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  1. Luiz

    Back to school

    Hi. Thanks for you encouragement and nice comment. Well, here it's in June... and June ain't summer everywhere.. it's freakin cold here.. it seems I'm very far away.. but I'm glad you like my writing that got to reach far there. Looking forward to next comment.. I mean if it's good enough for you to continue reading Thanks again =D
  2. Monday arrived and it usually sucks. It always seems cold and dark, even if it’s a sunny morning, but not that day. Would I get to see Nick before classes…? Nick… so beautiful… I was already picturing him in front of school, blond hair brushing against the wind, so very light hazel eyes, almost like a tiger gaze, but so much softer with kindness… he could be part of a boy band, he could be a model, for underwear, for glasses, sunglasses, for a shampoo company… Before leaving to school I said I
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    The extra attention

    Hi. Thanks for keep reading of mine. Now that I finished college I quitted teaching English, but that's what I used to do to pay college expenses 'though I've never been to the US (a future dream *.*) Thanks for you kind compliment. I chose writing in English 'cause it sure can reach more people... it's like I'm talking about my ideas/feelings, to more people.. and I don't know, it's like my true love thoughts are in English or something like that.. maybe it's 'cause all the good movies with beautiful loving people and stories I use to watch are in English BTW,chapter 3 is posted!
  4. Luiz

    The injury

    Hey, Wanna check if the stuff to be built on is really good as in your kind reply? Chapter 4 is posted! Thank you for your kind words... looking forward for more nice words... I can get used to it
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    The injury

    Hello. Hey, nice you get to look at the guys as 'real people'.. to start 'liking them'. I see them like that as well.. sometimes they're the only one who can understand me... for example, tonight it's valentine's day around here. I hope I don't have to sprain my ankle to find some hunk LOL BTW, chapter 4 is posted Thank you again for your kindness =D
  6. Luiz

    The injury

    Hey, thank you. Chapter 4 is posted =D
  7. It wasn’t good missing a school day. I mean, I always complain about going to school but I kinda like going to school… like ‘I’m a natural at it’ always keep good grades, get away from trouble. I guess, dunno, it’s just kind of humiliating not being able to go. I was home in a gloomy mood, maybe due to the pain in my foot, but actually it was mild as long as I wasn’t stepping on the floor. Sure thing, I jerked off thinking about Mr. Thompson, his bulging biceps, his hairy legs… anyway… When I
  8. Luiz

    The injury

    “Beep beep beep.” the alarm annoyingly sounded... maybe as it was supposed to be. I definitely am the kind of person who hates waking up in the morning. My head hurts even my “heart” hurts with the feeling that I have to let go of the bed’s warmth. I feel kind of dizzy and when my feet touch the floor it’s like they fight back. Usually it’s all in slow motion… actually it’s me in slow motion and when I see “BANG” I’m late, you know? I had the weirdest dream. In that dream I was in the woods… t
  9. Luiz

    Prologue

    It was a warm spring evening and I was heading back home from my kendo practice – wearing my kendo clothes. I had my shoulder’s length black hair ruffling as the warm breeze blew on my face. The sun was warming our land. The grass on the countless hills was shining green and the sky was bright blue with few white clouds. There was a soft warm breeze and everything was so calm and silent, but I felt anguish somehow… battle was to come. There was the lord castle far away… As I was in the woods,
  10. Peter is a sweet highschool teen, who seems to have all the friends to keep up the appearances and avoid the bullying, but he's actually very lonely (I know how it feels) but that's about to change.
  11. Luiz

    Chapter 1

    I'm still shocked on how that is the Best description of myself thinking when I was 17 a few years ago. Yes, it's a depressed person description but I wouldn't say we change.. I'd say we supress that and develop other parts of character as teenage goes away to have better chances but it Never goes away.. It's tricky not getting carried away by that and at the same time not losing this rich perception of the world. Great and delicate writing. Congrats and towards chapter 2!
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    Chapter 3: Chatting

    Hey..me getting to identify myself with the story was love at first sight... It's funny, I'm half asian as angelo but I'm not small like Chris lol Só lovely characters!
  13. Luiz

    Chapter 26

    Comicality is the Best writer ever to me since teenage and this is my preferred story along with my Angel.great chapter as usual.and to make chorus here please let us know of Chris. I love Tanner and Derrick but well...Chris is my preferred character of all times. My preferred character of my preferred writer... I'll be checking. Dont make us suffer on waiting. Congrats of course and well... Thank you for all these years of loving stories!!
  14. Luiz

    Chapter 6

    First of all just lovely the point that gay people dont need to be all fashion sewers. And Wow I Never Never imagined cole himself would cause the drama Very Nice Congrats u deserve
  15. Luiz

    Chapter 1

    Hey, I just finished chapter 1, but when a story is good it sticks to you on ch 1, right?! Don't shout is great. I love when the character seems so emotionally fragile and the words in the story transmit this notion so well. I guess it's gonna be quite a challenge for Cole and so, so lovely if it works out. What I like to think the most is, when an author can write so good stuff it comes from the goodness he has inside himself. Thanks for sharing it and make the world a bit brighter... at least for me after a rough day at work, it's gonna get brighter now Thanks Hugs, if I may
  16. Hey, as Robert Rex said to me, yeah, it seems an amazing place. I've been reading something, really loving it, believing that i'm gonna win my hectic week and actually start writing something... So, first of all thanks to the warm welcoming to cynus, robert rex, rick and rustle.. and i guess there are other people I forget... I get ashamed to remember that I used to work as a computer technician, but I gotta ask... here at the new members forum: I guess some of what i'm asking has to do with the 5 posts things.. (and thanks that's a push to start writing soon to have something useful to post lol).. so here it goes: How can I reply the nice messages I get here in the forum to the person who wrote to me? I see something called 'gallery' in my profile. How can I upload a few pics of mine (only profile seems little right.. .mainly because of the people who like stalking.. i don't mind being stalked.. but i can't post pictures to make it worth it (decent pictures i mean)). Tks =D
  17. Luiz

    Grit

    Your story.. it always gives me a lot to think about.. as it's said in the story, not a lot about the ordinary workholic, shopping, world, but about what matters... But a little random comment about it is that I get to live almost half the world away, ironically here also in the rodeo state, 60 miles from the capital, 30 miles from the rodeo biggest festivities and I've never made a great deal of such parties.. but when Samuel dedicates the prize to Keith, it's so very sweet... you know I could never picture a cowboy doing such a sweet thing. Congrats again!
  18. Luiz

    Love

    I think other than Keith find a lot of realizations, like the forth face, empathy (so very important!)... *I* got a realization myself... it says that actually people are driven by searching for love, needing to feel loved... As I rationally know and try to balance my life I *know* happiness is supposed to be inside me, or I'm supposed to find happiness inside me... but the truth is... I would feel happy finding love, like this everyone else's concept... I think I gotta improve a lot, become so very superior... or find love. Yeah, the story made me sad (a little destroyed by a realization of mine aside the characters lotta good assumptions) but it proves it's as great as it can be: A Drama is to make you sad at times... and well, your story sure can bring up feelings on the readers. Thanks for writing, I'll keep reading =D
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    Resolve

    Wow. Like usual just Wow. I have a hectic routine, I have time for nothing but to read these long chapters it's like I have all the time and it isn't enough to catch up. It's writing talent of course but much more than that it has to do with the author being a good person himself I suppose as most of people wouldn't even think about it and the talent is treating delicate themes in a so involving Mode. Who wouldn't want a love like this?! What else to say? Congrats!
  20. Hi, I've subscribed 'cause it seems a place where I found decent stories, not only porn, I mean stories for reading =D Actually also because I'm trying to give feedback to an author 'cause I'm reading a story and loving it so far... still trying to figure out how to comment/reply. And soon, I hope I have the time to write and post something of mine. =D
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