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Krista

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  1. Krista

    Chapter 26

    Normal sexy things... I do like a man that can dust. If he even approaches a window with a cleaning solution I might become feral.
  2. Krista

    Chapter 26

    Ah, see your admission compared to all the "trustworthy" nonsense, I do believe.
  3. Krista

    Chapter 26

    I think it is about a dude who... something, something... it's only been like a slow month or so in the story, and I think he's began time travelling. Something about twins, a cute and moody blond dude, and a rat snake named Loretta.
  4. Krista

    Chapter 26

    Soo many of you suddenly admitting to how trustworthy you all are. I think I'm rightfully paranoid by all of this.
  5. Krista

    Chapter 26

    Yeah, I'm not used to this...at all. Daaaammnn. That's crazy. lol. I too prefer Italian wine.
  6. Krista

    Chapter 26

    And no. I am firmly all for my once a week posting schedule. @wildone will be in a tizzy and I need him not to be in one, since I have to live with him either way. So you'll have to wait. Also, I may or may not be just two chapters ahead now since I decided to do this extra writing nonsense so I need all the days in between that I can get.
  7. Krista

    Chapter 26

  8. Krista

    Chapter 26

    Yeah, although Joel definitely leaned into being a Traitor of sorts lately, it was already going to happen/started to happen. Lorianne was labeled because she was the one judged out of the three of them involved in that incident. Funny how people keep saying, "she plays up to it..." but we've not seen her do that, have we?
  9. Krista

    Chapter 26

    He does seem rather level headed, don't know how he kept up with Jonny this long... or maybe he's just the most level headed of the crowds he wishes to be part of... that's probably it. I can't speak on either one of these characters very much... I'm risking stuff. So, I'll move along now.
  10. Krista

    Chapter 26

    It may be a shift in the times, but I've seen more girls wreck the hearts their boyfriends, than I have the other way around. It may be that my mother decided to pop out mostly boys and they're dating... and I'm protective as hell. But yeah. Those teenage hormones... they can run away with the logical part of their brains. I guess that's what makes it all fun... a mess, but fun. As a parent, I'm horrified.
  11. Krista

    Chapter 26

    My goodness this tainted my childhood. I used to love Mary Poppins...
  12. Krista

    Chapter 26

    It was a valiant effort, it lasted less than two comments. I am not fussed. This has been an entertaining read for me for a few days now.
  13. Krista

    Chapter 26

    Yeah, I think Lorianne and Joel's sort of attachment to one another stems from both of them being odd outcasts. They're both outcasts over things outside of their control to be honest. Joel's rather paranoid about it, but she has seemed just friendly and not too forward about wanting anything more out of him. Maybe Roy will notice. Or maybe she'll allow herself to see Roy, at least to me, she gives off an energy that she's over guys until she gets out of Fletcher County. Her and Joel are kind of mirrored there too, he once thought he couldn't/wouldn't possibly even shouldn't find anyone until he's away from the people who knew him at Tempton. But... all of that is just rambling... who knows.
  14. I'm on my last cringe when it comes to my prompt. I don't know if I can be brave enough to finish it. Have it edited, and put on the list for posting. I'm well aware that I'm running out of time too. I wanted to make an effort to actually participate in these things, I'm usually a few days shy and a few 100k words too long.
  15. Krista

    Chapter 23

    So it does... so it does.
  16. Krista

    Chapter 26

    Poor Roy, seems to have his eyes on the two girls that won't be available. At least not until after high school, but he'd have to be sure they're interested in him too, for him to wait a year. Teenage brains don't like to wait. Lorianne doesn't have any suitable date options either, but I think she'll be okay with that, she seems to be getting a lot of unwanted attention just like Joel. It would be sort of adorable for Gavin to sort of be this sneaky little cupid... a bit unhinged at times, but still cute, maybe? 😮 and yeah, now you have to wait alongside everyone else. You caught up fast.
  17. Krista

    Chapter 24

    It may be safe to say that it was a mixed bag of both. 😮 Both dumb and... brave. No one probably saw it coming.
  18. Krista

    Chapter 26

    A totally seemingly random chance meeting with Davin would've been interesting. But I think Roy or an Unnamed dude, maybe a teammate would've won out if I kept him in the Benton household. I do like a good "enemies to lovers," story.
  19. Krista

    Chapter 26

    Ohhhh! Why'd you edit out the long version... that was funny. An entirely different dynamic, but it was so good. And hot decembers.. I don't know if I should be jealous as it is 29F here. I do like a little respite from heat... but not a long one. Nice almost poetic start to the... shortened version. I'm glad @Okiegrad caught you with your writer fingers all over the keyboard. I already said I don't care if people take my characters and run. There's not a whole lot of 'my' Joel in the passages you wrote. It makes me sad to see him carefree and all the way settled, I didn't give much of that to him in the writing so far. But I don't mind you doing so, not in the least. But Gavin wouldn't have a hairy ass. Davin maybe, but not Gavin. I don't even think Gavin can grow facial hair all that well, if I'm remembering correctly.. the rest of him kind of followed that trend. and I don't know if sweet guy Roy could handle Davin, but he may like trying.
  20. Oh for crying out...! I am so late to this... I apologize, I've not paid him close enough attention, obviously.
  21. Krista

    Chapter 26

    Aww. I wouldn't put that much faith in either one of us, but aww all the same.
  22. Krista

    Chapter 26

    I have that problem, but there's a whole man attached to that penis.
  23. Krista

    Chapter 26

    I would never! I merely was commenting that you were wanting Colt/Joel - Jolt, or more Colt than anything, but since Joel is the narrator, you might have had to settle with his moody butt. Then you found out how tall they were whilst being jockish. Although Colt isn't Jockish, he's more corn-fed and country bred... so to speak. But still tall. Lanky.. and tall, but not bookish, punk, or I can't remember all the rest. Something to do with beards, unless they're in the process of coming out of their pants? So now Roy seems to be your No. 1... which we've already discussed in private where he fell with me. And we'll have to ask @wildone to confirm his height, because I haven't a clue where he falls on that one. But he is sort of jockish, he's trying out for teams anyway.. lol.
  24. Krista

    Chapter 26

    Yeah, they are being phased out. And sneaky with that penis on the end there. And aww. I'd let you be a blurb on a book cover. And he knows more than I do, because none of what he listed was in their character descriptions in the Character sheet, mind you. I mean, he looked through them, and provided evidence and I decided to trust that. --- I know I'm calling myself out with that, but it's true. I still wouldn't know the damn dogs' names either. HE put them in the Character Sheet and then reminded me of them. --- Here you go. I'm nothing, if not generous.
  25. Krista

    Chapter 26

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