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Another amazing chapter!
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Thanks so much for the kind words. Yes, readers deserve to get "the rest of the story."
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*************************** When Rob’s phone rang, and the call display showed it was from the clinic, we were buoyant with enthusiasm. Rob answered with a cheerful hello but soon his face fell and he went ashen. He talked briefly mostly saying “okay” and “yes, we will.” When he pushed the end button on the phone he looked at me forlornly. My heart jumped to my throat and I asked, “Is everything okay? What’s wrong?” He looked at me, with tears beginning to form in his eyes, and said, “The
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Thanks Robert--really appreciate hearing your comments! Yes, things move along pretty quickly in this "short" story. Next up is the last chapter. But I'm happy to let you know that Jerome and Rob play a small part in my next story....
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It was 2 am, the night of our wedding. The last of our guests had departed. Rob and I were exhausted, yet buzzing with excitement. We tidied the apartment superficially and decided to leave the rest of the cleanup until the next day. We barely had the energy to brush our teeth and jump into bed. We lay on our sides, face to face, bodies pressed tight, legs scissored. We were looking into each other’s eyes, smiling. There was no need for words, Rob’s face mirrored my happiness; we were con
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Thanks for the kind words, they are very much appreciated. It was a pleasure to write this little story. I'll post an epilogue in a few days
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“I’m here to get you,” he said. “Me?” I thought, confused. Then his words registered, and a wave of hopefulness rolled over me. Suddenly I didn’t feel so sick. I turned and looked at him. He was standing, looking back at me, with his hands slightly out. Like a supplicant. I crossed Colibri, jumped onto the dock, and stood facing him. I studied his beautiful face, looking for signs of hostility. There were none. He looked expectant and maybe, like me, a little hopeful. I held out my ar
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I like the way you bring in a variety of shape shifters. I feel like I'm getting an education. Great story.
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I love cliffhangers! I really like the way Kye is developing; finding his strengths. Great story.
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Thanks Robert. Jerome is definitely running away, and letting his hurt and anger rule. Wonder where that will lead him?.....
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Glad you're back! Thanks for the kind words. (I wanted to get this story on GA because my next one has cameos from R & J.)
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Thanks for your review and support jaysalmn. Means a lot to me. Yeah, poor Jerome, at least he handled his grief in a positive way
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Thank you. It's really a pretty short story. I'm not an epic kind of guy...yet.
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Thanks for the review I'm glad you are engaged in the story. I can't comment on Jerome's trip for fear of giving a clue....
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I somehow managed to make it across the courtyard, and through the gate. I was relieved when the gate closed. It created a safety barrier between Rob and me. I drove away thinking very uncharitable thoughts about Robert Mitchell, and about his family, and about the bloody Porsche. So much for being “part of the family,” I’d just been tossed out like yesterday’s trash. Rob made it very clear. IT’S OVER. Rob wanted respect. Well, he’d get respect. I would respect him mightily. I would ro
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Thanks for the feedback Robert. Your comments were appreciated because that's what I was trying to convey. Will these two hotheads get past this fight? Time will tell.
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Thanks. I got the idea for the story one day when I was sitting in my office, bored out of my mind, when a window washer appeared. I thought, "What if....."
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Thanks! Yes, there's lots of emotion flying around. Jerome didn't do himself any favours by losing his temper. What will he do now?
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I woke up the next morning and my first thought was, “I’m married...well sort of...as good as!” I was bursting to share the good news, so I called my parents. I wasn’t sure how they would react—up to now any talk of my love life made them uncomfortable—but Rob was now their de facto son-in-law, and they needed to know. My mom answered the phone, and I told her my happy story. “Jerry, that’s wonderful,” she said. Then she called my father to the phone. “It must be bloody good news,” he said
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Thanks for the kind words, Robert. Yes, things move along pretty fast in this story. Maybe too fast? Time will tell.....
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Wonderful story. I like the chemistry building between Ryan and Clayton.
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I don't see Robbie as bisexual at all. I think he's been drawn in by Fran's selfishness and by his fervent wish to be "normal." It's very painful to read this story because my life parallels Robbie's. Maybe Robbie won't make the same mistake I did by marrying Fran.
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Thanks again. I really appreciate your kind words and encouragement!
