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Wow a brilliant chapter, Thomas is a bit lost , now that things for him are back to "normal" Brendon and his mother have a lot of soul searching to do i think his mother is a bit bi more left than straight, time will tell, i think Juan was thrown in the deep end to start with , I think someone was hoping he would fail , he has however done the opposite, he now knows that he has uncovered an humongous hornets nest , the implication are that it will expose a pyramid of despicable pedophiles, this will eventually crumble down , and a lot of deserving low lives will be taken down, interesting times ahead, I cannot wait for this twisting tail to continue
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Wow and wow again, the joining of souls , lets celebrate and hope it lasts , congratulations
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So the niceties are done lets get down to business, yum yum
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Interesting start, a lot of information, we will see what happens
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Another awesome chapter, so we have a bigot for a nurse and a sister, well i think both are in for a time from others, her sister is going to have a battle on her hands when the kids want to see their "new" aunt, Thomas has a sharp sense of humour, i think that a few chapters are going to be rather explosive . I say bring it on
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Well a rollercoaster ride doesn't do this justice, there is a lot of soul searching that needs to be done, the hurdles for all will be overcome i think collectively,the team "Casio" or Rogers family has just grown by another 2 it makes one wonder how big the "family" will become, we have a very long road to travel I think ,. This was a very emotional chapter, enough buckets of tears to feed the angels, i loved reading it , this keeps getting better and better
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Read thanks and commented in thanks for that
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Wow and wow again, that was a bit if a bombshell in the court, dear uncle really and truly got his just rewards, he now will take the place of Thomas in prison, an ironic twist of fate, I however doubt he will survive very long in prison, pedophiles tend to have a very short shelf life once within prison walls. So Thomas is a free "man" he most definitely has a very exciting life ahead. Roger and Thomas can now heal each other. An amazing story. I can't wait to read more of the 2 of them , lets not leave Melissa and sam out of this growing happy family
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I wholeheartedly agree with Cane23, i cannot wait for chapter 4 , a lot came out in this chapter, Thomas is slowly realizing the Roger is most definitely on his side , Roger has read the uncle perfectly , get him to think he has control , but payback is going to be do sweet, the uncle not only abused Thomas but his father as well, the uncle made his brother into the hateful person he became and added to the way he treated Thomas, this is going to be really entertaining cross examination,the pedestal he is on is going to crash down, I cannot wait read about it. Thank you again for such an awesome story
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Well the previous defense lawyer certainly did not like being tossed out , the ADA thought he had this wrapped up, Roger made it clear that is not the case , Thomas has shown to be very scared of his "uncle" he obviously is no friend , he is a wild card that will I hope explodes on the stand , he immediately came across as someone who wants to take charge and control everything,, intimidate everyone worked before so why not now. This rollercoaster ride is only just beginning, a wild ride ahead. Another awesome chapter.
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Well what z start to this story. I can't wait for Monday to see the fireworks start. This looks to be an fireworks story j can't wait for more
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Well that went from awesome and wonderful down oh hell no, very rapidly, Nate i hope sorts himself out over the weekend, you certainly threw some curve balls in this chapter, it was brilliant, thank you
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Jill Helps Figuratively Bury Her Dad
mikedup commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Jill Helps Figuratively Bury Her Dad
An explosive, emotional, and fitting ending. All the guilty got their just rewards, the children rightly got to live a great life with Brendan, growing up to live a life as they were meant to. This was an amazing story, you certainly got us involved with the characters, so thank you for entertaining us. I look forward to reading your next story- 60 comments
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I never expected Abel to have any funds available, however one must remember that they aren't exactly cash, they are fixed property, they can be sold after some issues are sorted but they are there , when he asked to see his children Brendan's look sealed that issue once and for all, the trial is on , I somehow don't think the media has been stopped from reporting the facts , after Joey's facts have been reported in court , i think his future alive is sealed, Jill no doubt will seal his fate , no doubt there, well the incubator is awake , i think that the children need to see her one last time and tell her again what they think of her, so she can see and hear again what disdain the children feel for her. Brendan needs a heroes cape , for everything he is doing for the children. I cannot wait for the Jill's answers at the trial, so she can confront her spermie donor
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Interesting, this is a very one sided relationship, you do all the work, I have the best time of my life, i get off , you get to do yourself or go without, he says he is not gay but wants the best of both sides of the coin, i think that something is going to go wrong sometime and the wheels will wobble and fall off , I also think that cal can you take control and change the rolls , it is amazing what you can get a man to do when you have his dick under your control.
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I don't like that Alan is such dominator, it is ok in some circumstances but making cal into bit of a bitch is not really good in the short or long term , roll playing is ok but only for so far , if it carries on to normal life then it can be a problem especially as alan has already indicated that this is only a short term affair, i say this as Cal is so very inexperienced
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Will Things Ever Be Normal Again?
mikedup commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Will Things Ever Be Normal Again?
I am surprised that Mrs. Harper came around to apologize, my hat off to her she had no doubt had to swallow a lot pride to do that, but she did and the results were pleasant, so a bridge crossed successfully, a party to get everyone together is a great idea , so that everyone involved can meet and discuss events , a few bumps in the road are inevitable, the big thing in the future will be the sperm donors trial, however I don't think he has any chance of being set free, time doesn't heal all wounds it just reduces the impact of the events, the children however are in a very good place with UB, around things can only get better going forward, another awesome chapter, thanks- 39 comments
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Wow Alan is really taking command , I wonder how far he will go , after all sex is really a 2 way street, interesting times ahead, lets hope Calvin keeps his wits about himself , we can only hope he doesn't get hurt in the process
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Well the hunger for sex just went straight through the roof, they are hungry for each other ,yum ,yum , yum
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A typical average family with some hidden secrets , a great start to this story
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Well happiness all around, plus congratulations are in order , a very poignant and emotional chapter, the happy family has got a bit larger rather quickly, an awesome chapter, thanks
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Well justice has been served, not the correct way but done anyway, mother is not dead but could just as well be dead , however i believe she can still hear and by getting told that she should be dead , and the way the children re-acted she definitely knows she has been dismissed with all the contempt she deserves, may her coma be filled with horror , their father got everything he deserved, plus a bit more pain a humiliation, but cutting and burning his goods proves that he will never be able to claim to be a man ever again, he in now nothing more than a eunuch, and rightly so, how justice was served was not right but however it was served in the best ways possible, the children will not have go through the court cases and be humiliated by the defense attorneys, .....ok I am getting off my soap box now, I hope the children come through this with as little scars as possible, another awesome chapter, thanks
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More Tests, More Evidence, and the Trials Begin
mikedup commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in More Tests, More Evidence, and the Trials Begin
"Oh my G#d" I never expected that , there was 1 bombshell after another bombshell, the mother needs to be forcibly neutered, she should never be allowed to have another more children if she ever gets out if prison, the mother is the personification of pure evil, she cannot deny it if her brother testifies that he was there when it happened, i wonder who's remains have been found , i expect them to be a murdered infant. I cannot get over the evil dumped on the children, Brendan is an absolute saint in this regard, I am shocked beyond belief, I cannot wait for the next chapter- 73 comments
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Growing Relationships, Home Ownership, and Court Looms
mikedup commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Growing Relationships, Home Ownership, and Court Looms
Well more drama ahead, the dates went well, the house closing is days away, more information from the doctors, i think that a lot more will come out after the latest tests , I still don't think Brendan and skylar's relationship is good for the family or anyone else, it speaks of major drama ahead,the shorter the relationship the better, now we wait with baited breath for the necessary results.I think the the police will be very interested in the results more so than Brendan, i think that the trial is going to be an explosive disaster- 55 comments
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Awesome chapter, re-living places they had been to in the past, bringing granny into the picture made for a very visual scene, i could just picture her sitting in a chair smoking a cigar, i hope Kai's back pain reduces a lot over time. And off cause a happy occasion they are going to be uncles soon, congratulations are in order
