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  1. Once again I felt the familiar sensation of hate and anger fill me. The Reaper, huh? I’ll make sure to live up to it. I slept like a baby that night. I woke up the next morning with the familiar adrenaline I always did after a night out racing. What I did last night wasn’t right or wrong, it was necessary, and I won’t let it slow me down any more than it has. I spent the first part of the day hanging out in my room blasting music. Jacob texted me reminding me that he was coming over to install
  2. The car just laid there looking as though it had been hit by a truck. As we passed I saw one of Pit’s men drag the body out. I looked away before he could fully unveil it. The gravity of the situation started to set in. I screamed uncontrollably. I could hear my heart racing in my ears. “He’s dead” I whispered “I KILLED HIM!” I screamed. “Kid get a grip of yourself.” Jax said reaching back and placing his hand on my knee “You didn’t kill anyone.” I swatted it away and stared at Jacob who had t
  3. Aceinthehole

    Chapter 15

    Jamie certainly needs a good smack of reality!It seems even his thoughts that are good don't match up to his actions! Thank you! I'm really glad you enjoy my style!
  4. Aceinthehole

    Chapter 15

    Thanks! I'm really glad you're enjoying it!
  5. Aceinthehole

    Chapter 15

    I don't blame you, he's seems to be becoming the opposite of Eli with each day that passes.
  6. I always assumed I would be uncomfortable showing affection for someone in front of my friends, but right then and there it all felt so natural. Elijah shook his head a little trying to get comfortable, I wonder if he knows how much I appreciated him coming over tonight. I slowly began to rub his shoulder but he flinched in pain. I guess his body was finally starting to react to the rough workout he had just come from. Matty was still watching us in shock. He opened his mouth but quickly shut
  7. You can go months maybe even years stuck in the same rut. Sometimes all it takes is a loving hand to pull you out. This week Elijah was that hand. When I went to bed Sunday night I was just a closeted kid obsessed with racing. 5 days later I became the youngest street racer in New Jersey history to compete in and win a 20+ league race, but more impressively I even found myself my first boyfriend. And now I’m ready to tell my 2 best friends. What can I say? I prefer to live fast. Elijah and I hu
  8. That night I slept like a baby. I know intentionally causing an accident would haunt most people but I didn’t care. I did what I had to, to provide for my family. It’s kill or be killed, and I don’t plan on dying anytime soon. My dad walked into my room and woke me up before he left for work. I could tell he wasn’t happy. He slammed my racing helmet down on the post of my bed and stared at it. I wiped the crud out of my eyes to try and get a better look at him. “What the fuck dad? It’s 6 AM” I
  9. You know those moments you never forget? The second I heard the crowd roar I knew this would be one of them. My reputation has preceded me and for once I’m being shown some respect. Mobs of people walked by and checked out both my mustang and my team. Gizmo and Gears both leaned against the car trying to act unimpressed by all the different sights and sounds, but I could tell they were floored by the differences between the 18+ leagues and the 20+ one. Particularly the topless women. Jax walk
  10. I’ve heard a million songs that claim love slows you down. Lately I’ve realized something, they’re all bullshit, and trust me I know a thing or two about going fast. I woke up with a shot of adrenaline. So this is what it feels like to truly be alive? I have everything I’ve ever wanted and then some, and no one’s going to stop me now. Going through my normal morning routine I couldn’t help but stop and watch my sisters take care of one another. We’ve experienced a lot of hard times over the p
  11. That's so inspiring. Takes a lot of guts. I know there are even some pro organization that are encouraging it, the Edmonton Oilers of the NHL allow players to use pride tape on their sticks during practice and warm ups (they can't use bright colors during games or im sure some would) and another NHL club the Washington Capitals are even having pride night! I know I plan on going to the New York Mets pride night next month! Thanks for sharing the site though, I can't wait to read them.
  12. Imagine if Darkseid had figured out Superman was Clark Kent or if the Joker figured out Batman was Bruce Wayne, well that’s what basically just happened to me. Okay fine, maybe I’m being a little overdramatic, but in the moment I swear that’s how it felt! “Elijah!” I shouted looking down at him. I was at a loss for words. I could feel my face turning redder and redder with every passing moment. Finally I got my hand under him enough to push him off of me. “Oh don’t be such a baby. So you like
  13. There I sat in the middle of a junk yard miles and miles away from where I really wanted to be. I could hear gears screaming and shouting to himself, desperately trying to make everything work the way he had it planned out in his head. “God fucking damn it” He shouted to himself “So much fucking work! Just swap the insides Jacob! It’ll be easy Jacob! While you’re at it why don’t you just find a way for it to run on water too?” He got so caught up with talking to himself I don’t think he reali
  14. I woke up with the same energy I had felt when I fell asleep. I know I’ve said it before but things just felt like they were firing on all cylinders. I went through my normal morning routine and headed off to school, still not brave enough to use my new license. As I approached my locker to prepare for the day I found Elijah sitting in front of it waiting for me. “What did you camp out here overnight?” I asked. His face lit up when he saw me approach. “Hey!” He squealed with excitement. “Alr
  15. Having played it's basically a combination of what everyone is saying. Mouth guards unfortunately aren't that reliable , one time I got slammed into the boards and hit my face on the ice and my tooth went flying, another time a stick came up and smacked me in the mouth and took out another. But for some players it can be a pride thing, I've definitely seen people proud to be missing teeth, it can show a level of toughness if done right. Also a lot of players have dentures but refuse to wear them during any of the regular season even if they're not in a game (I'm not sure why that one is, but hockey players are extremely superstitious). If you want there are also compilation videos of hockey players either pulling out their own teeth or searching on the ice for their missing ones, its a crazy but beautiful sport
  16. If you haven't played the gears of war series thats a great one. You can skip brotherhood and just play the first 3, the fourth is even on the way. To me they were some of the most fun I've ever had in a story
  17. It’s ironic. You can spend your whole life running from the things that scare you the most, but no matter how fast you are, no matter whom you are, life will always catch up with you. Eli broke our kiss, still stunned by everything that was happening. I wiped away his tears and pulled him in close. “You smell like shit.” He joked still sniffling “You don’t have to do this. Besides who even says I like you back.” I could tell his words were different from his feelings. He was holding me so tig
  18. Aceinthehole

    Chapter 6

    So glad you're enjoying it! Personally this is my favorite one that I've published so far.
  19. Me and Matty stepped out of the car and tried to gather all the confidence we could. It’s funny usually we wouldn’t dare take the car out during the day, but we didn’t really have much of a choice. I could see Mattys red hair gleam in the sun and sweat begin to bead down his face. “How can you be nervous? Aren’t you supposed to have like no soul or some shit?” I joked knowing it would bother him. “You really have to learn when and when not to joke around man” Matty said getting annoyed. Good,
  20. That night I could barely sleep. The whole day played over and over again, as if it were on a constant loop. When I finally passed out I dreamt I was a kid again. I was back on the ice doing what I loved. I started skating full speed toward the opposing goal. I saw Elijah streaking down the left side of the ice cradling the puck. He made a move and danced around a defenseman. Just like that it was a 2 on 1 chance, he dished me a beautiful pass and I buried an easy goal. I looked up and saw my m
  21. All I could see was red and blue lights flashing in every direction. I heard the sound of cars peeling out and what I can only assume were cop cars chasing after them. I tried to weave in and out of the crowd but there seemed to be more and more cops in every direction. I looked up and saw them tackle the new champion to the ground. Even though I knew I was fucked I couldn’t help but laugh. Before I could react I was knocked to the floor with a boot forcing me down. “New Jersey State Police sta
  22. Have you ever had one of those days where you think everything is gonna go perfect but it slowly and painfully starts to fall apart at the seams? Well, I’m smack in the middle of one right now. The rest of the school day dragged on, as much as I tried to ignore what happened at lunch I just couldn’t shake it. Every time I closed my eyes all I could see was Elijah standing there tears in his eyes and that dumb look of betrayal on his face. Why did this matter so much to him? We haven’t even been
  23. Aceinthehole

    Chapter 1

    Funny you should say that! He's definitely racing right around that area of central Jersey! Thanks for the great advice! I'm actually in the middle of writing the next few chapters and will change it! If you can think of anything else dont be afraid to let me know!!! Thanks for reading!
  24. I woke up the next morning full of energy. This is it! My first big break! The 18+ league may as well be a joke compared to the 20+ one, hell you need an invite just to get past the guards at the underpass and I finally have mine! I ran down the stairs ready to take on whatever challenge the day has to offer. There is no doubt about it, lifes finally looking up again and I’m not letting anything get in my way! I was getting my things together so fast my 4 sisters couldn’t help but give me shit
  25. Welcome! Because of some emails/messages in the past I feel like I need to add a disclaimer about the nature of the story. This is a dark story! It will have high highs and low lows! I would hate to turn anyone away from reading the story, after all I wrote it in hopes it would be loved by everyone who read it, sometimes I even have bigger dreams for it! Yet I also don't want to see anyone super upset by the course of this story. So...you've been warned! I'm editing my disclaimer to make it
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