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    The Reunion

    patrick1991 commented on Headstall's story chapter in The Reunion

    Beautiful and sweet ... The song "My Heart Will Go On" By Celine Dion was playing from my playlist in the background... just perfect for the reunion of Mr. Arthur and Mrs.Sybil and meeting of Logan and Tilly!
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    “I promise I won’t be bossy unless you give me permission. this line had me rotfl! glad Delia and Hutch met so sweet.... Cant wait for Author and Sybil!
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    You really need to be published or get more views.. I do not know if you have heard of Wattpad, but you could do really well in the Manxman werewolf category! Just saying share this incredible story with more people. I hope I am not overstepping or anything, but I can see you getting plenty of views and you can take their opinions and see how well you will do! Amazon, Books-A-Million, and Barnes and Noble await!
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    Oh my goodness, Gary! Wow! Phenomenal! I can't believe this! I feel like crying! My boyfriend held me a little closer and we love this! so damn good! the connection with these two and finding out that Mrs. Sybil mate is alive just wow! Is it okay that we laughed when we found out that his real name was not Bill? LOl
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    I love history and even though this is fiction, it is profound!
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    Boyfriend: Hey did you cook today? Me: Uh yeah… Boyfriend: What is it? (Looking at stove) Me: Venison stew Boyfriend: What the hell is that? Me: The stuff shifters love Boyfriend: You are reading that story again aren’t you? The one we read together last night about those wolves? Me: Of course 16 chapters to go! LOL Boyfriend: (Who does not like to read): Why didn’t you wait for me? Me: giggles (Yes, I giggled) I should have waited for you this morning on chapter 37! LOL Thank you, Gary for bringing my boyfriend and me closer! Great chapter can’t wait to see what he decision the alpha will make and what the painting means. I keep thinking come together!!!
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    loved the interaction btw father and son. Kellar is getting better by the minute with his healing power! I want the packs to join up together lol...
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    Maybe Tilly can help Logan! Damn, I have been thinking abut this all day.. home from work lol
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    I am mad that I read this chapter... it got me hot and my boyfriend is at work and I need to get ready for work.. Now, I have to take a cold shower. Very intense and beautiful chapter their bond is growing. I have to tell my boyfriend about that position LOL (wink wink)
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    I cannot believe it! My boyfriend,the non-reader just read this aloud to me! you accomplished something great! this chapter had it all! just wow!!
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    Ok do not laugh, but my boyfriend just reminded me I have work tomorrow. I was off today. I have been giving him brief synopsis of each chapter (He is NOT a reader LOL), and he is enjoying it as well. He thought someone in the pack was a traitor … I am really trying to finish this though tonight. So maybe I can or not, but I know it will be on my mind all day lol. BTW, their lovemaking scene was brilliant!
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    LOl OK, so I was wrong about the way the hunters could detect the shifters, but the way this all came together was really neat. I am proud of Warren lol BTW, the bed scene was good and I like the way you addressed the prep most authors shy away from this,but hey, it has to be done lol!!! I hope you have more stories on here that are completed. I hate when there are good authors with mind-blowing stories that go unfinished or there is only one!!! I have to go to your profile page lol..
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    having been around ex- addicts, I know it can be difficult for them. You did a an excellent job with the details and the feelings. I know Adeline will make Warren continue to want to stay clean... This was a great chapter I guess the calm before the proverbial storm of leaving, killing he Reznick btw, reminds me of another word lol that I will not say on here to not offend anyone. Warren is so right, Kellar did not HAVE to call him, but he did... very good!
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    I think I have figured it out... the hunter was scarred by a shiftier so that is probably how he got his smelling abilities.. I think lol great chapter very touching, It is like I tell the gossipers at work everyone has a story and you do know it so do not pass judgement..
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    I was wondering if they were going to tell Adelin first lol I know they are being protective never thought the brother would appear again... boy, the excitement and intensity are building. Is it wrong to want to kill my fellow human for being hunters??? lol
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    Chapter 50

    patrick1991 commented on WolfM's story chapter in Chapter 50

    Thank you wolf for replying to my comments! I realize that this is fiction and lol you are just that good that I forgot LOL you did a great story, but it wiil take me a while before I can read about Chris... However, I will... Now where is that sequel lol???
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    This is so good, but it has me worried. Not about Warren, but the hunters able to sense them out...
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    My boyfriend wants to know why I am screaming and shouting LOL it is just that good and intense!
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    Okay, I ascertain that Tobyn was dumped and blindsided, but I think he is obstinate just a little bit. He has to recognized that this is a lot of firsts for Kellar as well...
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    I like her!
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    the mating bond is working... Glad the sister is healed if only that was true in the real world... great story so far!
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    Wow, great story so far! At first, I was not going to read ti because I hate it when they do not know what or who they are; however, you did a great job with the learning process. I believe that Kellar is old gray wolf grandson and it was his kids who died..
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    Chapter 50

    patrick1991 commented on WolfM's story chapter in Chapter 50

    other than than one problem I had about mother killing son- Great story!!!
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    Chapter 46

    patrick1991 commented on WolfM's story chapter in Chapter 46

    I have got to say this (Jean) or whoever the hell he is kills many even when he did not have to and gets off Scot free. Micheal, who did not kill anyone (attempted murder) is not only killed, but by his own damn mother! I still have a BIG problem with this! I know Micheal was evil ,but since when attempted murder warrants death!!! the one who did murder lives! great story though this is my only pet peeve... sorry I had to vent about this! BTW, who is poisoning Dorian hmmm....
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    Chapter 42

    patrick1991 commented on WolfM's story chapter in Chapter 42

    I’m sorry, Alpha. It just kinda slipped out and I don’t let anyone other than Aiden calling me a little bitch.this was too funny! lololol challenge accepted move bitch, get him Ethan!!!!
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