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Chapter 10- Owin's Return, part 2
Thirdly commented on Thirdly's story chapter in Chapter 10- Owin's Return, part 2
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Chapter 10- Owin's Return, part 2
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I heard the Vis mention something about a platonic bond as I walked through the door. I glanced up and down the hallway and saw no sign of Emery. Could he have gone to his room? I decided to check just in case. Was the door open? Yes. He was there. His tall figure was leaning against the wall as he glanced out the window. I let out a sigh of relief. "Emery, may I have a word?" I called out. "For once, I don't wish to hear what you have to say." The coldness in his t
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Chapter 9- Owin's Return, part 1
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🤣The next post is but a day away. Patience. -
Chapter 9- Owin's Return, part 1
Thirdly commented on Thirdly's story chapter in Chapter 9- Owin's Return, part 1
Yes! The lightning strike did stunt his Progression. I never explained that part to anyone. Alas, it gets worse before getting better. But, have some trust in me. -
Chapter 9- Owin's Return, part 1
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That's basically what Rhyad was trying to goad him into realizing. -
Warning: A thirsty Rhyad. An intersex omega in heat? My head, neck, and part of my shoulder ached when I stirred awake. I had the strangest dream about massive fish singing and dancing on top of river boulders. My lungs expanded as I took a deep breath, and the scent of Cojalis tickled my nose. I shifted in place, my bare feet sliding along soft satin sheets. The urge to bury my nose into one of the satin sheets was followed by the actual act. An ache in my lower stomach and a strange
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Chapter 8- Favored by Dawn, part 2
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Well, we’re supposed to space updates at least 8 hours apart. -
Chapter 8- Favored by Dawn, part 2
Thirdly commented on Thirdly's story chapter in Chapter 8- Favored by Dawn, part 2
Soon. As in Sunday. 😅 -
Excuse my language but: goddamn, do you write pretty. The comparisons are elegant or gritty when they need to be. I wish I could better explain why I like it so much…
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Warning: Fierce cramps? Lucio was busy, along with the rest of the kitchen staff. They had to divide themselves into two teams: one group to provide specialized soups and beverages for Vis Sepherus under Eld Emery's instructions; the other to provide lunch and dinner to everyone else in the estate. When I had stopped by the kitchen, the blond barely had enough time to shove a bowl full of arecs and a jug of water in my arms before getting back to work. Sometime later, I found myself c
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Chapter 7- Favored by Dawn, part 1
Thirdly commented on Thirdly's story chapter in Chapter 7- Favored by Dawn, part 1
Yes. Kasia is essentially what drew Seph and Emery further together as friends/brothers. They are trying to fulfill her dying wishes...1. Seph settling down. 2. Emery teaching Seph how to handle the estate. 3. Keeping a section of the gardens open to the public...because Kasia felt that gardens are meant to be admired (little did they realize that omegas would take advantage of the free space to run amock). -
*yawns and stretches* Just woke up and came across this. Might be late for work, but it was worth getting to the end of the chapter. I look forward to reading more when I get back home this afternoon!
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Chapter 7- Favored by Dawn, part 1
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Yes, they eventually do. -
On the way back, I wondered how our patron's admirers would react when my brother moved in as his mate. Would they finally stop chasing him around? I ignored the tiny thumb of pain in my chest at the thought. My mind brought forth the memory of the Vis's scent. Rain, pine, Cojalis...wait, that wasn't right. When had I caught a whiff of Cojalis? A frown formed on my face, and I decided that my plant assignments must have been subconsciously urging me to study the samples I had been given. ::
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"Rhyad." My wide eyes sought out the Scholar. I was more distracted than I had any right to be. Eld Emery deserved my complete focus while he taught. However, my thoughts kept drifting back to the events of the day before. When I was a whelp, I felt that my problems and behaviors would somehow sort themselves when I became an adult wyvern. The way I had hidden in shame under the scolding of my mother was a reaction I had duped myself into believing was long gone. "Eld Emery, is there a
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Chapter 5- Trust and Loyalty
Thirdly commented on Thirdly's story chapter in Chapter 5- Trust and Loyalty
Agreed! Some couples have kids they don’t want while other couples that long for kids can’t have their own. And thank you! I love drawing dragons and their variations. -
Chapter 5- Trust and Loyalty
Thirdly commented on Thirdly's story chapter in Chapter 5- Trust and Loyalty
Wes, I don't think I'll ever get that image out of my head, his mother being pushed off a balcony.🤣 And, yes! To anyone outside their culture, Rhyad looks awesome. I had actually designed his wyvern form with several pens while at work, so I'm proud of the original sketch, as well. -
Warning: Body shaming? Out of the impressive spread of fruits and pastries laid out on the table that morning, I immediately went for the arecs. The fruits had already been split open, revealing the semi-sweet juice inside. I drank the fluid first and then took an eager bite. The flesh of the arec gave way quickly into a satisfying crunch. Arecs grew on the far edges of the land, and Owin would always bring me a sackful. "Anya's cef-turnovers are the best I've ever tasted, and yet, I'v
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Chapter 4- Old Scars, part 2
Thirdly commented on Thirdly's story chapter in Chapter 4- Old Scars, part 2
Agreed! The brothers (Owin and Rhyad) are much kinder than them. -
Chapter 4- Old Scars, part 2
Thirdly commented on Thirdly's story chapter in Chapter 4- Old Scars, part 2
Is that ‘ooh’ as in ‘that’s why’ or as in ‘he’s in trouble’ ? -
Warning: A stolen kiss. Scars. Unexpected sniffing? When I came to, I could have sworn that I felt something slide across my lips. I took in the scent of a plant I had been studying. What was the name? Cojalis? When I opened my eyes, I saw Vis Sepherus standing a few steps away with his back towards me. I must have surely been imagining things. The blasted dreams were seeping into my consciousness. "Here, drink this," Eld Emery urged as he rushed over to hand me a glass full of a brown
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Chapter 3- Old Scars, part 1
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Exactly! It’s not like he’s a penguin. 🤣 -
Chapter 2- Autumn Ash Roses
Thirdly commented on Thirdly's story chapter in Chapter 2- Autumn Ash Roses
It was a little bit of everything...Rhyad feeling less than his brother, tutors unwilling to teach another kid for free...and the fact that he turned out to be an average beta instead of a more coveted omega made the parents think ‘we’re not getting much of a return in this investment’ -
Chapter 1- Entering the Estate
Thirdly commented on Thirdly's story chapter in Chapter 1- Entering the Estate
Agreed.
