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Thanks for reading and reviewing, Sammy Sam Sam! I'm glad you're enjoying it!
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Thank you for reading and reviewing! Don't worry, I've worked out the mechanics of how these things work, I just don't want to give everything away yet. But you're correct, Adam and Ivy haven't figured it all out yet.
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Chapter IV September 27th, 2143 A.D. Orbital Platform Leonidas Low Orbit Over Neptune Sector J: Quarantine The elevator descended rapidly. It was hard to tell that it was moving at all. It lifted with barely a jolt and only recoiled gently when it stopped. The only way to tell that it was moving was by the luminous display next to the controls. The air inside smelled stale, a result of not being recycled on the evacuated decks. Then again, I might have been imagining things. Ivy and
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Chapter 6 ::Red:: * * * * * “Now Benny, I want you to try to keep me out of your head,” Miss Frost instructed. I didn’t like the way she said my name. She was trying to sound friendly, but it just wasn’t working. I don’t know what Mr. Summers sees in her. “It didn’t work,” she glared at me, “And what Mr. Summers and I do is none of your business.” I blushed, and made every conscious effort I could to not think about Mr. Summers’ butt. I started to feel a bit of a tickle in my head, just beh
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I am SUCH a huge fan of the first two, I can't wait to get my hands on 3. I've been looking forward to playing it for months. (I also wrote an article on Examiner about Dead Space 3, go read it! )
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So, I wrote a new article today (Read it here!) about how Wreck-It Ralph won a prestigious animation award, and it got me thinking about video game movies. I compiled a list of movies (separated into the good, the bad, and the Uwe Boll), but now I'm wondering what you guys think. What are your favorite video game movies, if any? Which ones do you despise? Lets hear it!
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Yesterday, Sony announced a big event planned for February 20th, and all signs point to it being the Playstation 4. Read about it here: http://www.examiner.com/article/rumors-soar-that-the-playstation-4-will-be-revealed-at-new-york-event
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I'm not sure if I have a favorite celebrity... Probably someone from the Food Network, like Chef Robert Irvine, lol.
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Chapter III September 27th, 2143 A.D. Orbital Platform Leonidas Low Orbit Over Neptune Sector F: Biotech Research “I just can’t believe it,” Crowe exclaimed after we explained what had happened on the bridge. “Admiral Lane is dead?” “He was shot in the face. We can assume he won’t be joining us anytime soon.” I replied bluntly. The three of us were crammed into Crowe’s quarters, which would have been a fairly spacious room if not for the boxes and
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Hey Podga.The idea I had was that the creature wouldn't actually be feeling any pain. It's the same reason zombies appear to have supernatural strength, they don't have a pain reflex that would stop a normal human. So I guess it was more that it had normal fingernails, but was able to dig into the flesh more.
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Chapter II September 27th, 2143 A.D. Orbital Platform Leonidas Low Orbit Over Neptune We ran as fast as our legs would carry us. The corridors were empty; most people were probably at their stations or with their families. Under normal circumstances, the halls of a ship this size buzzed with activity. I had to assume the illness had the crew of the Leonidas terrified, partly due to spreading rumors. Rumors travelled fast on a huge platform like thi
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Oh, it's Alucard. They revealed Alucard in the 3DS game... Looks just like him.
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It suddenly struck me that that tiny pea, pretty and blue, was the Earth. I put up my thumb and shut one eye, and my thumb blotted out the planet Earth. I didn't feel like a giant. I felt very, very small. -Neil Armstrong Footsteps of Giants Chapter I September 27th, 2143 A.D. Orbital Platform Leonidas Low Orbit over Neptune I’d forgotten how hot these damned suits are. They were made from seventy-three synthetic fibers and weaved together to form a mesh
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Brilliant scientist Doctor Adam Klein is sent into the far reaches of the solar system, to become the Chief Medical Scientist of a large Orbital Platform called "Leonidas" orbiting the planet Neptune. People who live and work on the Leonidas have begun to display signs of a strange illness, and it's up to him to find out what's going on. But Dr Klein is about to find out that things are not what they seem, and that the Leonidas may become his tomb.
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The teaser trailer for this game looks amazing!!! **SPOILER!!!!!!!!** I can't wait to use the vampire powers! You're playing as Dracula! SQUEEEEE!!!!
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It's a reboot. As cool as Dante was, he didn't REALLY have much of a personality. Dante in this game is younger. Much younger than in the previous games. It doesn't mean he won't ever have silver hair, he just doesn't have it at this point in time. When he's in "Devil Trigger" mode, he has white hair, and looks like classic Dante. I'm assuming (I admit this is pure speculation) this means at some point in the game he's going to embrace his power and demonic nature, and will end up looking like his old self. TL;DR Same Dante, new story, can't possibly be worse than DMC2.
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If you wanna know, you're just gonna have to read Consequences. :]
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Read Consequences! It's the sequel! :]
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Oh wow! I loved all of the subtle things you put in the story. Like the mention of chicken and broccoli alfredo, and glass of iced tea. Rather than saying, "I cooked dinner", this gives a small feeling that these characters are actually real! Also, gives us all a bit of insight into YOU, lol. I really liked how ordinary the characters felt. It felt as if these were characters that you could actually meet and talk to. A lot of times, when we think about a film director, we imagine this larger than life person. We don't typically think about the fact that they're regular, everyday people. Great debut! *Can't wait to read more*
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Chapter 5 ::Wolf in the Fold:: * * * * * Life changed considerably, once again, after that fateful day in Team Skills. The word had spread like wildfire that some new kid was able to take out Spartan in combat. Which, of course, was a gross exaggeration. I’d gotten lucky, plain and simple. But like it always happens in every high school throughout the world, once something gets in the rumor mill, it’s nearly impossible to stop. It didn’t help that Peter was telling everyone he sa
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Chapter 4 ::Lessons Learned:: * * * * * I awoke in my bed to the sound of one of those cheesy teen comedies and Peter’s laughter. He was obviously trying to be quiet, as he was desperately clutching at his mouth, but was losing the battle. His face was red, and his shoulders were moving up and down as he giggled quietly. “This movie sucks,” I said. Realizing I was awake, he just let himself go, falling out of his chair and rolling around on the floor. Finally his giggles
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Chapter 3 ::Danger Room:: ***** I stared at him blankly for a few minutes. “Ben Reilly?” I asked. He nodded, giving me a strange look. “Your dad is Ben Reilly?” I asked him again. “Yes,” he said a little impatiently. “What does that have to do with anything?” “Your dad is Ben Reilly!” I said just as impatiently, as if that explained everything. He bent down and scooped up his photo album. “If I’d known you were gonna freak out, I wouldn’t have shown you,” he m
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Chapter 2 ::Long Lost:: ***** I walked down the long hallway that seemed to have no end, and occasionally looked at Mr. Summers’ butt. Okay, I out right stared the entire time. He was hot! Geez! My dad had just dropped me off about an hour ago. It was Friday, and I was incredibly nervous about starting at a new school. I’d had a few days off, because it took some time to clear the paperwork between the schools, and I hadn’t been looking forward to going back. After Mr Summers took
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Tangled Web by WrathOfMagneto Chapter 1 ::New Mutant:: ***** I came out to my dad when I was thirteen. I’d known for sure I was gay for about a year, and after an excruciatingly long period of chickening out, I finally confided in him. I should have known I’d have nothing to worry about. He’d known for longer than I did! God, how embarrassing. Looking back, he’d tried to tell me it was alright a lot of times. Like he’d tell me it was perfectly fine to be different. That there was
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Benny Parker is your average ordinary gay high school student. Except for the fact that his father is known throughout the world as the Amazing Spider-Man. When the Xavier Institute for Higher Learning wants to enroll him in their school, life gets a lot more complicated.
