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By "bad" mode, do you mean "swimming naked in the ocean" bad??? Or like guns and stuff bad 😂😂💪
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Yeah, I love him right now 😍 That was so funny!
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The soft hiss of air brakes woke D from a light, uneasy sleep. He blinked his eyes open and sat up slightly, careful not to jostle Joey, who was still curled up against his side. The dim cabin lights overhead glowed yellow-orange, casting sleepy halos over the heads of the other passengers. Through the window, D saw a worn, flickering sign: RESTON TRAVEL CENTER. They'd reached the changeover stop. Joey stirred against him with a groan, rubbing his eyes and scrunching his face like
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The fire was out and cold air crept in through the cracks in the cabin’s walls, curling damp and unforgiving around D’s back. He blinked into the dim light of early morning, muscles sore from sleeping on hardwood, his limbs tangled with the boy’s beside him. Joey. Still curled up close, his face soft with sleep, one hand resting over D’s chest like it belonged there. D didn’t move for a moment. He just looked. Joey’s lashes twitched, his pink lips parted on a quiet breath, an
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Haha! The comment about the batteries and the one about YouTube having practical uses 😂😂😂 thanks a lot, I feel like an idiot now 😂 Glad you had fun anyway. I should have the next chapter out by Sunday??? Now they've gotta get out of the woods....
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Me too. I'll figure it out. I mean... I have an idea 💡
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Omg! I won't go this angle, but what if the small town police just overreacted because D's black 😂
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I was waiting for you to say something 🤣 I did multiple versions again. The version with "normal" police was boring, so... this one!
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@drpaladin @andy cannon @centexhairysub @akascrubber @pvtguy @chris191070 @VBlew I got everyone's comments and I DEEPLY APPRECIATE THEM! I'm trying not to say too much so I don't ruin it, but THANK YOU! 😛😛😛😛 You guys make all the effort worth it 😝👏👏👏👏🤗
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Wikipedia says on Mel Tillis : "After a bout of malaria during his childhood, he developed a stutter." I didn't include it, because I thought it was too sad, but Joey also had that... Some fever as a 3 year old that caused, I guess, brain damage. Anyway, I saw some girl with a stutter singing on America's Got Talent. I know nothing about country. The one genre I don't touch 😂😎 And I was waiting for you! You were missed 🤗
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The rain had stopped sometime during the night, leaving the world washed and still. A pale gray light filtered through the guest room curtains, soft and sleepy. The silence in the farmhouse wasn’t empty—it was full. Full of warmth. Full of breath. Full of old wood and ticking clocks, and the low hum of a stove working in another room. Joey blinked his eyes open slowly, adjusting to the dimness. For a second, he forgot where he was. Then he felt the weight of an arm draped across his wa
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Haha! I went back and added that later 😂 There were 5 versions of that car ride 😂
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🥺🥺 I thought D as a name was cool 😂
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Aww how did you know 🤔 And D doesn't lie to Joey 🤥
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You guys are all so funny 😂😂🤣
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The farmer’s truck rattled down the narrow country road, the scent of diesel mixing with the damp air of October. The old guy drove like he’d been doing it his whole life—left hand at twelve o’clock, shoulders slouched, eyes relaxed under his faded ballcap. His wife, her silver curls tucked up in a pink bandana, was cheerful in the passenger seat, humming softly to the radio. D sat in the back, stiff and alert despite the sleepy road, but beside him, Joey was practically bouncing from the
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😂😂😂 That wording also gave me pause, ngl
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I won't say anything about Nina 🤐 But this is from the first two lines in the second chapter, babe! : The body was still warm when Milo asked if they should burn the clothes or bag them. Darius Cole didn’t answer right away. He was crouched by the wall, wiping a splatter of blood off the cracked baseboard with bleach and a rag.
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Perfect on River! 😍👌 I was thinking more Idris Elba but young, for D 😂 I love that guy 😍
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The sunrise hit the windshield like soft fire, bleeding gold over the horizon. It was Sunday morning and they were still in Ohio, just barely. The trees blurred past in a rush of yellow and orange as the old Nissan rumbled along under D’s hands. The heater hissed low, working overtime to beat back the chill. Joey had finally stopped shivering, wrapped in his new hoodie with the hood up, legs curled under him in the passenger seat. A protein bar sat half-eaten in his lap. “So, tell me,” D sa
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Smooth journey? 😂 Where's the fun in that???!
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I hear you. I thought it'd be more fun without excess money, so SNAP! Logically, they should have at least tried. My bad 😅
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Well, he's distracted 😆
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Yes. It's related. My days are numbered!!! 😅 I'm probably having ribs today 😂
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The bell above the door jingled as Joey followed Josh into Wally’s. The ride over had been mostly quiet—Joey bouncing his knee the entire time, hands clammy, burner phone hot in his pocket like a ticking time bomb. Now they were inside. The overhead lights were too bright, buzzing faintly, and the air conditioning blasted cold across Joey’s clammy skin. Josh beelined for the snack aisle, muttering something about beef jerky. Joey lingered by the drink cooler, pretending to browse
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