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Ugh, I finally caught up and I need more!! This whole story idea, how did you come up with it? It's like, movie quality! And I love the characters, they're just so unique. And that part where Carter slipped up about the basketball hoop- that was funny. Great job!!! Waiting for the next!
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Oof I know, I was rereading it to upload and I was like "ehh, that's gross/scary". I... will accept a good challenge!!
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Jordan shook his head, eyes staring at the wall before him, vacant. He sighed deeply through lightly parted lips. Alex didn’t say anything or press the man sitting beside him, because he remembered his first and how it had affected him. Finally, in given time, Jordan spoke. “I didn’t really… think about it,” he said, voice soft. Alex looked at the brunette, green eyes looking at the vacant, glassy blue. When Jordan didn’t say anything else, Alex decided to ask, “Do you regret it? Now?” J
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In the peaceful city of Pury, a serial killer seems to have grown overnight, with bodies of the victims surfacing over the last few weeks. What they don't know, though, is that there's more than one killer. And they're recruiting more. Original Summary: Jordan and Alex, members of a serial killing group, talk about their first murders.
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Dude, he so totally is.
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Thank you for liking it.
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Glad you liked it, since most of it was just rambling 😁
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Roman had been doing odd jobs all summer, to pay for rent. This time, though, he was painting a house. The living room, to be precise. The living room of his dad’s friend, Jeff, to be even more precise. Roman was nineteen and quiet, insecure, so it kept him from ever getting a real job. He had tried in the past, but the depression of never getting called back was crippling. Jeff knew that, and that was why he would help Roman with some side jobs. Painting, mowing, cleaning. With his young face t
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Roman is a miserable nineteen year old. While everyone else in his graduating class is off to college, he's left in the dust to rot away. He's poor, gay, and has daddy issues. Throw into the mix his long distance boyfriend, inability to connect to people on an emotional level, and his dad's hot best friend... yeah, he really just wanted to be alone.
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Daniel fluttered his eyes open, a throbbing pain in his head. There was a beeping noise beside him and he looked to his side, a dim light above him letting him see in the otherwise dark room. It was a heart monitor, beeping persistently because a cord had slipped. Daniel rolled his aching head to the right and caught Arty. The man was sleeping in a recliner beside the bed that the teen lay in. He looked like a mess. A beautiful mess. Daniel rose his arm from the bed to reach across and touch
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Woah, a spin-off? Count me in, dude- I love those! I'll have to read charming first. After I finish Halo ☺️
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Chapter 16: Sleeping Beauty
AmosLee1023 commented on AmosLee1023's story chapter in Chapter 16: Sleeping Beauty
Haha you're welcome. I didn't mean to leave it on a cliffhanger like that, my bad 😳 I get so into writing Daniel at home that I forget about his school life, but I can't leave Laura and Joe to rot, they fit into the master plan 😈. Thank you once again for liking it! The next chapter is pretty interesting I personally think. It has to do with... A confrontation!! Gasp!! -
Chapter 15: Only Girls Cry
AmosLee1023 commented on AmosLee1023's story chapter in Chapter 15: Only Girls Cry
Hahaha I really want to hurt Geil, because that would be the utmost PERFECT way to hurt Arty, but I can't bring myself to do it. I'm glad you liked it!! Thank you!! -
Well if you do do (I hate the double word things, ugh) more first person, take it from me- ITS GONNA BE GOOD. And about Mike, since I didn't get to binge Halo as anticipated, I am so ready.
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I can't believe how good you are at writing first person. Again, I am so jealous- you have so much writing talent!! And I also have a bad feeling about what Mike really wants to use his powers for 🤔
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It's not just a twin- imagine having SIX siblings. 😂😂 Then you'll wish you were an only. That aside, I'm totally binging Halo today, just so you know.
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I'm fangirling over the fact that you read my comment and replied haha. But yeah, you really made it feel like you had a twin yourself or something! Great job with that!! The sucky things about having a twin is getting your names mixed up even though you're fraternal, not being allowed to skip class without your twin tattling on you, and being polar opposites.
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I can't stress enough how great you are with the detail in your story, and I'm only the second chapter in! God, I wish I could write like you! Really, this thing is so amazing, with the detail, the wording, characters! I mean, I'm eighteen minutes older than my fraternal twin, and reading this story in Duncan's point of view really makes me feel for my twin. Man, you can really get into your characters!!
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Chapter 14: Memory Lane
AmosLee1023 commented on AmosLee1023's story chapter in Chapter 14: Memory Lane
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“What is it you want to show me?” Arty asked Daniel, letting the teen string him along to the kitchen. The younger brunette looked back at Arty and smiled. “It’s a surprise,” he replied. Arty looked away, a little uncomfortable. Jack was at work and Henry was just… gone; it left Arty home alone with the kids, something that he wasn’t too particularly fond of since Daniel’s kissing stunt. And because he seemed to be getting a little… Arty couldn’t actually think of a word for it. Aside from t
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Once everything winded down, Johnathon did come over, bringing the baby; while Jack was gone at work. Things seemed to be getting normal again, besides the fact that Daniel hadn’t been painting much. It was sort of like he had a cloud hanging over him. He started acting like he had when he first arrived: different. He was back to being… calculating. On a weekend, he went to Geil’s room while Jack, Arty, and Henry talked outside about the possibility of building a tree house; Jack had one wh
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Seeing so many people dressed in black made Daniel’s gut uneasy. It made Geil uncomfortable; especially the people crying. Johnathon stood beside Shelly’s mother, who held the couple’s one month old daughter, Elizabeth. He looked like he were mad for being sad, clutching a single rose in his hand tightly at the stem. Standing next to Arty and Jack, Daniel didn’t know where to concentrate: Jack was looking around for someone, Henry just arrived and stood next to Johnathon, putting a hand on t
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“Uncle Henry!” Geil ran to the man when he, Daniel, and Arty arrived home. Henry stood from the couch he was sitting on with Jack and picked the boy up, smiling to him. “Hey, Geil! My favorite nephew~” Henry pinched Geil’s plump cheek and the child frowned, but it was short lived because he was tickled into laughing. Arty rolled his eyes and walked to Jack, sitting on his husband’s lap and wrapping his arms around the man’s neck. Despite the random act of love, Jack smiled at Arty and put an
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Before first hour, Daniel managed to avoid Laura enough to get to his locker. But, it wasn’t enough to avoid Joe, who was leaning against the lockers on his side when Daniel shut his locker door after grabbing his books. “What are you doing?” Daniel asked, glancing at Joe while spinning the lock on his locker to clear the memory. Joe breathed in to talk but quickly lost interest in what he was going to say, furrowing his eyebrows and reaching out. “Dude, what happened?” he asked, touchin
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“You’re not too upset about this trip, right?” Jack asked Arty, carrying their bags into the hotel room. Arty rolled his eyes and shrugged, although he was behind Jack and therefore, the other man couldn’t see. Arty slipped by Jack to sit on the bed. “I’m upset we didn’t get to tell them “bye” first,” the brunette said and crossed his arms in his lap. Jack glanced over from where he put the bags down. The man sighed. “Well, I asked you if we could leave early.” “I know. But I didn’t
