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  1. Better not ask why there are little hairs growing out of where the opening should be...
  2. TheLotus

    Chapter 5

    Yes, Ben is acting like an ear penis, although I do have some understanding for him being resignated to seeing drug using kids after working in that scene for a while. Maybe being an asshole is how he managed to stay with Amara for so long. It would of course be the right thing to get more involved in his life, but I get the feeling Amara is not the type who'd want to let anyone in, and would probably be (more) offended if Ben tried getting closer to him. Aria on the other hand seems to crave a caring parental figure who breaks through his walls and shows him some boundaries. It's a part that Amara, the only other person he's close to, won't be able to fill... That link wants me to log in to Microsoft. Is it supposed to be like this?
  3. TheLotus

    Chapter 4

    I can understand Aria better now. He seems quite lonely, and that's probably only the tip of the iceberg :/
  4. TheLotus

    Chapter 1

    I have actually read the first three wraeththu books before the Grigori, they are the more known series...Of course they are awesome as well, sometime in between I just felt a little sad that women coudn't be wraeththu XD. Well yeah... I don't know. When it comes to writing style I actually prefer yours to hers. Storm's style is often so rich in metaphors and poetic descriptions, especially in magical scenes, that it can become a bit exhausting to read. Your style is also very descriptive and fascinating, but I don't feel as drained after reading for a longer time. It might have something to do with English not being my first language.
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    Chapter 3

    The boys' mother is quite suspicious too. Not much is known about her yet besides her being a merciless character. The "precious princess" bit doesn't allude to good things either. If she is, for whatever reason, involved in the threats and attacks (as well?), my guess would be that she (or they) would try to blame it on another member of the twins' entourage. The most likely choice would be Ben since his way of admitting that he is attracted to the boys but still thinks of them as spoilt brats makes him sort of unpopular in the household. I'm looking forward to seeing Drew at the party. I assume he will stick out of the crowd like a sore thumb despite dressing the part XD.
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    Chapter 2

    That's right...Since I'm almost 30 and still not grown up, I'm in no position to criticize anyone XD.
  7. TheLotus

    Chapter 1

    Well, that is what she may want the others to think :)... So, in a way, she can stay out of suspicion because she alerts the others. I've recently read the Grigori trilogy by Storm Constantine because you recommended them somewhere, and awesome as the books were, I think they made me a more suspicious person because everyone is trying to manipulate everyone in them, and often succeeding XD.
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    Chapter 2

    I found these twins annoying as hell at first, they are barely adults and act as if they own everyone and everything. But I'm guessing that there's more to them than meets the eye.
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    Chapter 1

    When Miss Montgomery said: "I’m growing more and more certain that someone close to the boys is behind all this. I have no idea who it might be" ....My first thought was it had to be her XD.
  10. And thank you for all your replies :D. "There is so much back story to this book that I never wrote into it " I found this so interesting and would really like to know more about it...Like, where did all these angels come from exactly, and how is it possible that they can curse people...Gimme more please please XD
  11. Thank you for writing this beautiful story :). You probably won't read any of these comments since it's been some years since the story was posted. But reviewing the chapters became became kind of a ritual for me every day, and it was a lot of fun.
  12. Yay, Bridge saving the day
  13. So, this choir can heal everyone...?
  14. Being ascended sounds really awesome :D. Sooo many new powers...
  15. It seems karmic that this strange "council" fell apart, after everything they did. But as usual, even worse people took their place.
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