let's just wait for the next few chapters. The Burst condom thing will also be explored soon.
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I woke up the next morning to cheerful birds singing and a bright and warm sun shining. I got up from my bed and went off to the kitchen, where my parents were talking about some news article; apparently South African politicians never lived a dull life. I sat with them over breakfast discussing political matters, which was always the case, seeing as Dad loved preaching political awareness. My father, Damien Lucas, was born in Jamaica and moved to South Africa with his mother when he was ten ye
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*shrugs* I guess you'll have to stay tuned to see what get's him back to his drinking habits.
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David unlocked the door because he was initially going to let Mikhail go and he would remain in the bathroom, but something told him to just make out with Mikhail. I hope you enjoyed your trip to South Africa ... They all thought it was a joke until the driver came to pick him up. David is a chapter on his own, the chapter will come soon enough just to explain a few things David related. Maybe Marven related too. Who knows?
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David unlocked the door because he was initially going to let Mikhail go and he would remain in the bathroom, but something told him to just make out with Mikhail. I hope you enjoyed your trip to South Africa ... They all thought it was a joke until the driver came to pick him up. David is a chapter on his own, the chapter will come soon enough just to explain a few things David related.
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I'll give you the more you ask for, the answers to your questions will be found in the following chapters
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I think David is the hottest man even because of the control he takes in that scene. Mikhail isn't the most passive of people and to dominate him takes power and so much strength, David just turns me on.
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I cannot reveal too much but your favourite character is going to make a few returns. I cannot answer your question about Lisa being Marvin's beard because of I do, I'll be giving away enough to make me wanna assassinate you.
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hahahaha I think you are correct in raising this, because someone else might actually take offense. We, my friends and I, use the word nigga as a term of familiarity. I've witnessed several other social circles that do the same. On this side of the word I think the word nigga isn't so offensive as in America because it doesn't directly relate to us. But should someone use the word Kaffir, then that would be a different story.
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I wont spoil anything for you AC. The key concept in this story is intrigue, and I'll try not to lose it. Oh and I'm not sure what David was thinking,I'm sure he isn't sure what he was thinking Thank you for your review
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Thank you I'll make sure you still like it by the end.
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Thank you I'll make sure you still like it by the end.
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When I woke up the next morning I was experiencing a splitting headache and felt a horrible gust of nausea overtake me. At that moment I knew never to ever trust myself in making Veronica’s pre-hangover cure again. I stayed in bed, allowing the sun to bake me at least ten shades darker, because I forgot to close my curtains the night before. When I finally decided to get up it was 10 o’clock and I had approximately one hour before rehearsals started. I ran to the bathroom to take a quick shower,
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Mikhail is a young gay man going through life trying to ignore his biggest problem, but life won't allow him to escape. The story takes place in South Africa.
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On my way out of the bathroom, I stood, took my last look at the ravishing young man that looked ever so beautiful, and blew a kiss to him. It was ridiculous of me to always blow kisses to myself when I left the bathroom, but I loved it! I loved me! I opened the door and there David was within centimetres of me, ready to burst his urine. I kept my hand grasping the door and pulled it half-closed behind me. I pushed him back into the hallway. “You aren’t going to use this bathroom until you mak
