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Yes there is a lot of love between them but Because they are Brothers and lovers. But will they end up together? who knows there are lots of people in the world.

Thank you, Chapter six will come soon and chapter 7 we find out more about Gabe's Mom

Thanks so much I'm really glad that you enjoy the story. chapter 6 will come soon. Merry Christmas Zulu

Chapter 5 Gabe and Brad drove into Arlow but instead of going shopping as they planned; they decided to stop at the hospital and check on the Barrett family. When they got there, Brad used his connections as a Sheriff's deputy to find out what the condition of the Barrett’s were and where to find the kids. Mrs. Barrett was in surgery; she had a subdural hematoma and lacerated liver. Justin did have a broken wrist, a badly bruised ankle and a small laceration to the scalp above his righ

Just binged read all ten chapters WOW you have done a great job creating suspense and maintaining it. Thanks so much for your literary efforts can't wait til the next chapter is posted. And I agree Matt could give Marc a few pointers.

Chapter 4 Brad’s eyes popped open as he wakes from a dream. He is not sure what it was about but was certain he didn’t want to go back to it. That is when Brad realized Gabe has him wrapped up in his comforting arms. Sighing Brad relaxes into Gabe’s embrace and thinks back to the first time he came to this house. He was eight and in third grade, and Brad had been invited to Gabe’s ninth birthday party and sleep over him, and four other of Gabe’s friends slept in sleeping bags in the

Thank you so much the next chapter should be up shortly

Hit it out of the park again Carlos. I really like the way CJ handled his mother, though I feel it's a bit unrealistic in his calmness. My 18 yr old son has problems with his mom my ex. And he hS tried to have adult conversations with her she reacted much like Lourdes and it went from civil to argument in no Time. But I still love the story and the chapter. Ted

As always when I get stuck in my own writing I find yours has a way to spark my inspiration. Ah yes CJ and Owen I think the age difference is being to show. CJ is afraid of being hurt by someone he truly loves again. Owen got hurt but got a taste of genuine affection with CJ, so yes his heart is hungry. As for the money thing I understand were both are coming from. Growing up I was always the one with a job and money in my pocket. I enjoyed being able to go and do Becuase of the freedom of having the money provided. But I hated the fact that I was the only one to be able to have that freedom. My friends always found it hard to except me being the funding behind our adventures I had to learn how to strike a balance between being the giver and being the receiver. Thanks again for another great chapter. And I look forward to the next one. Now off to finish my next chapter. Ted

yes they have but all will not bee so easy for them. Thanks for the encouragement and suggestions. Still working out the kinks but really appreciate you sticking with the boys and us. Please keep letting us know what you feel about our story. Thanks again. Ted

Thanks for the review. chapter 4 is coming and yes there are going to bumps along the way for Gabe and Brad. Thanks for the encouragement. Please let me know your thoughts on future chapters. Ted P.S. HEA just doesn't happen they require work and sacrifice, nd some pain so the HEA is appreciated.

Gabe Darby: Chapter 3 When Brad and Gabe arrived at the German house, AJ was not there yet. So they grabbed a booth and ordered a couple of beers. “The house is beautiful, and it’s not that far from dad’s place,” said Gabe. “And with the additional property, the potential of the place is fantastic.” But don’t you believe it’s a little small?” asked Brad. “For now it will work, and in the spring we can start the expansion I want to do” replied Gabe with a wicked grin. “Expan

very nicely done, it expresses love and romance very well

Great chapter Carlos. I enjoyed the guns discussion. Yes it is a difficult subject and requires critical thinking. I am glad CJ and Owen both show that they can use their minds and control their emotions. So many of the problems in our Society and the World, stem from an over abundance of emotions and lack of the ability to think through the other sides point of view, prevent coming to a consensus. Now there is a word that I think needs to have its definition read to our houses of government at all levels every time they meet to remind them that consensus is the way things move forward. Now I will step down off my soap box and let other more eloquent Orators and Authors have their say. Thanks again for your wonderful and compelling story. Ted

Thank you working on that hope to have up mid week next