tarzanacide
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Yeah definitely Noah is eating it up. But not forever. And yes, Navid can be very suave. My boyfriend (who Navid is based on) can be super charming with everyone. He is very good at making people want to help him with whatever he wants. He's a business man so I guess that's part of the personality. -Emri
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I worry about that too. Not as much as in the beginning. Now he is building his business and finding success here, but last fall things weren't so certain. I'm trying to stick to the facts with this series, but we'll see how long that lasts. -Emri
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+{Noah’s Starship}+ -+-[August]-+- “No, no, sleepy Noah sleep!” Navid was easing me gently off his chest and onto the comforter as he slid out of my bed. I’d slept snuggled onto his chest since my bed is just big enough for one. It felt so good sleeping against a muscled body that pumped out heat and a heart that pumped a steady rhythm all night long. It was the morning after the first night he’d spent in my bed with me. We were up late last night and my dad had stopped by my room to say he
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Fighting Words and the Epilogue
tarzanacide commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in Fighting Words and the Epilogue
So well done from beginning to end. I'm glad things worked out and he got a happy resolution. I like your writing, very descriptive and realistic with great dialog. -
+{Noah’s Starship}+ -+-[July]-+- “Noah! I take that!” Navid took the bag from me as we walked across the steamy cement to the boat landing. He kissed my forehead as he slid the bag from my fingers. I’d taken it from the backseat of his car as he made his way around to open my door. It was my way of showing I didn’t need him treating me like a damsel. He seemed slightly annoyed at my gesture. “We will be on water for a few hours so please go to pee here now,” He said as we paused by a s
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Thank you! I wrote long chapters for this story because I tried to do it month by month of the relationship. My other series had shorter chapters and I will definitely go back to that when I wrap this one up. hah. thanks! though!
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+{Noah’s Starship}+ -+-[June]-+- “Noah Kinney?” the professor called as I was fumbling to open the stiff pages of the English textbook. “Here…” I started to say and raise my hand My elbow nudged the book just enough to push it off the desktop, down to my lap, and then off. “Here!” I called louder as I scrambled awkwardly. I looked down in time to see the guy next to me catch it smoothly just before it hit the ground. “Be careful with your things, Noah Kinney,” he said in a smoothly deep, fo
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Noah and Navid find each other and struggle to bridge two cultures.
