Krista

So what you're saying is... that we won?

Yeah, I remember for TBY people were saying, "Is this even a gay story?" Because Jackson didn't show much in the way of his sexuality or being remotely attracted to who he ended up with. But they were interacting a lot during that time. When they finally did make that connection, people were excited about it. Insta-love isn't meant to be deep and meaningful. It can be lasting. But, it can't be deep in the beginning. The sex can be... if one or both are endowed... but that's a totally different sort of story. For a romance.. instant love is a pet peeve of mine. If you establish they love one another so early you're constantly having to defend it. You're constantly having to make it interesting. You're constantly trying to come up with something else and underlying for them to be part of/drive them. It can be taxing, when it is simpler for them to just fall in love over a period of words, not within the first three paragraphs. And unless you're writing an inta-love story, like say... 'Cupid's Arrow" buried in an butt cheek and forcing a sort of magical premise of love... you can most certainly take your time.

Yeah, I've been lost all weekend... I don't even know anymore.

I see we went firmly into whatever this is... lol. But it is where I am a lot more confident in just saying: Oh goodness, me and sneak right back out of the comment section.

Yeah get him! I'm also waiting on a certain story.

Let's not rush it! I only have one chapter as a buffer now. How in the world did this happen... oh right... I decided to spiral. I have always tried to be subtle with characters. It's something that feels real to me. People don't fall in love instantly, they don't even like one another instantly. You have to know someone to figure them out and where you stand with them. So stories that take their time and create a lot of subtle and nuanced connections, even if they're early on in the writing it feels more organic to me. Early chemistry can and does happen with people. It happened between me and my husband... it may have been that early chemistry that opened my eyes to him... but it was getting to know him that done it for me. But, it wasn't an instant 'romance.' Early chemistry is actually something that 'professional' authors suggest between characters. Which I think is important. There has to be something there.. and you can have good flow between characters that aren't friendly either. Just some form of dynamic chemistry between them, it works. Proximity also does. Or at least, I hope my usual approach to my characters read that way.

Early on that's the only way I knew how to function. I had three or more projects on the table at the same time. Now, I can't. It is odd that my creative approach completely shifted, but it has. I have tried to focus on "Ellis" whilst working on this story and I just don't have the creative energy to spare for it. It might be because the two stories aren't the same type of story... but one would think their opposites would make the creativity easier. As it would feel like the two stories and all characters involved would live on their own islands and I can travel between the two. But no. My brain won't allow it.

Surprisingly, a lot of the parties I attended was next to a river/creek.. in the woods. It was rarely at someone's actual house, because that just increased the odds for it to be found out and broken up way too early.

I would say that's a lot... well it is for two people. Calm down.

Oh I know, you were one of the ones that argued that the dumbass jock needs to stay straight and dumb. I agreed.

Who says they're even from Montana? 😮 I don't think I did... lol. And I remember a Christmas party which introduced me to your writing... and then you broke my heart shortly after.

Yeah! Maybe Five and Percy can throw a better party than my four. I mean, we know how Jason determines what makes a good party now anyway.

When you put it that way, I should've punched that Jaxton kid at least twice.

I guess it would be rude to punch a guy when he's being appreciative... and you can feel it. Unless it is completely unwanted, then punching him 'there' would be the only way.

Oh for f sakes... I may go on a writing strike just to see what you can come up with. If I wasn't afraid they'd prefer your alternative scenarios over my full blown - it took me all year to write story... I mean. But yes, do post it when you've decided you're no longer behaving. I would like to read it. The last couple have been entertainment.

Especially since I'm technically writing "backwards" now... and three chapters to describe one day. I think it was four-ish in TBY for me to cover Prom, the pre, during, and post prom.. but all the same day. I can beat a day to death, I think.

Mondays deadline you say... haven't you posted like 6 chapters to your story already? I am over three chapters behind, I'm thinking. I'll just have to resolve myself in being out of the loop and on my own slow journey through your writing. But, I've had to dodge frickin spoilers HERE for your story... we can't be dropping those landmines. lol. Yikes.

Aww poor thing. Sorry to have met you so late... but maybe it is for the best, for your sanity's sake. I can be a lot. I cannot get into stories where they make their characters a walking punching bag. If the dude can't catch a moment's peace... then you lose me very quickly. Even villains take frickin naps.

More opportunities for being mostly naked and wet, at least.

That's a lot of butts.

Lol no. The answer is no. I mostly write wholesome little stories... with just a little bit of drama, a little bit of humor... and what not. No secret murders, deaths, or all that unpleasant stuff. Although, with that said... all these major and strange plot elements and twists is giving me writing/creative FOMO. I just don't think I have in me to do it. *whistles*

And Colt being wet and naked was completely thrown away for a "new me," from the one person I put in all the trouble to write the damn thing for... talk about ungrateful.

That would be a very sudden and dark turn of events. 😮 I guess the twins would recognize their mother's voice over the phone... but you're right there hasn't been any definitive proof of life from their father yet.