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Hmmm, I keeo coming back to this and reading the hot scenes again and again XD....
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In general, revenge will only lead to more suffering and not satisfy in the long run, but it is a very basic need. I suppose it does make things better for some people.
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I probably wouldn't have agreed to that if I had been Serif.
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Chapter 11 - Worry and Trust
TheLotus commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 11 - Worry and Trust
Bridge is a huge example to look up to when it comes to being nice and positive. I was happy when Luma said he loved Sacha. Once again, the idea of living in this household is both tempting and scary at the same time... -
I wouldn't have imagined Luma to be the type who wears black nail polish, somehow imagined him completely different. For someone with this name, he sure is quite the dark type :P. I like the term "little flower" a lot XD. I think I'd like to be called that by somebody. I imagine learning to love after such a long time must be quite traumatizing for Luma in a way, because it would make him much more vulnerable too.
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Very touching sex scene, kinda sad in a way....
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This chapter was true erotic horror. The idea of being kidnapped away from my life and all my plans, and being told that there's no hope of return while a couple of beautiful men hold me down and smile, just before having done...that...to me is both utterly terrifying and sexy. You walk the line between those too very well.
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Chapter 7 - Bridge's Story
TheLotus commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 7 - Bridge's Story
I felt heartbroken reading this, but I couldn't shake off the bitter thought that the only reason Luma cares so much about Bridge is because he is somehow "special" and if he was an average human he wouldn't be so touched. I'm being weird, I just really dislike the idea that one has to be born special, or chosen, or whatever... -
When I read this... I was wondering who the staff is. They must have a lot of work to do, with all the bedsheets and linen that regularly need washing in this house XD. And silk is so damn hard to clean. And once again poor Bridge, but at least he is cared for now.
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That Ara scene was smoking hot. It's sort of funny he named Ara after a parrot. He doesn't seem to talk much though. I wonder what kind of implements he has now XD. And I'm glad Chancey finally got some recognition.
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Poor Bridge, had such a hard life... The idea of being taken away from the present world and spend life in some beautiful, peaceful, aternative reality full of love and sex seems like such a tempting fantasy, but such a nightmare at the same time.
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Hot chapter! Sacha is really super-obedient. I wonder whether there's a reason for that, or whether it's just his nature. I felt so bad for him when his love got rejected. I for sure would never agree to help manipulate my vampire-captor's new crush into opening up under these circumstances, but then again Sacha wouldn't have much of a choice anyway. "Aqua" seems the only one in the story with a functioning moral compass so far XD. Maybe Astaria too, but she is very mysterious.
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Hmm, I wonder how it would be possible to detach a part of your soul and send it somewhere else. Wouldn't that change yourself permanently? Anyways, once Astaria reincarnates on earth, she needs a female harem XD. They must die an especially torturous death there...I really like the vivid way in which you show his sadism.
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I feel really sorry for Chancey. He seems to be like a male Cinderella, has to do all the dirty work and is being treated terrible for it. Yet more lying and hypocrisy from him...
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I want to review this great story chapter by chapter now :D. "But there are very few truly beautiful people, girls or boys, especially on the inside" Yeah, he sure cares a lot about inner values for someone who objectifies people so much...Pompous hypocrite.
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That must have been a terrible experience, I’m sorry you had to go through this. If you don’t mind me asking, who are „they“, and do you have any idea where your beloved one is now?
