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    Well i hope that Lanny has learnt a very valuable lesson. His mother is definitely a homophobic b*tch, she will definitely not be invited in again ever, Lanny's father dealt with him in the best/worse possible way a beating is never a good thing however Lanny i think leant a very,very valuable lesson, "do not touch anyone in any intimate place without permission, ever" I think he is going to be put off a relationship for fairly long time. Jill handled it in the only way she could , a good we slap started his wake up call except his mother but dad sorted him out. I am still not convinced about skylar, time will tell. Well lanny certainly brought the pool party with the kids to an end. Another awesome chapter, thanks
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    A great easy chapter, i think skylar now could be a new love interest, however when the wheels eventually fall off he could be very vindictive and cause untold drama for Brendan , that old saying keep work and play separate could not be more appropriate than in this case, the wheels will wobble a hit so more drama ahead , lets hope the speed bump is not too bad.
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    Well part 1 of the deposition done , i would say that it is incomplete, nut the unasked questions will come up sooner than later I think, well as I suspected Greg is running I think that the transfer was his idea to get away from Brendan and the children as soon as possible , I doubt that children were in the scheme of things for his future, the kids were really wonderful after his breakdown episode and the next morning, everything can only go upwards now , they are well on the way to becoming a great family unit, I don't think that the "U B" will last it just doesn't sound appropriate, given the circumstances, this was an awesome chapter, thanks
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    Wow talk about a quickie, they had one, then damper on it , they both needed the release, and a lot of soul searching before the next few months complete, the friend has turned out to be bit of a stalker, he did not hide his lust , he got his rewards, i hope it doesn't cause problems later on , now for the deposition, a can of worms no doubt will escape. The children are at least settling in nicely
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    Chapter 25 - Adam

    mikedup commented on Andr0gene's story chapter in Chapter 25 - Adam

    Wow just awesome loving between them, true no faking anything here, then the slight bombshell about what books he writes, Kai never suspected that, but now he knows i don't think his sister will ever find out , some secrets need to remain just that secrets, now let the real games begin in more ways than one. Another awesome chapter, thanks
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    Well the family is progressing well as a cohesive unit, the children are helpful so far ,i hope it carries on going forward, the school issue was almost a non event, life just carries on, the "Oh No" issue was not really as issue at all. the children conveniently forgot that they needed to go to school, but that is sorted out, the boyfriend is getting some me time but i still don't think it will be enough. Now the next big thing is the interviews with the DA, i hope all goes well in that regard
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    Chapter 24 - Kai

    mikedup commented on Andr0gene's story chapter in Chapter 24 - Kai

    Wow just Wow, finally they played with each other all day till finally fireworks and then some, they complete each other, it wasn't just sex they definitely made love to each other, it was just awesome,
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    So called mother is behind bars and rightly so, right where she belongs. The kids are seemingly a very happy bunch , considering the reasons, they are with him, he is very understanding of their individual problems, I think the boyfriend is a little put out but is coping with the circumstances, the Oh No sounds ominous
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    Chapter 23 - Adam

    mikedup commented on Andr0gene's story chapter in Chapter 23 - Adam

    Awesome chapter, another boundary has shattered, it was awesome they swam together in more ways than one, i think that Adam had better speed up getting beds for the house particularly his bedroom, a single bed although cuddly is no place for 2 men, Adam had a serious bout of intense jealousy when the nurse arrived, i think that murder of the nurse was certainly not ruled out, they did settle it rapidly this journey is really very entertaining and uplifting
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    Things Move Fast

    mikedup commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Things Move Fast

    Wow as I expected "mother" was just as bad as "dad" she definitely does not deserve to be free , i think that both of them as part of sentencing need to be permanently neutered, she definitely is no mother but quite definitely a rapist, in the worst way. The cauldron is slowly starting to boil , and when it does are hell will break loose on two very deserving idiots. I imagine therapy is most definitely needed, for all of them, there is more to tell , but slowly i don't think we can handle everything that will come out, drips and drabs till the final explosion, when they stand trial, if they are still alive by then ,
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    Well no surprise that the "parents" are far , far worse than I think anyone expected, at least Jill called and now the can of worms is opening, the horrors are are about to come tumbling out , I am glad his brother is prepared to help him with him with their family, now to find a suitable house fast , i somehow think his boyfriend is going to bail out sooner than later
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    Chapter 22 - Kai

    mikedup commented on Andr0gene's story chapter in Chapter 22 - Kai

    A good relaxing chapter, it was a feel good one. They are finally letting the neighborhood know that Kai is back "home" no doubt all the neighbors will know in short order
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    They say that if you look, it is indeed a small world in your part of the world, also it seems that his sister and her husband have unleashed a world of bad karma that going fall Onto them in a really good way, interesting times ahead
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    Wow, some people need to be neutered before they can breed and have children, it is sinful that parents just tell a child to get out , i think a firing squad is too good for them , i think we are in for a bit of a roller coaster trip, a great start to this drama
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    Chapter 2

    mikedup commented on wolfwriter's story chapter in Chapter 2

    Well, I am sure like most readers that it would be a cut a dried case of mom is dead and the children are his, WOW I never expected this , his brain is most definitely in turmoil about all his unanswered questions , a surprise line which I think some missed is that he himself was child from child services and went through the system, and i imagine he will need to draw from his experiences to help his twins, I can't wait for this roller coaster trip to continue. It seems to be the start of an exciting and drama filled experience
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    Chapter 1

    mikedup commented on wolfwriter's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Well a very interesting start , way more questions than answers, something about sins from the past have a sting in the tail , no use fretting just have to deal with the consequences, i cannot wait for the next chapter
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    Chapter 13

    mikedup commented on Al Norris's story chapter in Chapter 13

    Well all was going well then the idiot neanderthals decide to make their presence known, then they in their infinite wisdom make threats in public even admitting to chasing him the previous day, they don't even share a single brain cell. Jimmy's friends hopefully felt bad after Pete had his say I hope they take it to heart, now the plan to get them , i hope it works well
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    Chapter 12

    mikedup commented on Al Norris's story chapter in Chapter 12

    Well congratulations on getting served his dish, his mother no surprise there , however I think they should have removed all the children from her care , she is an unfit parent. Plus now she has no hold over him , he now has a real Dad, cleared for all activities in all sports. Everything is going hunky Dory, it makes you wonder what is in the pipeline before it crashes again.
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    Chapter 11

    mikedup commented on Al Norris's story chapter in Chapter 11

    Well they do say "NOT ALL HEROES WHERE A CAPE" he certainly fits the bill, he has said his say to Mitch , who said he had reasons , by the looks of it they were not very good, Pete is becoming a walking "crash test dummy " with all his injuries yet he still puts the team and others ahead of himself for good of everyone, a real HEROE
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    Chapter 10

    mikedup commented on Al Norris's story chapter in Chapter 10

    Well that escalated quickly, when someone is in a blind rage they cannot see reason, it was no excuse to assault his son or Pete , and then we have turners father who just has crop up in the mix , that town is most definitely homophobic or has plenty of them living there. Then Mitch turns up conveniently he also deserves a face plant
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    Chapter 9

    mikedup commented on Al Norris's story chapter in Chapter 9

    Great chapter, Mitch is a slut in no uncertain terms, Pete is right to book a blood test , safety first, I think bobby has a bit of a thing for peter, time will tell
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    Chapter 8

    mikedup commented on Al Norris's story chapter in Chapter 8

    Well he certainly can cook, and prepare foods and he proved he can at the restaurant with his knife skills , so he has a holiday job , now onto Mitch I think that Mitch feels lost out and their relationship is almost certainly dead in the water. Mitch I think will come off second best without realizing it he will be outed very publicly
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    Chapter 7

    mikedup commented on Al Norris's story chapter in Chapter 7

    A really good chapter, no major disturbing events although the henchmen could have caused trouble, they avoided it, now onto the dinner,it seems like an event not to be missed, a whole week with no injuries, we are setting a new record (just kidding) now o to the main event
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    Chapter 6

    mikedup commented on Al Norris's story chapter in Chapter 6

    Well the band of bigots is expanding, the pool of them is getting crowded, they will definitely get their just rewards, the best part is if and when they end up behind bars, they will absolutely find out that homophobia has no place in prison, but as the saying goes a hole is a hole , and the bigots will be on the receiving end . I think that a lot of things are going to happen and a lot of people are going to fall by the wayside, choose your friends carefully, I hope he recovers quickly
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    Chapter 5

    mikedup commented on Al Norris's story chapter in Chapter 5

    Oh sh*t , well the sh*t has more than definitely hit the fan , the list of people on the wrong side is growing at a steady rate , and they don't realise that it is a bigger issue than they realise, this is more than just a life changing experience, I see steel bars in a few peoples future , I hope Peter is going to be fine , however his recovery is growing longer and longer by the day.
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