R. Eric
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You're not supposed to be calm. Now, you sort of understand why Makarovia became what it did. Milo and Bren are two major reasons. Why wasn't there a Makaroiva anywhere on this world?
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Part Two: Bren Speaks “The guards were so…cruel, just evil,” Bren said wailing. “The guards when we were brought into the camp had us take everything off and…” he stopped taking another sip, you heard it. “One had this sort of baton he used to beat us with I would find out later. He…” Bren stopped again and you heard Milo speaking again to Bren softly. “He…he stuck it in my ass. It hurt. It was a polished piece of round wood, but it hurt. Milo jumped to stop it, but…” his words broke,
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Europeans....especially the French do consider it gamey. That's a fact.
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The idea of including Bren's and Milo's story was to show how Makarovia became what it was. It was really born during that period of time. I wanted everyone to understand and wonder why there wasn't a real Makarovia. There should have been. That's a major reason the Peter's and Eric's marriage was not considered bizarre by Makarovian or the ruling family. I thought gave an explanation. And there would be more understanding by people who read who were now rooting for them because of Bren's and Milo's tragedy in Germany and victory in Makarovia. Blame my muse! Or those voices in my head that whisper these things to me. Wiseass, that's me, remember?
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I was late. Work again. Thanks, Droughtquake. My friend. I love ya.
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Part One of: Bren Speaks We did invite the American men outside to have a nice Thanksgiving dinner in the formal dining room. It was almost a buffet style, but Boris didn’t care for buffets. The table was elegantly set with the china and silver available to use and was attended by other staff members who worked inside the house to help Boris. Only most of the household staff was American, too. No problem. We served them! That’s right, served by Boris, Yuri, grandmother, Peter and me! I
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Nah, I was late. I was working! I have a job where I can write at work...when it's slow. It wasn't. I love to kid you and you give it right back! I love you to death!!
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Hurry to chapter 9. That's all I'm saying.
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True, however the Holocaust was more about the horrible things that the Germans did. People that we Jewish suffered so much. She was there to show that there were Jews that suffered and she was female. I chose her gender and Hebrew roots to show a point. Jewish people lost millions. Almost every homosexual died. Of the 100,000 take only about 5,000 survived. It was horrible. I wrote as female and Hebrew to show we didn't suffer alone.
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I wish I could say she was. She is based...oh, what the Hell!? I made up a country. It was me! Okay? No, I'm not female and don't act female (I think), but she was based on what I knew. So, she's me. Okay? Love ya!
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Part Two There was a period of spoken words that Milo was giving to Bren that wasn’t really heard, it was to Bren only. “Do you need a break, Bren?” Dr. Lowenstein asked compassionately. You could hear a sniff. “No, I’m alright. Maybe some water?” “Sure.” Dr. Lowenstein said kindly. “I’ll be right back.” What was interesting was, she kept the recorder on. Was it on purpose? We heard what was said by Bren and Milo to each other. “I don’t know if I can do it, Milo.” “Yo
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It is a mountainous area in Eastern Europe. The Carpathian area. The voices in my head directed me to it. That and Stryia and Skoal.
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Sorry, I was late this time. I am WORKING. Yes, I write at my job. Sue me. I'm off tonight so part two is coming. I love your insights. I depended on you a lot the past few months. I agree with all you said. I really do love you. I go on my first...date? In a few days. I'd date you, but you're thousands of miles away!!! Really, thank you. I do love you.
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PART ONE It was the next morning I sent a message to Olek telling him by email telling him what I wanted to do. Then we went to class and the daily chaos. It was after we got back when we saw a stranger talking with Yuri in the kitchen. Yuri had too much to do to just go to class with us every day and was now confident the men escorting Peter and me could do the job well. The stranger was a man in his late thirties with short brown hair he was just losing. The crown of his head w
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Schizophrenia? Multiple Personalities? Pick a mental illness. One will fit.
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I have one thing to say to that. I say it in the love of a wiseass. DUH! Love you!
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I love you, too.
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I'm not as crazed as I was the past few months to over a year. I've calmed down. Hopefully, you'll see it. Grief made me a little crazy.
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I live for your words!! I can always count you to be the first comment. Again! You weren't late!
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The end of the semester was coming and we had to study. This time I was glad there were no distractions. The pressure just built the closer we got to the semester’s end. With any of the other students, how you did during the semester determined how well you would do during exams. Peter was a good student. He studied hard. There was one drawback as in we didn’t get a lot of time to enjoy college life. No parties and almost none of the football games or campus activities. The few times we did, it
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You're supposed to cry. I did! The events were real. I just added fictional names to the events. My plan was to write a story when I asked if someone....say Prince Harry or Prince William or any other decided to marry a man. It's legal there. What would happen? The country and allowing them to and welcomed them came afterwards. It is evolving on it's own. Doing the history of Makarovia, it just...happened. That happens a lot with me. Sad and happy. That's what I write. Thanks for the kind words.
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You'll get both! I'm still moving ahead with the wedding for Peter and Eric. I am including more about Milo and Bren. As you read, there were clips, plural, of Bren's sessions. Whether he gets better or not is the reason to keep reading!! I pay attention to feedback. All is welcome.
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These past two years taught me a lot. I'm just passing it on. Another word of advice. DON'T WASTE TIME! Find someone to LOVE! That loves you!! It is priceless!
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You got it! That was part of my plot!!
