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Dan! Wow great story. I spent most of the weekend reading the entire thing. I had to wait until it was finished to start it. I simply loved it. I look forward to the next book in this series. Thanks so much for sharing your talent with all of us. ORN Richard

I really enjoyed Chapter 7. I like seeing how the characters think and react to different circumstances. I can't wait for more! Thanks, ORN Richard

Well done, Dan. I am hoping there is enough HARD evidence that GW Bush et al basically ignored all the warnings and you show us him be impeached or something for Sept 11th. That would make for a wonderful next chapter. Keep up the great work! Thanks, ORN Richard

Wow Dan! I really liked this chapter. I can't help but wonder how much better many things would be here in the US if those few changes could have been made politically in 1992-1994. I am glad to see I am not the only person that remembered Sam Nun and his antics. I can remember watching those senate hearings. This was a great chapter. I like the flow of it and it is full of nice changes and moves things along quickly. I can't wait to see how you will end this all. ORN Richard

A good chapter Dan. Not a lot os substance, but it showed everything settled and in place. Things are as we might hope they would be. Great work. Richard ORN

Hi, I am a bit confused about what is going on Dan. I wasn't in the chat so have no idea what happened. I wish you would reconsider. Otherwise, I wanted to thank you for the hours of pleasure you have given me and several friends. I wish you the best and good luck in all that you do. Sincerely, Richard ORN

Wow, holy hardon, Batman....That was unexpected and quite exciting...., now to take care of this "problem" that his risen to my attention. Well done! ORN Richard

Hmmm I am not sure what you are talking about. I didn't read any of this in the new chapter. What is going on here?

Wow, my head is still spinning. I wasn't sure how the headaches and other loose ends would change things. This was simply a great chapter. I am left curious what contact he had with Brian, Sean and others when he was back to being a "normal" boy from ages 8-12. Did just being himself setup a close future with the other old friends? I can't wait for the next chapter! Thanks Dan! ORN Richard

Not sure where this "Chat" option is, but I am known for missing the obvious at time! ORN Richard

Is this for real? ORN Richard

I really liked the last chapter. I always love it when Davey confronts some adult with his 12 year old body and 60 year old brain! Keep up the great work, Dan. As always, I look forward to more ORN Richard

Excellent chapter, Dan. As always, I look forward to more. I keep meaning to ask, do you plan to work on DoT anymore? I love that story. What is the status and your plans for it? Thanks in advance, Be well, Richard ORN

Very interesting twist to the whole "Dad" relationship there, Dan. I really like how you are reinventing this whole story in its current incarnation, along with subtle as well as big changes. I admit, it has me looking forward to more and more and more..... ORN Richard

This is a nice story, Dom. I also love reading yours as well. Keep up the great work! ORN Richard