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    Better not ask why there are little hairs growing out of where the opening should be...
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    Chapter 5

    TheLotus commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 5

    Yes, Ben is acting like an ear penis, although I do have some understanding for him being resignated to seeing drug using kids after working in that scene for a while. Maybe being an asshole is how he managed to stay with Amara for so long. It would of course be the right thing to get more involved in his life, but I get the feeling Amara is not the type who'd want to let anyone in, and would probably be (more) offended if Ben tried getting closer to him. Aria on the other hand seems to crave a caring parental figure who breaks through his walls and shows him some boundaries. It's a part that Amara, the only other person he's close to, won't be able to fill... That link wants me to log in to Microsoft. Is it supposed to be like this?
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    Chapter 4

    TheLotus commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 4

    I can understand Aria better now. He seems quite lonely, and that's probably only the tip of the iceberg :/
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    Chapter 1

    TheLotus commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 1

    I have actually read the first three wraeththu books before the Grigori, they are the more known series...Of course they are awesome as well, sometime in between I just felt a little sad that women coudn't be wraeththu XD. Well yeah... I don't know. When it comes to writing style I actually prefer yours to hers. Storm's style is often so rich in metaphors and poetic descriptions, especially in magical scenes, that it can become a bit exhausting to read. Your style is also very descriptive and fascinating, but I don't feel as drained after reading for a longer time. It might have something to do with English not being my first language.
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    Chapter 3

    TheLotus commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 3

    The boys' mother is quite suspicious too. Not much is known about her yet besides her being a merciless character. The "precious princess" bit doesn't allude to good things either. If she is, for whatever reason, involved in the threats and attacks (as well?), my guess would be that she (or they) would try to blame it on another member of the twins' entourage. The most likely choice would be Ben since his way of admitting that he is attracted to the boys but still thinks of them as spoilt brats makes him sort of unpopular in the household. I'm looking forward to seeing Drew at the party. I assume he will stick out of the crowd like a sore thumb despite dressing the part XD.
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    Chapter 2

    TheLotus commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 2

    That's right...Since I'm almost 30 and still not grown up, I'm in no position to criticize anyone XD.
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    Chapter 1

    TheLotus commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Well, that is what she may want the others to think :)... So, in a way, she can stay out of suspicion because she alerts the others. I've recently read the Grigori trilogy by Storm Constantine because you recommended them somewhere, and awesome as the books were, I think they made me a more suspicious person because everyone is trying to manipulate everyone in them, and often succeeding XD.
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    Chapter 2

    TheLotus commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 2

    I found these twins annoying as hell at first, they are barely adults and act as if they own everyone and everything. But I'm guessing that there's more to them than meets the eye.
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    Chapter 1

    TheLotus commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 1

    When Miss Montgomery said: "I’m growing more and more certain that someone close to the boys is behind all this. I have no idea who it might be" ....My first thought was it had to be her XD.
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    And thank you for all your replies :D. "There is so much back story to this book that I never wrote into it " I found this so interesting and would really like to know more about it...Like, where did all these angels come from exactly, and how is it possible that they can curse people...Gimme more please please XD
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    Thank you for writing this beautiful story :). You probably won't read any of these comments since it's been some years since the story was posted. But reviewing the chapters became became kind of a ritual for me every day, and it was a lot of fun.
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    Yay, Bridge saving the day
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    So, this choir can heal everyone...?
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    Being ascended sounds really awesome :D. Sooo many new powers...
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    It seems karmic that this strange "council" fell apart, after everything they did. But as usual, even worse people took their place.
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    The biggest respect one can give someone else is letting them make their own life choices, and letting them take the risks that go with it. Luma is doing the right thing.
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    Sam and Alex's parents sound like true narcissists, declaring one child the "good one" and the other the "bad one". Everything they did was never really about the good of their sons, it was about themselves only.
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    Serif probably enjoyed being Luma's boy too much, that's why he never mentioned anything before XD...
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    Chapter 21 - Fey

    TheLotus commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 21 - Fey

    I'm still sort of happy that Bridge had a nice time dancing, despite how it ended for him.
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    In regular myth, doesn't everyone decide for himself where and when he wants to be reborn in the world based on what he wants/needs to learn? I'm just wondering who'd have the power to decide what happens to other people after death and to trap them where they don't want to be. The idea is quite scary actually...
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    So does this mean it's technically possible to time travel too from the house? I would really like to see a drawing of this XD. And I wonder why spirals...would take so much longer than just going to the hub in a straight line... Also, I kinda ship Astaria with Lauralie. Astaria still needs her female harem XD.
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    Chapter 18 - Gifts

    TheLotus commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 18 - Gifts

    Finally we got to know what Luma looks like... Very touching chapter.
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    Sigh, I want sex like the people in this story plz... "“I love you Sacha" YAY YAY YAY :D! Well, technically, he said it once before already...But yay still, Sacha deserves it so much.
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    "“I know what you are. I know what you do. Do it to me.”" Straight to the point, Star :D "“Seriously? You are seriously a virgin? Well... you’re not now but you were?” Stunned, I stare at him. “No wonder you were so tight,” he says cheekily" ...And a little...insensitive perhaps... But his story was so sad. How is it that all the good characters always have to go through such shitty lives before it gets better. On the other hand, at least they do get better at all.
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    Luma surely is falling intensely in love with a lot of people lately XD. His heart becomes bigger and bigger...
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