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Dan! Wow great story. I spent most of the weekend reading the entire thing. I had to wait until it was finished to start it. I simply loved it. I look forward to the next book in this series. Thanks so much for sharing your talent with all of us. ORN Richard

I really enjoyed Chapter 7. I like seeing how the characters think and react to different circumstances. I can't wait for more! Thanks, ORN Richard

Well done, Dan. I am hoping there is enough HARD evidence that GW Bush et al basically ignored all the warnings and you show us him be impeached or something for Sept 11th. That would make for a wonderful next chapter. Keep up the great work! Thanks, ORN Richard

Wow Dan! I really liked this chapter. I can't help but wonder how much better many things would be here in the US if those few changes could have been made politically in 1992-1994. I am glad to see I am not the only person that remembered Sam Nun and his antics. I can remember watching those senate hearings. This was a great chapter. I like the flow of it and it is full of nice changes and moves things along quickly. I can't wait to see how you will end this all. ORN Richard

A good chapter Dan. Not a lot os substance, but it showed everything settled and in place. Things are as we might hope they would be. Great work. Richard ORN

Hi, I am a bit confused about what is going on Dan. I wasn't in the chat so have no idea what happened. I wish you would reconsider. Otherwise, I wanted to thank you for the hours of pleasure you have given me and several friends. I wish you the best and good luck in all that you do. Sincerely, Richard ORN

Wow, holy hardon, Batman....That was unexpected and quite exciting...., now to take care of this "problem" that his risen to my attention. Well done! ORN Richard

Hmmm I am not sure what you are talking about. I didn't read any of this in the new chapter. What is going on here?

Wow, my head is still spinning. I wasn't sure how the headaches and other loose ends would change things. This was simply a great chapter. I am left curious what contact he had with Brian, Sean and others when he was back to being a "normal" boy from ages 8-12. Did just being himself setup a close future with the other old friends? I can't wait for the next chapter! Thanks Dan! ORN Richard

Not sure where this "Chat" option is, but I am known for missing the obvious at time! ORN Richard

Is this for real? ORN Richard

I really liked the last chapter. I always love it when Davey confronts some adult with his 12 year old body and 60 year old brain! Keep up the great work, Dan. As always, I look forward to more ORN Richard

Excellent chapter, Dan. As always, I look forward to more. I keep meaning to ask, do you plan to work on DoT anymore? I love that story. What is the status and your plans for it? Thanks in advance, Be well, Richard ORN

Very interesting twist to the whole "Dad" relationship there, Dan. I really like how you are reinventing this whole story in its current incarnation, along with subtle as well as big changes. I admit, it has me looking forward to more and more and more..... ORN Richard

This is a nice story, Dom. I also love reading yours as well. Keep up the great work! ORN Richard

Very interesting chapter, Dan. As I recall, George HW Bush was once head of the CIA as well as a diplomat. I guess you are exploring some different tactics he might have used, had he been in charge of Davey all along? I truely love how you show Davey speaking to all these adults with a clear head, and intelligent words. I sit here laughing imagining how adults in this situation must be wondering who the hell this kid is, talking and acting like this in a confrontational situation. Keep up the good work Dan. I am enjoying this story and love the premise. Be well, Richard ORN

Wow, I love it so far. I can't wait to see how this one goes ORN Richard

I am following the same stories, Myr, along with Perry and Jesse. I tend to prefer stories already completed, before reading. I do so much reading, I tend to get facts all mixed up, so reading a story straight through in a few nights is normally best for me. It often frustrates me to keep waiting for another chapter to be added, and after a while I tend to forget the stories I was following....there are tons of things I have enjoyed over the years yet lost track of them along the way. I appreciate any and all suggestions for new material. I check this site many times most days, hoping for a new chapter from Dan, or a new suggestion to check out. ORN Richard

LOL Dan, you nailed this one. You sure you didn't participate in some mad-scientist's experiment and come back in time ...? It would answer how you predicted this happening heheheeh.... ORN Richard

Excellent, Dan! I loved this story. I read Mists of Fate many months ago. I enjoyed it as well. What sort of changes are you making to it before republishing it here on this site? Any major rewriting or just some tweeks? I am still looking forward to DoT as well. I am afraid I will have to reread it, I have forgotten so much about it with my reading other things. I think you should consider publishing these works in book form. Surely some company would love to have your talents. I would gladly buy them if that were an option. I buy books almost every month, and short of Robert Jordan's The Wheel of Time series, I prefer your writing above all the ones I have purchased. Keep up the great work. I am so happy to have stumbled across this wonderful site. The stories here have entertained me for countless hours. Be well, Richard ORN

I can't wait for DoT to have more chapters released. I understand the need to take a break and work on other areas, but DAN!! You have written DO and VAMP (which I enjoy as well) while we have all been waiting on you to finish your other projects. Spend a little time on DoT for all of us Richard ORN

Wow, 38 is.....hmm, lets say I like it and can't wait for more. I assume this ends with 40, since those two chapters are listed, but no yet available? Merry Christmas all, and thanks for all the hard work, Dan, Myr and everyone else on here Richard ORN

Dan! I am loving this, lots of action and suspense. Cant wait for more.... Richard ORN

Dan, I am really enjoying this story as well. I hate you are making us all wait to see how "Dawn of Tears" ends up, but this is a really fun story to read. As always, I am looking forward to more. Keep up the great work! Richard ORN

Hi Dan, I just reread DoT. I really enjoy the story. I look forward to more of it. I hope things settle for you enough to continue this! ORN Richard