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To whom you are and who you may be I’ll always know you as my Chuma boy. For all I remember are words that were spoken with a voice so grazing. Words, that seemed to be the last for us. Though all I have are piercing eyes and an ever elusive image of your visage. I do know I love you dear. In all the moments where
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Loving the story, hating the father, but i guess the hatred for the father is expected. I have to say I giggled and smiled like a loon as I was reading this chapter in a taxi and I probably looked like such a nut job. I really love the way both Brody and Zack are when they are around each other, it makes the relationship even cuter than he is. Thank you for a good read, I'm loving the story thus far.
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It's not that he thinks Dave is his kind of man, but it's the kind of guy that he attracts in his life. I think his scared that every guy that comes into his life might be that way. He might be scared that he will constantly have men that want to control him and not just support and be with him freely. David has a truck load of issues. What even is that stunt he pulled? I feel as if he doesnt know his lane, good think Mik told him where to get off. I just hope it doesnt get awkward when they go clubbing together.
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I've got to say I love this review, it fed my creative juices. I hope you don't mind if I steal a few things from it,well more like develop something out of somethings you said.I want Brian and Mikhail to fix things but I don't trust them together, I think it would be a bad thing if they got together. But we'll only see in future chapters. As for David, his just a fucktard! He can honestly go sit on a cactus! But I love how Mik wasn't that involved with him so he can just move on. After all David was just a conquest for him, a sort of sexual experiment; seeing as Mik only knows one lover and wanted to explore his sexuality. Angelique was a bitch, but if it weren't for her pushing Mikhail, his singing wouldn't be as great as it is now. So he kinda owes her that much. And also I think Mik only holds grudges against Brian and not anyone else.
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I think the others didn't tell Angelique out of loyalty to Mikhail. After all if Mikhail wanted Ange to know then he'd have told her and stayed on the production. Also the reason he isn't mad at her is because he understands where she's coming from and understands his intentions are nothing but pure so the only thing he can do is show her she was wrong. YO, uhmm. Yo. LOL the David and Mikhail thing is complicated but let me try break it down. So, Mikhail wants in with David because he knows his scared; after Brian hurt him the way he did he isn't in the right space to trust anyone. So for him the meaningless sex is just an escape or defense mechanism (if I may put it that way). Besides we can't expect Mikhail, even though he still loves Brian, to go back to him. The poor boy was a mess after Brian did what he did. Most of his trust issues, which will be visible in later chapters, are because of that. P.s thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I love and appreciate your input.
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I literally just found this now *hides*... But I love how from the outside looking in Mikhail and Marv look like a couple and I'd love them to be so badly. They make so much sense together. But we'll see about that. As for Mikhail and Matt, I think they'll become close friends. I think Mik deserves a gay best friend, someone who can truly relate with him, other than Miranda of course.
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“You hermaphroditic bitch!!” “Wow, isn’t it too early for that kind of language?” I heard David’s gruff voice say. “Besides who you talking to?” he asked as he pulled me closer to him. “The sun, it keeps fucken waking me up. It is winter for crying out loud, why is it around?” “We're still a couple of days away from spring you know,” he said laughing at me. I just pushed him off the bed and gave him a scowl. He continued to laugh at me while on the floor. “While you're down there, give me my
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Waking up all I could think about is how annoying the sun was. Shit, it was winter and the sun was out in the early hours just to disrupt my sleep. I tossed and turned for the longest of time trying to get back to sleep, but to no avail. So, I decided to reach over to my bedside table and grab my phone, but ended up grabbing a crumpled up piece of paper. Oh yeah, that wasn’t a nightmare or part of some crazy lucid dream. I took the monstrous page and crumpled it up even more. Part of me wanted t
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Well Mikhail wanted the whole party thing to be a surprise so if he tells Angelique, there's no more surprise. Besides I added that there to show that sometimes overestimating yourself can come and bite you in the ass; remember M even said that Angie would never fire him because his so good. That's why he stuck to his guns, but Angelique served him a fresh batch of bugger off. The snub was unintended, Mikhail thought he and the waiter would get to talk later on. I'm pretty sure he feels bad about it. I too hope nothing bad will happen to him, and i hope he isn't getting terrorized at work by Connor. Do you have any suspicion as to who our mystery man can be?
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Last night’s rehearsals of our little musical surprise for Angelique and Pierre were a mess. I guess expecting everyone to be able to both sing and dance was crazy. But we ended the flop practise session by dividing people into groups. Naturally I was the leader of the pack, Monica was going to take over the dancers, and Paul would do the singers, seeing as he was taking lead. I was to choreograph the entire sequence of events. So when I woke up on that Thursday the first thing I did was draw up
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Red Running Shoes by Aditus
Grunge_Ken replied to Aditus's topic in Promoted Author Discussion Forum
I'm hooked on this story! It's like a damn drug. To be honest I feel Jonah and Ren make more sense. Sandro is sweet and all but I don't think Jonah will be truly his, especially after finding out the truth. I am so happy this happened, I look forward to the next few chapters. P.s I understand Ren's reaction to being accused of cheating. I mean dammit the man has an ode to you, tattooed to his neck, what more do you want? Sometimes I just want to punch Jonah, but i guess i understand his trust issues as well. Sometimes there isn't enough proof to stop you from wanting to protect yourself. But looks like he got himself hurt, but running instead of confronting shit head on. I do love your story so much, I look forward to each and every single chapter to come- 588 replies
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Maybe or maybe we get something even more cryptic.
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I place myself comfortably under an old oak tree. In all honesty things haven’t been going great. That’s why I took this drive down here; to visit a familiar spot that was always able to nurture me and make me feel better. I’m perched on top of a steep hill that probably has the best view of the sunset, the warm colours that adorn the sky. The red that plays off the orange, which mysteriously has a tinge of blue, and the sun is no longer red but a bright gold. My thoughts start to fill my mind a
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Thank you so much for your kind words AC. You know what I like the idea of David waking up and realizing his in love and then come out. Maybe i can use it. You know sometimes the most dangerous things in life, are the most fun and/or delicious. Delicious not just in actual taste but, delicious in the sense of the thrill of it all. David is to some degree good for Mikhail, and that degree is the sexual kind Other than that, we all have to sit and wait for things to happen as they happen...
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This was the first story I read when I joined GA. I have to say it was and still is one of the most beautiful stories I've ever read. It is a well written, inspiring story of love and friendship. It breaks my heart that it ended. Mr Templeton; I honestly believe he was screwing that sleeze bag, Candy, that drugged and raped Billy. I honestly would put it past him. Maybe the reason Mr Templeton kept sending Billy to work at the other farm was so that that slut can rape him again; this would be driven by the fact that he might see what is going on between Billy and David. As much as I hate him I enjoy the dynamic he brings, I just wish he was more evil and less aggressive. The Walker situation is just the best. I love the principle behind his silence. I think I might apply that in my life too, but in regards to certain things. I love this story and it will also be a great read for me. Especially because of the relationships that exists and how the entire story develops
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This entire story has me by the balls, it's just so damn good. I cannot wait till the next chapter. The relationship between Dave and Barry is so beautiful, the only physical love they need is the most innocent form. Argh, I just love the way you depict their relationship; it shows that relationships can function well with intimacy and with no sex. As for the boys. They are very great characters, I just adore the way the are when it comes to their father despite everything. Most kids would've thrown tantrums and not spoken to their fathers but this, they, are refreshing. Thank you for a good read.
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This is such a great story. I think I've read it three times already. I'm hoping for a new chapter, i know i might be asking for too much, but it would be totally awesome to see how things go from there on.
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Thank you so much for your kind words. I love creating moments where the audience knows more than the characters, that way it builds the suspense. It leaves you asking, "when is he gonna find out?" "How is he gonna react?" I love that you are still hooked on the story, it means a lot to me. The next few chapters are gonna start to make things add up for everyone. There's a storm coming and you want to witness it
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Wednesday morning, I woke up trying to recall what the hell I did to get myself that tired. I thought about the night and day before, but nothing came to me. I finally settled for the fact that I had had a bad dream; I once read somewhere that bad dreams tire you out. But I wished for the life of me I remembered the dream. Argh, fuck it! I’ve got to get up and get ready for work. I got up that morning after a constant back and forth with myself about calling in sick at work, because of how tire
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Monday came, and I woke up with a big smile on my face. I had a wonderful dream about Trackside Slump; I dreamt I was a gracious dancer and sang like an angle. It was such a fantastic dream that it had me eager to go to rehearsals. But first, I had to get ready. I did everything with a hop and a little melody, it wasn’t until I was moisturising my legs that I realised – it was only 08:00 and rehearsals were going to start at 13:00. I felt a bit discouraged by that fact, but I got more excited by
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OMFW! Next chapter please! What happens next? I read all the chapters and i have to say I love this story! It's so gripping and so damn good! I think Marco is jealous of what Evert has with Andy that's why he attacked Evert. I'd love to get to know Marco better, the whole bad boy thing he has is kind of a turn on Daniel enjoyed watching them but he was tense about Evert being gay? Hmm this adds a new dynamic to the whole story and the relationship. Maybe Marco can meet Daniel in the gay hangout spot and have hot closeted sex together? No?
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:"D thank you so much, that means a lot to me. I'll try to make sure that everything stays intriguing even when new/old relationships end.
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Such reviews motivate me to keep on writing. Thank you so much for reading. The family dynamic is important to showcase because in the next few chapters, a few things will come up that lead to something big happening I think Miranda lying abut her orientation is fun and it will be explored later keep your eyes peeled and expect the unexpected.
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I woke up in Brian’s arms at around 06:00; I enjoyed being in his arms. My mind kept going over the night before; every feeling when we kissed, every touch, every word, and all the memories that came back as we lay in bed making jokes and horsing around. I could feel that what he and I had wasn’t over, we still felt strongly for one another, but I wasn’t sure whether that one night would bring us back together. Brian seemed peaceful, as he slept his eyelids appeared to conceal his thoughts and
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I enjoyed the way you made the twins' encounter so casual, just like every run of the mill high school meet up. I love what is blooming between Luca and Micah, I honestly hope they end up lovers, they both seem so sweet I'm not sure if you have this planned already, but maybe a chapter detailing Samael's life would be nice. Just as a way of showcasing the two different ways they were raised. Maybe leading up to him calling Micah over to ask him why he "did that". Either way, I'm really intrigued by the story i wanna read more
