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Geron Kees

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  1. Geron Kees

    Chapter 21

    I believe Jamie has a magickal tie that turns puns into wine. Hic!
  2. Geron Kees

    Chapter 21

    You need to bottle this stuff, and sell it in bars on Saturday nights! 😁
  3. Geron Kees

    Chapter 21

    The tunnels were not designed to accommodate the spiders at all. Who uses tanks indoors? Porvus was just making-do. There's a lot of that going on in this tale!
  4. Geron Kees

    Chapter 21

    They do. It's in their contracts!
  5. Geron Kees

    Chapter 21

    I think Porvus has his a$$ grounded, just to be safe!
  6. Geron Kees

    Chapter 21

    The only red faces we got was from the gas produced by the food!
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    Chapter 21

    We have all been enjoying your comments, too. Every perspective is truly unique.
  8. Geron Kees

    Chapter 21

    Thanks. I hope you keep enjoying the story!
  9. "It was my right to lead you," Gorge said, through Bastyin, as they made their way around the circumference of the large tunnel chamber. "It was I that first spoke to you, so I had first privilege over my brothers to make a deal." The little man shrugged his shoulders to rearrange the small pack he wore, and picked up his pace even more. Jamie smiled. Despite the Pertwee's short stature, he seemed to have no trouble at all setting a vigorous pace. "Deal?" The other looked up at him, an
  10. Geron Kees

    Chapter 21

    Wow. Big dude! But...this is a little closer to what I had in mind...
  11. Geron Kees

    Chapter 21

    He meant superposition, but I knew what he meant. I'm linear that way.
  12. Geron Kees

    Chapter 21

    Me and Werner used to eat lunch together in another life, and make electron cloud jokes over Borscht.
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    Chapter 21

    😁
  14. Geron Kees

    Chapter 21

    Hey, having friends can really make the difference!
  15. Geron Kees

    Chapter 21

    You the man.
  16. Geron Kees

    Chapter 21

    With all the readers hoping that these guys do well, how can they not?
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    Chapter 21

    You're good at this. I need to read more of your stories!
  18. Geron Kees

    Chapter 20

    I always wondered what sort of pizza could be made in a hut, anyway! Small ones?
  19. Geron Kees

    Chapter 20

    Not very surprisingly, this very topic might come up in the story.
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    Chapter 20

    In part, I also believe this is true. The three mages reacted with 'standard' magicks, which is exactly what Jamie set their own defenses against. The three enemy mages didn't expect anything better. Had Artagon tried out some of his most esoteric offensive magicks, he might have had different results. But he was overwhelmed immediately by the failure of his tried and true offensives, and never thought to move beyond those limitations. He helped to defeat himself, by giving in early.
  21. Geron Kees

    Chapter 20

    Learning is one of those things that can accelerate quickly as it moves along.
  22. Geron Kees

    Chapter 20

    I have to say that one of the best parts of writing a story for me is creating the conversations the characters have with each other.
  23. Geron Kees

    Chapter 21

    Exactly! 😀
  24. Geron Kees

    Chapter 21

    Ah, but Peter Parker only has some of the skills of a spider. He doesn't LOOK like one at all!
  25. Geron Kees

    Chapter 21

    I have always believed that a tight-knit, dedicated team is stronger than a multitude of individual opponents. It's a theme that recurs in many of my stories. Dorf is older, and more experienced. His knack is different than the others, but one of its strengths it that it learns quickly. Snave's protections are as good as those of the others. He also can't be killed, only destroyed. He's actually one of the strongest of the group! Still 15 chapters to go. 😁
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