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Chapter 1: River meets Zayn
vanalas commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 1: River meets Zayn
Thank you so much, enjoy ππππ -
Chapter 24: Who killed Robert Hayes?
vanalas commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 24: Who killed Robert Hayes?
And the murder weapon too. Trust me, the coming chapter is gonna be very interesting so stay tuned and watch this space. It's gonna be sooner than you expect -
Chapter 24: Who killed Robert Hayes?
vanalas commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 24: Who killed Robert Hayes?
He said days and not months π π π π π Wait, was that reference about me? You loved the old man being thrown in the grave where he wanted to be with his son? π ππππ Hilarious, but he deserved that. -
The cemetery stretched endlessly beneath a grey sky. Even the weather mourned Robert Hayes. Rows and rows of white flowers surrounded the burial grounds, their petals trembling gently beneath the cold wind. Luxury black vehicles lined the roads outside while security officers struggled to control the crowds gathered beyond the gates. Business moguls. Politicians. Employees. Friends. Media kept at a distance. Everyone had come for Robert Hayes. At the center of
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Chapter 23: Chaos in the Hayes family
vanalas commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 23: Chaos in the Hayes family
We'll see -
Chapter 23: Chaos in the Hayes family
vanalas commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 23: Chaos in the Hayes family
Let's hope it wasn't -
Chapter 23: Chaos in the Hayes family
vanalas commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 23: Chaos in the Hayes family
Exactly. And even you said something about Robert a few chapters back. You're also on that list, sir π -
Chapter 23: Chaos in the Hayes family
vanalas commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 23: Chaos in the Hayes family
Nice theory, I sure hope it's one of them. What's the motive though? Everyone seems distressed and none of them were at the scene of the crime -
Chapter 23: Chaos in the Hayes family
vanalas commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 23: Chaos in the Hayes family
π I won't disappear. New chapter will be coming soon Whom do you think the killer is? π€ π€ π€ -
βDadβ¦?β Julianβs voice shattered into nothing. He held onto Robertβs shoulders desperately, trying to steady him, trying to make sense of what he was seeing, but his fatherβs bodyβ It felt wrong. Too loose. Too heavy. Robertβs eyes were open. Staring. Not at him. Through him. Julianβs breathing became erratic instantly. βNoβ¦ no, noβ¦β His hands trembled violently as he touched his fatherβs face. Cold. So cold. The chill of it shot terror straight through his bod
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Chapter 22: Tragedy hits the Hayes household
vanalas commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 22: Tragedy hits the Hayes household
I love that, can't wait to find out. Maybe we should Collab in the future, your ideas are amazing -
Chapter 22: Tragedy hits the Hayes household
vanalas commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 22: Tragedy hits the Hayes household
I'm right here π -
Chapter 22: Tragedy hits the Hayes household
vanalas commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 22: Tragedy hits the Hayes household
He was confused, with whatever he had learned. Maybe it hit him hard, but we'll find out soon π -
Chapter 22: Tragedy hits the Hayes household
vanalas commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 22: Tragedy hits the Hayes household
There's a lot that man could have learned. Now we're left in the shadows and he's no more unfortunately. Oh, that old narcissist hasn't been around for long. I'm sure he's gonna pop up soon -
The dining room glowed with warmth. Soft golden light spilled from the pendant lamps above the table, catching the shine of silverware and crystal glasses. Candles flickered gently at the center, their flames dancing each time someone moved past. The rich scent of roasted herbs, butter, fresh bread, and wine filled the apartment. It felt like home. Not the cold, polished kind of home Julian had grown used to. A living one. A breathing one. And tonight, for the first time in longer
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Julian didnβt even remember how he got there. The car had barely come to a full stop before he threw the door open and rushed out into the night. Rain poured down heavily, relentless, soaking him within seconds. His shirt clung to his body, his hair plastered against his forehead, water dripping down his faceβbut he didnβt feel any of it. All he felt was urgency. Desperation. Fear. He ran toward the house like something was chasing him, his shoes splashing against the we
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Chapter 19: Will Dean's Love be reciprocated?
vanalas commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 19: Will Dean's Love be reciprocated?
I'm crossing my fingers to that π π π -
Chapter 20: Will Dean and Julian's friendship survive? Or is it too late?
vanalas posted new chapter in THROUGH IT ALL
The house was silent when Sofia reached it. Too silent. The tall iron gates had opened automatically for her, the long driveway stretching through the perfectly manicured lawn like a black ribbon under the moonlight. The mansion loomed aheadβmassive, elegant, cold. Sofia sat in the car for a moment after parking. Her hands were still trembling on the steering wheel. You killed him. The thought slammed into her mind again, just as violently as it had during the drive home- 10 comments
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Chapter 19: Will Dean's Love be reciprocated?
vanalas commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 19: Will Dean's Love be reciprocated?
But he's scared. Do you think he'll accept him or try to run away from his feelings -
Chapter 19: Will Dean's Love be reciprocated?
vanalas commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 19: Will Dean's Love be reciprocated?
Thank you so much π
