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Jordan and Cody Chapter 1
Ray169 commented on connorwhite104's story chapter in Jordan and Cody Chapter 1
Excellent chapter I don't mind any small goofs, I like the way Cody and Jordan became boyfriends so fast just like they were destined to be together. Both boys share the same broken family life. the little hint with the bad dream of things to come, I hope it works that Cody or Jordan does not get killed, -
Excellent Poem Connor!! After looking in the corner I would ditch the demons, walk up to you and talk to you so that I may get to know you, attracted by the mysterious beauty sitting there and ask you for a date and hopefully get to know better.
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People who are in love should love who they please, and not care what society thinks, far too many people in this world are judgmental when it comes to love between male and female or the same sex, true love is no ones business but the two people in love.
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WOW This story is so AWESOME!!! keep up the great work.
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Excellent chapter but it is some where in the middle, what you have written about Were -Wolfs are totally different from what I know about Were -Wolfs. There are Alphas and beta the Alphas can have any beta he chooses but the betas are allowed to have a mate of their choosing Male or Female. DEX OR DAX is nuts, but I love his pet name GOO GOO for Wesley,
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loving the story even with the so called goofs I was asking my self what happened to Joshua's brother after reading the reviews I know they were split and sent to different families will he appear in the story?
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Excellent Prologue many tears came down, please keep the chapters coming, I am hoping for a beautiful love story with the twins
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A Touching Video From A Boy Named Grant...
Ray169 replied to Comicality's topic in Comicality's Shack Clubhouse's Cafe
Thanks Ron & Lisa, Yes I have a new family and Luke their wonderful Son treats me like A VIP, we share a special gift hearing each other's thoughts his family has the same gift, it is fun when we do our thing(sex) in bed or where ever we choose, it is strange I know and read in some peoples stories that gift is used in the writings, but we know what gift we have is real. -
A Touching Video From A Boy Named Grant...
Ray169 replied to Comicality's topic in Comicality's Shack Clubhouse's Cafe
I really don't know they cut off all contact, changed their phone numbers, and moved to who knows where? they even went as far to have a funeral for me. I wonder who or what is in the coffin ? -
Comsie's favorite toy growing up! :P
Ray169 replied to Comicality's topic in Comicality's Shack Clubhouse's Cafe
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A Touching Video From A Boy Named Grant...
Ray169 replied to Comicality's topic in Comicality's Shack Clubhouse's Cafe
After coming out to my family they disowned me and asked me to pack and leave home. I had moved in with my new boy friend and his family, they are so awesome and very supportive of Luke and me. When we turned 18 we moved into a place of our own, and we are very happy together. The Videos are great. Ray. -
AWESOME video hope to see more of the boys
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Excellent story one of your best keep up the great work, I lover the entire story. read it on your other site.
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Excellent start!! could this story and others be about you? I like the Idea of two journals and talking to the book, Billy can be funny at times and keep up the great work.
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I really love most all of your stories, when I review a story or chapter I review it from my heart, trying to help the author better themselves if I can, mostly with suggestions for improving the story or hoping that what I review the author will not change their story, I have not yet found any other stories that needed any improvement, all are excellent in their own way.
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Ok skipping chapters because I read this book 3 times and I truly love it remix takes away from the authenticity of the story, sorry but that's my opinion. The story is still excellently written as it was, in spite of a few minor misspellings. I have read all of your other stories that you posted in the other place. I loved all but the one I told you about please keep writing. I have been viewing old movies by Alfred Hitchcock, and some of your stories are very much like his style of movies.
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Chapter 2 - Dream Out Of Reach
Ray169 commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 2 - Dream Out Of Reach
Excellent chapter again!! two people have the love sick fever bad. trying not to give any thing away, for any new readers and or reviewers. -
Chapter 1 - YouTube Cruising
Ray169 commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 1 - YouTube Cruising
Excellent Chapter so funny, must read all chapters Tristan is cool and Lori even cooler. -
Excellent Start will read more soon
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Excellent chapter please write more I can hardly wait for more, but from your profile update I will have to wait about a month.
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Excellent chapter sounds like Silas has unresolved issues, may be with someone other than Chad, and feels he needs to resolve them but has no Idea how to do it, but they are somehow linked to Chad. I hope Chad stays away from his home town even if people there moved on with their anger and embarrassment with Chad and his ex wife. No good can come from going back. this story reminds me of some much younger teen boys even pre-teen stories that I have been reading because Roy's behavior is just like them almost like spoiled children being so afraid of love and a fear of what others will think or say, but the three women are guiding Roy in the right direction.
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WOW!! now it all comes out in the open, I thing that Peterson needs to start dating Paul or the flirt. one or the other would fit well with Peterson, Roy and Chad need come to terms with each other every one knows but them, the letter could be a letter from the ex of Chad wishing him well, or a letter from Chad ex boy friend letting Chad know it is ok to move on, with a new boy friend.
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WOW I wonder if Peterson may be like Chad a married closeted Gay man.
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HUMMM!! I am not trusting Peterson, I believe he is like Lonnie, when I spoke of Tyrell in the last review I was meant to talk of Lonnie. Wow a visit from Justin and his girlfriend, I have a sneaky suspicion of Peterson being a plant, has he been listening to private conversations between the boss and employees, how did he know of Chad having use of Roy's home. I don't think Chad said any thing to Peterson, especially when they don't get along.
