Ray169

Excellent chapter I don't mind any small goofs, I like the way Cody and Jordan became boyfriends so fast just like they were destined to be together. Both boys share the same broken family life. the little hint with the bad dream of things to come, I hope it works that Cody or Jordan does not get killed,

Excellent Poem Connor!! After looking in the corner I would ditch the demons, walk up to you and talk to you so that I may get to know you, attracted by the mysterious beauty sitting there and ask you for a date and hopefully get to know better.

People who are in love should love who they please, and not care what society thinks, far too many people in this world are judgmental when it comes to love between male and female or the same sex, true love is no ones business but the two people in love.

WOW This story is so AWESOME!!! keep up the great work.

Excellent chapter but it is some where in the middle, what you have written about Were -Wolfs are totally different from what I know about Were -Wolfs. There are Alphas and beta the Alphas can have any beta he chooses but the betas are allowed to have a mate of their choosing Male or Female. DEX OR DAX is nuts, but I love his pet name GOO GOO for Wesley,

loving the story even with the so called goofs I was asking my self what happened to Joshua's brother after reading the reviews I know they were split and sent to different families will he appear in the story?

Excellent Prologue many tears came down, please keep the chapters coming, I am hoping for a beautiful love story with the twins

Thanks Ron & Lisa, Yes I have a new family and Luke their wonderful Son treats me like A VIP, we share a special gift hearing each other's thoughts his family has the same gift, it is fun when we do our thing(sex) in bed or where ever we choose, it is strange I know and read in some peoples stories that gift is used in the writings, but we know what gift we have is real.

I really don't know they cut off all contact, changed their phone numbers, and moved to who knows where? they even went as far to have a funeral for me. I wonder who or what is in the coffin ?

I plead the 5th

After coming out to my family they disowned me and asked me to pack and leave home. I had moved in with my new boy friend and his family, they are so awesome and very supportive of Luke and me. When we turned 18 we moved into a place of our own, and we are very happy together. The Videos are great. Ray.

AWESOME video hope to see more of the boys

great start

Excellent story one of your best keep up the great work, I lover the entire story. read it on your other site.

Excellent start!! could this story and others be about you? I like the Idea of two journals and talking to the book, Billy can be funny at times and keep up the great work.