Loved this story - looking forward to following the rest of it. You have a wonderfully descriptive and natural writing style that makes me feel like I'm a spectator at the scene. The way you write dialogue realistically is like listening in to an actual conversation.
Good morning - just joined the site. I'm a gay male, 55 years old, living in rural Ontario, Canada. I'm looking for good quality gay fiction and hope to post some of my own writing eventually for feedback. I'm looking forward to the experience.