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    So well done from beginning to end. I'm glad things worked out and he got a happy resolution. I like your writing, very descriptive and realistic with great dialog.
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    +{Noah’s Starship}+ -+-[July]-+- “Noah! I take that!” Navid took the bag from me as we walked across the steamy cement to the boat landing. He kissed my forehead as he slid the bag from my fingers. I’d taken it from the backseat of his car as he made his way around to open my door. It was my way of showing I didn’t need him treating me like a damsel. He seemed slightly annoyed at my gesture. “We will be on water for a few hours so please go to pee here now,” He said as we paused by a s
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    Chapter 1- June

    tarzanacide commented on tarzanacide's story chapter in Chapter 1- June

    Thank you! I wrote long chapters for this story because I tried to do it month by month of the relationship. My other series had shorter chapters and I will definitely go back to that when I wrap this one up. hah. thanks! though!
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    +{Noah’s Starship}+ -+-[June]-+- “Noah Kinney?” the professor called as I was fumbling to open the stiff pages of the English textbook. “Here…” I started to say and raise my hand My elbow nudged the book just enough to push it off the desktop, down to my lap, and then off. “Here!” I called louder as I scrambled awkwardly. I looked down in time to see the guy next to me catch it smoothly just before it hit the ground. “Be careful with your things, Noah Kinney,” he said in a smoothly deep, fo
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    Noah and Navid find each other and struggle to bridge two cultures.
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