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  1. Zenith
    Thanks for writing this heartwarming story--I know it took a lot of work on your (and Craftingmom's) part. I think it should be required reading for every high school sophomore in the world!
  2. Zenith

    Chapter 8

    Zenith posted new chapter in Special Forces

    Sam Kozitsky was a happy man. He’d just sold a quarter million dollar boat earning him a commission of five grand. His husband, Nick Poulos, would be pleased. Nick had enthusiastically supported his decision to leave his old paramilitary unit and become a boat salesman. Commissions like this didn’t come every day, so when they did it was cause for celebration. Sam hoped that the celebration included sex. Sex with Nick was always hot. The thought was getting him hard as he navigated his tr
  3. Zenith
    Beautiful chapter, again! I love the way that the relationship is evolving. You know they're perfect for each other but they're not home free yet. I'm hooked. Thanks for writing:)
  4. Zenith
    Thanks for the review, Mike. I'm so glad you like the story. I especially appreciate your comments because I've put a lot of personal emotion into the story. Yes, the family is doing well, but hey will have their challenges in the coming months!
  5. Zenith
    Hi Robert. Yes, I covered a lot of ground in this chapter. Just wasn't sure that readers would be interested in dragging out Jorge's daily existence. I'm excited about writing the next chapter in the third person from Sam's point of view. I'll take me a couple more days of work, so be patient And, isn't it time for another chapter of Lion's Lair? Thanks for the feedback. It's ALWAYS appreciated!
  6. Zenith
    Thanks for the review csh. Yes, Jorge and Nick going to struggle with Sam being absent a bit. Stay tuned.
  7. Zenith
    It’s all very well to rescue a little waif from the street. Not unlike seeing a puppy in a pet store window. You think, he’s so cute, I’d like to take him home, but then it only takes 24 hours before the novelty wears off and reality punches you in the face. Don’t get me wrong, Sam and I love Jorge—we’d lay down our lives for him—but raising a child is a lot of work. And a big change to established routines. Day two begins: Jorge slept through the night just fine. I’d gotten him up to pee
  8. Zenith
    Each and every chapter in this story is a delight to read and this one certainly didn't disappoint. It was very heartwarming to see Candy's turn around--and all the other good stuff in this latest chapter too. Thanks Gary for making my day brighter!
  9. Zenith

    Chapter 12

    Zenith commented on lilansui's story chapter in Chapter 12

    Great ending. Unique story. Loved it!
  10. Zenith

    Chapter 5

    Zenith commented on Ronyx's story chapter in Chapter 5

    I really like the way Casey is developing as a character. He's vulnerable but no nonsense. A good combination. Well done! Looking forward to more
  11. Zenith
    Yes, dq. Absolutely cliché for which I make no apology. In fact, I'll be trotting out a few more. Thanks for the review. Your honest comments mean a lot to me!
  12. Zenith
    Thanks, Robert. Yes changes coming. And maybe a little adventure.
  13. Zenith

    I Can Handle This

    Zenith commented on Robert Rex's story chapter in I Can Handle This

    Amazing chapter, Robert. I was moved to tears! Wonderful writing. Thanks so much
  14. Zenith
    Hey avidreadr, great to hear from you. Yes, Sam and Nick felt comfortable about their impulsive decision. Now come the nuts and bolts of creating a family unit. The next chapter will be published in about 12 days.
  15. Zenith
    Yes, you are absolutely right cenexhairysub. The guys made a risky, impulsive decision without really thinking about the long-term consequences. Time will tell.... Thanks for the review. I really appreciate hearing from you. Z
  16. Zenith
    Muchas gracias, Mike!
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    I was walking over to Blick’s one day to pick up a couple of tubes of paint and some pottery glaze when I spotted him. He was almost hidden, just inside a gated closure that contained an industrial sized garbage bin. Not much more than about three feet tall, he was standing still with his little brown hands held one over the other, as if waiting for a communion wafer at church. I stopped and looked at him. He stood as still as a little statue looking back at me with big black eyes that were
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    Chapter 5

    Zenith commented on Zenith's story chapter in Chapter 5

    Thanks for your comments Centexhairysub. Yes, I can almost guarantee that Sam will get pulled back into some sort of an adventure. I'm thinking of a PI role with his friend, Sandy, who is in the SDPD. But that will be a couple or more chapters out. Right now there's another sort of adventure about to happen.....
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    Chapter 5

    Zenith commented on Zenith's story chapter in Chapter 5

    Thanks for the kind words Avidreadr. Trust me, Nick and Sam are going to have a few adventures along the way
  20. Zenith

    Chapter 5

    Zenith commented on Zenith's story chapter in Chapter 5

    Thanks for the review Robert! ....well, the chapter did end with the famous Robbie Burns quote about the best laid schemes often go awry. Wonder what's going to happen? I don't know about you, but my stories always have a touch of autobiography, and my life has been notable for many impulsive decisions. So I'm trying to show how impulsive decisions impact my characters's lives. Both the good and the bad. Stay tuned
  21. Zenith

    Chapter 5

    Zenith posted new chapter in Special Forces

    “Sam, I want to start painting again. Or maybe do some pottery.” “Really?” Sam’s face lit up. “Yeah, I haven’t really done any art since I started my MBA. That was five years ago. But lately I’ve got in itch to get going again. I was thinking I could use the second bedroom, which luckily I haven’t got around to furnishing yet, as a studio. What do you think?” “What I think is that we should go shopping for art supplies today. Would you like that?” “Well, yes, that would be great. Mayb
  22. Zenith

    Chapter 3

    Zenith commented on Ronyx's story chapter in Chapter 3

    Looks like Skipper is thawing Casey's heart! Great story. In spite of Casey's crankiness we can't help but like him.
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    Chapter 4

    Zenith commented on Zenith's story chapter in Chapter 4

    Thanks for the encouragement Robert. Yes, the next chapter is the calm before the next storm.... It's fun writing about these guys. Really, there are so many plot ideas my head is ready to explode! Z
  24. Zenith
    So...things are heating up between the boys. Sounds like Ryan has a "surprise" in store from Clayton. And is the some occult coming with Rex's abilities? Keep 'em coming Robert!
  25. Zenith

    Chapter 4

    Zenith commented on Zenith's story chapter in Chapter 4

    Thank you so much for your chapter reviews. Great to hear from you. Nick and Sam are in for a lot of adventures. The fun has just started...
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