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Excellent I was yelling at Taryn to run like hell and get out of there, but then he would have never met Justin and fallen in love with him, and eventually change him, keep up the excellent work.
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WOW This so AWESOME, I am so tensed thought for sure there would be a big battle, or the building coming down to the ground, I am very glad no one got hurt yet MORE MORE.
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Another Awesome Chapter! great chatter between the lovers, but a translation of the new language is needed, the plan for a party is ok except for the alcohol. wake up smell the roses and pump out more chapters. while I am waiting I am BBQing a Boston Pork-Butt, the smell is driving me crazy, I marinated it in Cognac and spiced Rum want a taste???.
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Awesomely written reading this chapter and the last chapter, I found out I have not been doing things correctly during sex, like not growling, low humming, yelling at my partner to do it harder or reciting the alphabet backwards and other things, but I know how to cook, by the way I just remembered something that happened in another chapter, why wasn't Ben's hand checked out by a doctor? I just hope nothing serious happens to his hand.
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please do not stop this is perfect as it is now, I love the side-effects of the meds. Asher was so funny seeing his grandmother as the president asking her shouldn't she be doing president things? and thinking Ben was his astronaut boyfriend, and wanted to keep his elbow LOL I could use some of the stuff used on Asher what a trip.
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Excellent, I was hoping you would take a different direction, while continuing your story with some suggestions I sent to you. and a few more, like having a few rouge Vampires destroy Michael and Trever. and another idea that one of the guys who clean up after feeding would turnout to be a Heart Transplant Specialist, who just happen to come upon Dylan and switched him with a another Vampire and brought Dylan to a hospital or some place where he repaired the wounds on Dylan and gave a new heart to Dylan then after he was well enough sent him home to his vampire friends.
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My first chapter review was going to be longer, but I decided against it because I did not wanted it to be reported as too violent, and may be get my self banned for ever
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Trevor believes he is the god's gift to vampires.
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perfect
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Great!!
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Excellent
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Very awesome
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Awesome again!! what was ordered at the dinner was not enough, they should have added four or six strips of crispy bacon three or four sausages with about four or six eggs over easy now that's a meal. I rally can not understand their overly shyness about going together as boyfriends, but that shyness disappeared with Ben when skyping with Fiona, this place here the authors wait very long to put the boyfriends together or into a sexual relationship having sex. other authors have it done by the second chapters I hope the wait is really worth it, please stop teasing me I can not take it.
