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  1. I really hope Alex has not been involved with Nathan, but in the last 2 chapters the possibility was hinted in the athmosphere with Alex gone to see "Jenny".. Please don't make that happen lol I like Alex for Robbie and he could turn into a great bf with some time, both have issues they need to work with but time and will make things happen.
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    Chapter 1

    Mooi is such an adequate title for this story.. Trully beautiful, touching and full of soul. Thank you for making my day brighter!
  3. Fantastic chapter as always!! I have missed sophie but Neil and Kevin did need that alone time together! The whole pub evening had me so mad... and when Kevin comes back home after work and asks Neil about the future operation and what might happen, how he pours all his feelings out..It has left me all "whoa". Quite the cliffhanger Edward!!
  4. Such a sweet chapter! I see Neil as manager of Excelsior, living with Kevin and Sophie in Scotland... Sophie is someone you don't want to mess with, that "forgotten" toy of hers..LOL. Now I can't wait to see what happens next but meh, I am a happy camper. Happy easter to all of you wonderful people and specially to you, Edward for putting a smile on me whenever I see Team Building has been updated.
  5. I found writing a review therapeutical LOL. Don't be sad peeps, it will all turn out well, now I just can't wait till the next chapter so I can see how the shit starts to get fixed. Keep the faith!
  6. I feel the same. I liked Cam a lot, it was cool seeing Neil happy, I really hope his back gets fixed, and about the rest, I just don't know what to think.. Mr. EBWilson, that was quite the curve ball you just threw at us LOL
  7. I think I need my TB fix, it's been a week and I've been a good boy.
  8. So, sexy Cam is back. The plot thickens.. I can see Neil being "mostly" happy with the guy, them getting cozy and then... Kevin Bloody Ross!! We are up to interesting times!
  9. I think Timothy has a point, Kevin is the bachelor to catch in his hometown, good looking, from a good family too, hero, he even was the designated guy for that christmas thing at the laird's household (can't remember the name lol) and all of it makes him the perfect trophy husband to show off at events and such. I don't know if Connie loves him or not but he seems like the kind of guy to marry in a "shallow-make the perfect marriage postcard" way.
  10. I think Peter or maybe even Hamish might help, Sophie too, but yeah, the ball is now in Kevin's court. If I were Neil I'd just call that underwear model he banged in the first chapter and be done with the scotish twat
  11. I think you are absolutely right, the old Neil gave Kevin an easy way out and the option of putting his "feelings/atrraction" back in the closet but the new Neil challenges that and it seems like he is not ready to accept a lot of things..
  12. So much has changed in the story... When it started Neil was a bit of a self centered asshole (a loveable one though) and Kevin was, well, Kevin, but he was mostly ok.. Now chapter after chapter we have seen Neil grow up and change, becoming a sweet guy, putting his shit together but Kevin.. He deffinitely sticks to the scotish twat nametag these days. It's understandable being closeted and afraid, but he might as well stop mind fucking Neil, grow a pair and start being a man, it's about time.. This being said, I am not in a hurry to see this happening because this would probably mean the end of the story and that is something I'll be very sad to see happening so, Mr. EBWilson, please be kind to us readers and allows us to enjoy a wee bit longer or have some new and brilliant story ready to fight the withdrawal syndrome some of us are going to face when this is over and above all, thank you <3
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