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    Chapter 14

    Bruno75010 commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 14

    Although I had only been a vampire for a little over six months now... But he only fed twice
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    Chapter 13

    Bruno75010 commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 13

    So much sound and fury, darkness and change of mood/color/shape in these chapters, that they evoke Shostakovich's 8th string quartet irresistibly (to me).
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    Chapter 2

    Bruno75010 commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 2

    I am impressed how Bryson implicitly forgave Justin for sneaking into his place and taking his folder. Greatness of mind, trust, unconditional love... There are many why's in this story, but also many y's: Taryn, Bryson, Gyro, Comicality... MaYbe I missed some
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    Chapter 6

    Bruno75010 commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 6

    Justin still has a lot to do to stop being controlled by his emotions and falling into obvious traps such as the one of the Beast in his dream. If he was prodded to sneak into Bryson's private stuff, it's probably things that the Beast wants to learn through him. Or it is to create bad blood (sic) between him and Bryson. Or both. The latter would be well-deserved. Besides, the fight reminded me of playing Nethack.
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    Chapter 3

    Bruno75010 commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 3

    Hmm - as far as I know, hemophilia is not caused by a virus... I never cease to admire the detail and delicacy of this psychological invention of how it must be to be a vampire.
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    Chapter 4

    Bruno75010 commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 4

    If it is "someone", it must be "someone" who is functional in daylight.
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