Westarcher
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Sorry for the late reply, I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. Everything is hotting up, quite literally.
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“What do you call this?” I entered my apartment to find Matty, Ben, Luca, and Georgie in sleeping bags, while Tobi was settled on the sofa. “We’re having a sleepover,” Matty explained. “Did I give you permission to have one?” I asked sternly. I was tired and irritable after listening to those survivors. “No, but you weren’t around to ask,” Matty whined like a five-year-old, “Besides Tobi was keeping an eye on us,” “Hmm,” I bit off my comment about Tobi not being old en
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Chapter thirteen explains everything hopefully, but yes Alex is not exactly utilising the technology to hand. You'll also see Alex becomes better friends with Noah for sure.
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Ah you shall see what happens, a few more chapter's and they will be out in the world.
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Thanks, I'm really glad people are still enjoying it. It will all be explained when the saboteur is revealed.
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Glad you enjoyed the chapter, I wasn't sure if it was as pacey as the rest. They will find out who the saboteur is soon, and their reasons behind it.
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Days seemed to blend in here unless we looked at a calendar we didn’t know whether it was Tuesday or a Sunday, but I marked the days since entering the Mountain and today was day thirty-nine. I had declared a lazy day today, so the younger ones were all playing games or watching a movie in the front room as the rest of us were enjoying hot drinks looking over the mountainside, which had a cloud of mist around it. I moved over to Noah, who was once again sitting on the sidelines and watching the
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I'd be keen to find out why you didn't want contact with the larger base. Also, there will always be collaborators, some people who are weasels.
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The Event was the attack on earth by the aliens, that's what it has been named. I'm afraid the saboteur is going to be a mystery for a few more chapters and they will be doing some more damage!
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Thanks for the comments, we will get to see more people come into the story. Including a possible love rivalry, but romance is more a sub plot.
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I woke up stiff the next morning, my back hurting from the night on the couch. I got up checking on Tobi, who was still snoring peacefully. I dressed then tried to wake Tobi before leaving the apartment, taking my morning things with me. After a quick face wash and teeth clean, I grabbed a cup of tea and slid into the Operations Room moments later. Grabbing one of the headsets, I slipped a battery into place, taking a seat on the computer designated U.K. mainland on the European Division bank of
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Thanks for the comments, the saboteur will act again, be assured of that. They'll be acting on a more personal scale too.
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Thanks for the comment, can't give away reasons just yet but they have their reasons. I wonder who the saboteur is?
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Unfortunately, Alex likes Tobi as a little brother. He's a little too young for Alex at the moment. There is more sabotage to come and a greater incident in a few chapters.
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Not a good idea, but they will have to go outside soon!
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You'll find out about the back door soon! The AI is a very important tool.
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Thanks for commenting. There's a lot going on at the moment.
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If you haven't already checked it out, I've got a link on my profile to a blog where there are floor plans of the Bunker. Unfortunately, Tobi will always be in love with Alex I think, even if he can only be friends. Maybe when they both come of age, Alex will be more interested.
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Like the others think Alex wants to get out secretly, so it's not surprising he goes through the exit doors. The back door is going to become a major issue in later chapters.
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Thanks for the comments, the backdoor is a major issue that will come up in the later chapters
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There's going to be a lot of tense moments between Tobi and Alex, but Alex may end up with neither. Still glad to see you are enjoying the story.
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As I continue to write, I'm liking Tom character more. He comes out of his shell a little more and maybe out of Larry's shadow.
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There will be some adults to come, but will Alex be able to retain control when they eventually find some adults?
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Ah, there will be zombies also, I expect to see much more in the second half of the story.
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Larry is going to learn his place, unfortunately, they will need teamwork for the place to work.
