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  1. Tempy
    Good start to a story. I'm excited for more. Like every story you write I'm excited for more haha. Love jaime. Silas sounds like hes gonna get himself in alot of trouble down the road. Ricky sounds cool but not much for an opinion at the moment.
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    Chapter 50

    Tempy commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 50

    I also don't think the Elders are 100% good I think they are kinda twisted. I also really don't wanna see Taryn die unless it is the last chapter because it wouldn't be worth it if he died. As stated Taryn is the reason Justin is still alive. I think Justin would turn into Rage or just off himself if anything happened to Taryn. Plus I get all happy happy joy joy when they are in the story together. I'd like to see a heroic Dylan come back(maybe with Com, when he comes out of hiding and makes his big move I'm waiting for) no one knows if he really died or not anything's possible. Yeah his heart was damaged doesn't mean he died. Anyhow great story so far read it like 25 times all the way through. I also wanna see more Richie!
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    GFD: Divine Right 1

    Tempy commented on Comicality's story chapter in GFD: Divine Right 1

    This just goes to say that.... If Justin is not around for this future then he will not be the end. So if he is truth and light I assumed that Justin wins his battle within.
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    Show, Don't Tell

    Tempy commented on Comicality's blog entry in Writing World

    A possible new author in the near future. I've read so many stories and its time to start my own. But wow. I found myself actually really reading all that and not going boring. If school books were written like this was, I would have been a straight A student haha. Thanks I am absorbing all this information.
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