mastershakeme

It is a good switch... Dalmatians and firemen go together perfectly.

So, I read this to my little girl! She's only 4 months old, so I couldn't get her opinion, but she quieted down and listened! Probably because I started smiling as I read and laughed a little, wondering who Mamma was 🤣 Beautiful imagery, the little girl reminded me of my own little blondie so I instantly liked her. Idk why, but I was surprised, pleasantly so, when I realized Liebe had two daddies. I mentioned in another post I'm not having a lot of luck finding little kids books that aren't boring to my high class tastes 😋 but this was right up my alley, I mean, there's a cute puppy in the background and a sexy PG-fireman!!! All in the first scene 😁 I'd be interested in reading more and sharing with my baby girl

You are correct, it's pretty hard to get to know someone when you don't talk to them. All those stories sound so magical 😄 The way you talk about them is enchanting. I've definitely heard of your Drop-in center... I'm super excited to be invited! I'll try not to be too shy... I have a feeling you and your Dom have a lot of knowledge to pass along!

Omg I'm sorry!!!!!!! I didn't know that's what you thought!!! You're absolutely right. Fanfiction is a totally different world than this one. Hi! I'm Caitlyn! I come from Harry Potter Fandom I loooove a dark drama. Magic and spaceships aren't necessary. I deal in the emotions department I got into Gay fiction because the sex was HOT and I was able to find more than one author that wrote deep, engaging characters with interesting stories to tell...

Are you a published author??? You really are a master of your craft... I know you're right, I've gotten better by reading... I think that's what I meant to say in my last comment... It's been so long since I've read anyone else's work, I've been so absorbed with the stresses of life and also, absorbed with my own writing. I just didn't have the time to read. But I know enough about writing now to see the skill you have. It took me a while to read this short chapter because I was studying it so intently. This reminded me of college writing, my professor made us read short stories and a novel or two, in the course of a semester and in class we'd discuss what we thought was good about the writing. This is so much more fun though because for once, I get to read something that's in the M/M category Do you know how embarrassed I was bringing in my M/M romance to college writing???? I did it though because it was what I wanted to write about most... Idk if its weird for a girl to like M/M but whatever, I'm going with it. Thanks for replying and for being so encouraging. That means a lot to me and I will be reading this very thoroughly. But... my break from the baby is over now Daddy's off to work.

I feel kind of bad... I've never read anything like this before. The relationship between Don and Louis is so very real and tangible. You paint such vivid pictures with your writing!!! This puts all my little slash fiction to shame. This is real romance. The situation is so crushingly sad and because I was standing right there next to Louis, I swear I could feel his mental anguish. The conversation Loius has with Rena made me cry, too. Omg!!!! He doesn't want to lie to Don, but Rena is like 'just wait for him to be strong enough first!!!' OMG I WAS TEARING UP SO BAD!!!!! 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 How did you make me care about these characters so quickly?! You are so talented! Sorry 😂 its been a while since I've read anything besides my own crap. This was such a pleasant surprise. Fiction with the feels!!!

I think this is the most beautiful opening line I have ever read. I can't wait to read this... 😍

Gurlmance. GURL! Thank you!!!! I like it... you just coined a new term you flipping genius Gurlmance!!!!!