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    Chapter 9 -- Obey

    From Obey: Good morning, Sir. I’m sitting here at my desk, in the office, strangely calm. I still have my dress shirt and khakis on, and underwear and socks and I don’t even feel like taking them off. People are gonna ask What’s wrong? But nothing’s wrong. Nothing. Thank you, Sir. From Alan: So you are going to keep it to yourself? From Obey: How about that? From Alan: Then quiet congratulations. From Obey: Not that quiet. And one thing I’ve got to tell you – I topped him. Fr
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    Chapter 8 -- Obey

    From Obey: Sunday, 42 days! 6 weeks, Sir! And there’s no way I’m giving in – I’m all revved up for the 60 days. That’s why I’ve been counting so carefully. And I appreciate the distraction but you’ve got to remember, I’ve been dealing with my dick 24/7. And it didn’t get any harder in my car than it does when I take off my chastity device. And I get hard on and off through the evening and at night and even during my workout. And I’ve run with Henry once or twice and the bouncing against my jock
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    Chapter 7 -- Obey

    From Obey: Good morning, Sir. This is Wednesday, my 31st day of chastity. You know you’ve taken my mind entirely off my dick and I didn’t think that was possible. Today all I can think about is you. Not being with you and not having sex together and not prying into your life. But suddenly I want to see more than that one pic. You don’t need to be naked. You don’t even have to have your shirt off. I don’t know what I want. Just something. From Alan: Here you go: me. In the same kind of photo
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    Chapter 6 -- Obey

    From Obey: Good morning, Sir. This is Wednesday, my 24th day of chastity. A frustrating, long day which began with me in the office at 6:15, meaning I had to skip my workout. I was hoping to leave early and catch up but it’s 6 pm again, like yesterday, and I’m still here. But my partner’s staying late at his office for a seminar so I may as well work. As for me keeping secrets from you – no, that’s not something I want to do. I want to be able to tell you anything I think or do and want you to t
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    Chapter 5 -- Obey

    From Obey: Good morning, Sir. This is Tuesday, my 16th hornier day of chastity and it’s not getting even close to time for me to cum. Also, the kid next door is fun to watch and I like his height when he’s off the ground with his arms stretched out. He’s like ten foot tall and I’m jealous. But I’d never go near anyone his age. It doesn’t interest me. And it would be great to say I never jerk off but you know that’s not true. It used to be, when my partner and I were always having sex. When that
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    Chapter 4 -- Obey

    From Obey: Good morning, Sir. This is Friday, my 12th day of chastity. I got this device in Atlanta. There are adult shops there but it’s not my first. That one came from the guy I dated there. He gave it to me partly as a joke, then locked me in just before I went home on a Sunday night. He kept the key. Over the next 5 days, it made me crazy because I’d always been able to touch my dick before. For a while it was cool but by Thursday, I was trying to wiggle out of it. I probably could have but
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    Chapter 3 -- Obey

    From Obey: This is Monday, my 8th day of chastity, Sir. This is a pic of me sitting naked in the office john. I just pissed up my chest so I’m wearing a dopey grin. And you notice I’m not wearing my chastity device yet because pissing all over it makes it hard to clean. But I’m so happy to get it on every morning because it means nothing can make me cum. As for what I know about you – well, your friend Johnny didn’t tell me any more than I’ve said. He didn’t even have a pic of you because he sai
  8. RichEisbrouch

    Chapter 26

    Thanks. All these comments have been really helpful. I honestly didn't know if I had an interesting book here, since it's mainly about lawyers talking.
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    Chapter 2 -- Obey

    From Obey: Good morning, Sir. This is my 4th day of chastity. I’ve attached the 4 pics you requested. The 3 of my dick I took this morning in the john at the office because I lock my chastity device in a box in my desk. The pic in my Sunday suit is a couple years old and it also shows my partner. I said I wouldn’t do that but the pic’s already on Facebook so I could say you found it there. Except you don’t know my name. You can see my partner’s pretty great looking except for his ears and he has
  10. RichEisbrouch

    Obey

    The continued adventures in sex and friendship, online and off, of Alan Damshroeder, a Cedar Rapids, Iowa, high school teacher. This book is different from the previous two because there are two long sections -- "Obey," and "Variation," which only contain two characters -- Alan and another man. Next, there's a conventionally written short story, "Bob," and the last section, "Other Nights," is composed of the usual short exchanges between Alan and a host of men he often never gets to meet.
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    Prologue

    1 Alan Damshroeder 46. 6'-1'' 180. Brown hair. Blue eyes. Clean shaven. Athletic. Well-educated. Married. Cedar Rapids, Iowa.
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    Chapter 1 -- Obey

    2 Obey From Obey: Hi, Sir. A sub here. Another Dom I was chatting with online suggested we might find ourselves more compatible. From Alan: I’m in Cedar Rapids, Iowa. You’re just north of Atlanta. We’re not even close. I don’t know what the guy was thinking, but thanks. From Obey: I think he was thinking I was into forced nudity, Sir, and what some folks might call borderline depravity. And he thought you might be interested. Sorry, Sir. From Alan: You’re already living in sm
  13. RichEisbrouch

    Chapter 26

    Thanks. Glad you enjoyed it. It's a short book, but you're right, there's a lot crammed in there, and those details may be hard to remember when the story is stretched over nine weeks. I never thought about that.
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    Chapter 26

    Well, I can't defend all lawyers. I can just write about some of them. But, yeah, I prefer to write about nice people. Again, thanks for reading
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    Chapter 26

    26 Doug Hodges couldn't quit shaking Ben Carleson's hand. "Thank you. Thank you. Thank you," he said. Then he hugged his wife, Jenny. And he hugged his ex-wife, Pam. And he hugged both of his sons and their wives. They'd all come to the courtroom that morning, in support. "To tell you the truth, I was there in case Dad fell apart," Carleson heard Doug's older son tell the woman who was either his wife or his sister-in-law. "He was so disappointed the last time." The one thing Doug Ho
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    Chapter 25

    Yep, there's one last chapter.
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    Chapter 25

    25 The following morning began with Stu Lee's closing argument. Then Ben Carleson made his. Both of them said little that was different from what they'd established in their openings and what they'd worked to support during the trial. Both seemed confident, and both were careful not to grandstand or gloat. Lee concluded, "Think logically. Douglas Hodges gave his word to his closest friends that he wouldn't let an admittedly drunk Brad Coghlan drive. Would the good Mr. Hodges go back on h
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    Chapter 24

    24 When Doug finished that part of his testimony, the judge called for a break. Even she could tell he was wiped out, and she wanted to give him a few minutes before he went on. When Doug returned to the stand, Carleson asked him about his injuries, and Doug carefully repeated much of the information his two doctors had given. Only he made it more personal - explaining the pain he still had to manage every day and his new physical limits. Lee's cross-examination came next, and Doug was p
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    Chapter 24

    In fact, this information about Carleson realizing Lowe's weakness and the possible reasons for it seems so important that I'm adding it into the text. Thanks.
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    Chapter 24

    As mentioned in the chapter: Lowe seems to be an intelligent, genuine human being. That's why the jury initially responds to him and one of the reasons Carleson sees him as a threat. Lowe wouldn't have become an expert witness if people in courtrooms didn't trust him and his testimony. But Carleson seems to found Lowe's weakness for this trial: Because Lowe had been through the previous trial, he thought he was well prepped for this one, and Lee neglected to alert him to the new evidence -- the testimony of Ahmed Patel. Or, worse, Lee did alert Lowe, and Lowe still felt he could present his same theory and override Patel's point of view.. In any case, Lowe was honestly impressed with Carleson's skill and, as one professional to another, wanted to compliment him. Lowe had no personal goal. He was just being the nice guy he is.
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    Chapter 22

    Yeah, well, you were right there with Carleson. Thanks.
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    Chapter 19

    Again, Carleson's guide for trials is: first, settle out of court if you can, to avoid the unpredictable complications of a trial. Next, if you're in a difficult situation during a trial, try to get through it simply and minimize the impact on the jury. He built that out of years of experience and, occasionally, making the wrong choices and racing to offset the repercussions.
  23. RichEisbrouch

    Chapter 15

    This is good to know. Since it's a pair of personal injury trials, I wasn't sure what the interest level of readers would be.
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    Chapter 23

    Sure thing. Gotta keep kind of closed mouth on this, to keep other readers reading. But thanks.
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    Chapter 6

    Nah, just a handful. The readers have enough details to juggle.
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