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Really hate parents who meddle in their kids love lives like that, it's none of their damn business and they're more than old enough to decide for themselves how physical they want their relationship to be. Tap almost made Dane second guess their relationship because his parents made him feel insecure about his feelings for Dane
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Parents who teach their kids that fighting is wrong are so out of touch with reality it's sad. EVERY kid should know how to defend themselves against anyone who wants to hurt them for any reason. The only fly in the ointment is the flawed school system that insists on punishing victims that have finally had enough instead of doing their jobs and creating a safe place for kids.
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Chapter 9 - Paw Patrol Returns
Frost commented on Arch Hunter's story chapter in Chapter 9 - Paw Patrol Returns
"I'm not sure what's going to happen now. I have a few ideas, one of which is a complete rewrite of Black Fox 1-3." I wouldn't be opposed to this idea, I loved the story but things made no sense in part 3. I'm totally willing to read all three books over again if you do a rewrite! you have a great thing here, just needs to be laid out better throughout the whole story. p.s I absolutely love Ian ❤️ -
Chapter 9 - Paw Patrol Returns
Frost commented on Arch Hunter's story chapter in Chapter 9 - Paw Patrol Returns
Holy freaking crap!! Talk about plot twist after plot twist! It's still not clear what Owen is, why Ian is important, and why Alex and and the foxes are fighting the wolves. I have so many questions, there are so many loose ends 😅 please take some time to explain everything in greater detail in the next book whenever you get to it. I'm so confused lol -
Keith needs to grow a set but then so does bradd in a way. I hope Patrick doesn't take it too hard. Earl is adorable and I want 5 I think we have a hero crush going on between bradd and Earl, I'm not sure of the age difference but maybe Earl is building up to making a move on bradd?
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This one made me giggle 🤭😂 If only we could achieve such things in real life, I vote in favour of an experimental study to see if the idea has any merit! Any volunteers? 🤣🤣🤣❤️
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I really hope they all mix well going forward, Sammy needs the jocks to make him more confident and outgoing, the jocks need Sammy's calm influence to keep them chilled out and down to earth. I'm crossing my fingers for a Sammy/Sasha/jakey throuple (equal three way relationship) maybe we can get Sammy to play a sport or hit the gym with his two hunky boyfriends! I'd absolutely love that. Then they can go home and Sammy can make them some yummy food 😊 Hoping you make it back to this story and it doesn't get abandoned
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This was a delightful story to read, I'm just sorry it was so short! Really captures the innocence of youth and gives us a look inside the minds of two boys falling in love and figuring out what that means. I would love to see more of Damien and Dennis and Bartek.
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I'm gonna be chewing my fingernails off until the next chapter 😱
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I think we need to see a threesome with Jansen, Keith, and Eric 🤤
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Hope that friged bitch runs off the road somewhere, she's a waste of fresh air. Considering how much instinct is worth, I'd buy the place and walk in after the sale is final and let her know in no uncertain terms that she will no longer be needed.
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Very sneaky! I just knew that Helen would survive, she a force of nature, she just refused to go 😂
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I love it when power tripping cops get a good helping of their own medicine along with a big slice of crow pie
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Absolutely amazing story, I was captivated from the first word right up to the last. So many plot twists and so much research went into this massive novel. The characters have great depth and you really find yourself relating to them as if you knew them in real life. Falls under the action/mystery/suspenseful category
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Omg reading this story gave me high blood pressure 😅 The sheer amount of time, research, and dedication this novel must have taken.... I'm so glad I read it, not like I had much of a choice since I couldn't put it down lol your characters are amazing, I'm sorry I have to say goodbye to Trevor and Shane and the rest, especially Shane cause he's my favourite. Thanks so much for writing this and letting us all read it, it's a story I won't soon forget.
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Ouch....I got mixed feelings about Julie's demise. Mostly how Trevor will react when he finds out, he'll very likely blame himself, I doubt he saw this move as putting Julie in grave danger. Serves her right though, karma came after her with a vengeance
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I FREAKING KNEW IT!!!
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I had been wondering when that log would be making another appearance!
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That Fowler is a royal twat, if I was in Trev's situation I would have done the same. Minors are treated with zero respect anywhere in the world for the most part, and we adults don't allow them to have the rights to anything. Sailing across thousands of miles of treacherous ocean I'd be armed too. What idiot wouldn't? That's like going for a camp out during the salmon run near a stream full of bears with nothing but a fishing rod, guess what else is on the menu? You that's what. Broken laws my ass.
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Robert is as much of an asshole as Dirk, what's with parents who think destroying anything that makes their children happy is a justified means of total control. She'll be out the door at 18 and you may never see her again.
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I know where I'm moving! 😍😎
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Dirk needs his ass kicked and soon, someone needs to take him down a few pegs
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Yeah news flash Trevor, your dad doesn't sound anything like someone who would sit down and have a civilized conversation like an adult. The second you're on dry land he'll be on you like white on rice and you won't be able to pull off another daring escape. Idk how things work in Australia but I'd be getting legally emancipated ASAP or whatever the equivalent is. Any parent who would use the one thing that makes their child happiest in the world as an underhanded bargaining chip isn't worth the dregs in the bottom of the bilge.
