Dunbess

O'h Magoo you've done it again.

I love a great speech and in my head I was adding to it in my own words, and they were not exactly for delicate ears. Now, grabbing the family jewels I felt it, groaned and when I looked down into my lap I was experiencing it. Great chapter full of emotion I bet writing that released some anger. Well done, now where do you go from here?

Absolutely nothing to do with me, you had already planned it, great story by the way

“YOU MISERABLE FUCKING BITCH! DON’T YOU DARE TOUCH MY BROTHER”! Kick ass ending, bring it on. lolol

Since Miss McKendry is a dinky-die Aussie with an accent thick as a kangaroo′s tail, she was hexed from the start. lololol

Keep up the good work Jim. I am enjoying this story so much I crave more. Your words always touch my heart and what an amazing talent. Keep it up. (Your mate.)

Hi this is Duncan from Australia, just getting the feel here then I hope to read some great books cheers