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I cried after reading Isabella's letter. I don't remember crying the last time I read this, but it's so touching.

Wow. What a chapter

Yes! Finally an update! Can't wait to see what happens

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This chapter was glorious! Finally!!!! Everything is being set straight!

Suddenly wanted to read this again. Really love this story

Oh, little do you know little Corey. Little do you know. haha, I'm talking like I know what's going to happen.

Charlayyyy!!!! That's a relief. Not sure what's going to happen next, but I'm wondering if there's something sinister going on with Kye's father (I seriously hope not) and I hope there's nothing up with Tareth either >.<

oh no...I had this foreboding inkling that the spy was Tareth....please tell me that's not true TT

It's over?? Well, honestly, I liked how you left most of the details to my imagination. Makes it short and sweet.

This chapter was so cute

Saghir makes my heart go soft. It's really strange how even though this story is in a made up fantasy world, the issues the characters face can be so easily taken and applied to our world. This story is really beautiful.

Jesus. I was holding my breath at the last part. Now I wonder what Ash is going to do with this info. Also, it seems painfully obvious Charlie is the spy (unless I'm wrong, then why did Charlie do any of the things he did) that I'm confused as to why Kye doesn't even suspect it's Charlie.

Definitely chuckled at the dense full beard haha

I started reading at book 2 and realized there was a book 1. This story is great!