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Thank you CHS. You've been a great source of support for me. Even when I was losing confidence you were there putting wind beneath my wings. All my characters become part of my DNA so I'm sure they'll be back. I can't just lock them away in my head. Thanks again! Z
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Hi Jay Thanks for hanging in there and being a source of support for me. I promise I'll bring these guys back at some point. I'm thinking a cameo in my next story. That wasn't originally part of the story, but from the reviews I can tell that might be welcomed. Until then... Z
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Hi Croyde I appreciate your kind words and support. Reviewers are suggesting I at least bring back my guys for a cameo in the next story, and that's giving me an idea... Cheers, Z
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Thanks Jeff The wrap up was a bid sad for me too. My characters always live on inside my head, so I'm going to give them at least a cameo in the next story. Thanks for reading, and thanks for your support!
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Thanks Gee. Appreciate the kind words and support. The next story is already in my head. Stay tuned.
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Thanks Lux, I appreciate your kind and hopeful words. I hope you are happy with the way things worked out in the epilogue. Thanks for taking the ride with me! Z
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Oh CHS, you've been my most faithful reader and reviewer. Love ya! A million thanks, you've kept me going. A la prochaine (until next time), Z
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Thanks Gee It's been a pleasure to create this story, with all it's little twists and turns. It's been a great learning experience for me. I'm so grateful I had a supportive audience to share it with me. Thanks so much for your kind words! Z
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Three years later..... Joseph Martel! Sam, Jorge and I clap and whistle as Joseph strides across the gymnasium’s stage to receive his high school diploma. Also in the cheering section are the Williams, their daughter Wendy and her husband. The Mulrainey’s, including their two older kids, are there cheering too. At the end of the summer, the Joseph and Tyler will be moving into our house while they attended University of California San Diego. We’d had the basement finished with one large be
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“If this kid dies, I’m gonna kill Cyril,” growled Sam. I had no doubt Sam meant that literally. Sam and I were doing our damndest to staunch the flow of blood from the kid’s chest, and I was praying he would survive. The first vehicle to arrive was a police car, which came to a screeching halt about three feet from us. Its headlights were alternately flashing, as were its grill-mounted red and blue emergency lights. The strobe effect was worse than any bad disco I’d ever been to, and Sam an
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Thanks so much Cody, I tried something different, and it didn't really work the way I hoped it would. I think I've found my way again. Your comments are very much appreciated. VERY MUCH! Z
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Thank you so much CHS After your comment I took time to re-find my muse. It took a lot of thought, even reflecting if I should continue the story... But then I got going again, as you can see by chapter 20. ALWAYS appreciate your comments. Z
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Hi Gee Thanks for the review! I think Joseph and Tyler got an expedited passports...LOL, the great thing about fiction is that you can bend the rules! As for the $$'s, well, I think of the Williams and the Mulraineys as being fairly well off, as are Nick and Sam. It's where I turn personal fantasy into story... But, I really appreciate your comments. I learned something from them! Take care Z
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Gay History 101 -- and More!
Zenith commented on Robert Rex's story chapter in Gay History 101 -- and More!
Robert Great chapter. Gotta say that Gloria Gaynor's 'I will survive' has a lot of meaning for me. Glad you featured that one. Can hardly wait to hear Clayton's story. Write fast! Z -
Hi Jay Thanks for your kind words. I never thought of Cyril being somebody's bitch in prison, but maybe I should write a little aside about that. Z
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Hi CHS Thanks for hanging in there, and for writing a review. Yes, I made it pretty obvious what Cyril would do. Let's hope he gets the comeuppance he deserves. Z
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Cody Thank you! I'd lost my muse there for awhile, so I really appreciate your kind words. It's comments like that that keep me going. Z
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Hi Avid Thanks for the review! Let's hope the poor kid makes it, yeah? Z
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Suzanne looked to be in her fifties. Trim with short gray hair. Pleasant looking. To her request that we attend a Neighborhood Watch meeting I responded, “I’ll talk to Sam, and let you know if we can make it. I’m Nick, by the way.” “Hello, Nick. It’s a pleasure to meet you. Sam, I take it, is that big, yummy guy?” I laughed. “Uh...yes, big and yummy would be an accurate description of Sam.” “Well, you’re no slouch yourself. Are you by any chance a model?” “No. I’m an artist.” “Well
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“Uh...Sam’s at work right now. But...uh...come in. I’m Nick, Sam’s...uh...husband.” “Hi Nick. Forgive me for just barging in. I’m Serena, and this is David, and this is Sarah. “This is our son Jorge, and his friend Gregory. This is Maria. Come in. Oh you have bags too. Well, just drop them here by the door.” As you can imagine the whole scene was pretty bizarre. But Serena wasn’t quite the ice maiden I thought she might be. She bent down and said hello to Jorge saying she was his au
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Hi Cody, Glad you liked the chapter, and thank you for acknowledging my time and effort. Honestly, this story just writes itself in my head, but sometimes I have to discipline myself to get it down on paper. So hearing from you helps motivate me! Cheers, Z
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Hi Avid R Gosh. You love the story? Wow, I'm delighted. Yeah, Sam and Nick are such hotties I really do have to go into a bit of detail now and again. And I love writing their sexcapades 'cuz there's so much love between them. Ah, you hit the nail on the head. Are things 'as they seem?' Until next time Z
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Hi CHS I'm delighted to hear how engaged you are in the story. Yes, I think kids can have a real impact on a couple's intimacy, and it's important to 'rediscover' each other once in a while. As for Sam's relationship with his sister, that will become clearer in the next chapter. As for Joseph and Tyler, I'm basing their 'adventures' roughly on my own real-life experiences. Perhaps they are lucky, yes, but their good fortune is grounded in reality (at least mine). Well, I must get back to polishing up the next chapter..... Always great to hear from you Z
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Thanks for the kind words, Robert. I appreciate the feedback because as I introduce new characters or situations I hope that they seem at least plausible. So your reviews are really helpful and keep me motivated. Cheers Z
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Hey Jay, Thanks for the review. I agree, she's lucky that Nick didn't slam the door in her face. But let's wait and see what she has to say
