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Thank you so much for this awersome story๐
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Omg that was awersome thank youโบ
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Well that was uhm โบ๏ธ Delicious and hot๐ฅ Our Carter here is like sugar flower who involve bee like simon and mug like my Douchebag Alex๐ (sorry Laura) Maybe Carter think is so smart to play detective or whatever But Alex prove to me how imprevisible he can be this guys are great skill for maybe coz his pass but seriously that kind of like i apreciate about Alex so much he knows what he wants how to get it straitch like a knife ๐ค I know Carter he is so smart but the opposite ๐?? Smart not going to be...... Anyway i don't nothing happned to Alex i've seen it coming ๐ Maybe is Carter to respond now stop pretending i know he need to be carefuly but could it be worth??? Thank you Laura Until next week
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rich about details i lime itโบ
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hmm that good but need to edit coz minor heee good like this storyโบ
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Good start for me I like the beginning ๐
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The Tin Man Who Didnโt Want A Heart
AKA983 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Tin Man Who Didnโt Want A Heart
Ah Laura better get better๐ And Alex still my favourite Douchebag when it comes to face Carter humm Maybe thats helps Carter inner monologue to chooses between in head and what is true in his heart Its great to see Carter renew friendship with Aron but poor Aron like i always said he's coming the bunch Ball in this ๐บ ah maybe because he's always true in his heart could save him but seriously How come he such blind like that? Until next chapter Thank you Laura ๐ -
Ah then people going to say I'm also crazy i kind like that Douchebag Alex now he knows how to move his pawn๐ And that lasy ass Carter going stop being behaves like kid and challenger like Alex i can't ask for more ๐ And oh that Guy Mark ๐ค No comment on him for now until next chapter next week then Thank you Laura
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Gum ๐ I smell unsecured Carter abit immature (seriously this guy never how to show his feelings) โบyeah i know thing's need to going to slow but seriously Laura i was expecting something different about this this chapter it's๐ sorry little bit cliche how come Carter he's too stubborn like you push ur best friend lover because u need to growing or immature? Maybe yes there's a lot stategy he could managed after the swap body! Oh even that Carter behaviour is like a drama ๐ jealous ๐ Really Anyway i don't think is the way to get Aron back When you know Alex not going to easy to fight ๐ Anyway thankyou Laura
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Ah ๏ปฟ Laura, keeping me all ๏ปฟtotally on edge again! I was waiting more from this chapter but apparently i learn a bit about Carter childhood his parent(guilty๐ค yes who's fault) has always out practicaly raised by Aron parent, Aron he's like always his guardian so when you found other halfmate say he's going to get married to another Guy ๐ hmm I'm also expected Carter will afraid to how he could face about what coming๐ and yes Aron is trapp betwen his old douchbag husband and real lover how could he going to manage in this situation ๐ค Next Week ๐๐ thanks Laura
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Enough to Make a Difference
AKA983 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Enough to Make a Difference
Oh my Godd I'm nearly have a heartache ๐ฑ i truly like Clementine Aron Mother she's like ๐ guessing and how can i complain about Carter self talking Wow how mutch i like it ๐ now I'm going to miss it but for the best but seriously Laura i can't wait for the next coming Carter is awake ๐ ๐ Thanks so much Laura ๐ -
Ah Laura do you realy hate your carachter? Off course ๐ but seriously Aron still in love in Carter and holly shit (sorry) ๐ you put Carter in Alex body more torture for Aron ๐ฑ oh i know Alex he's a douchbag cheater but in the end i think Aron is the winer but for the price there will be suffering Poor Aron๐ i get i like Carter for fixer now brave + headcold = winer Carter thanks for this chapter it was really enjoying
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honestly.... You have some really good hot writing in there, and i'm glad i found your story every time Carter got the self mind language turned me off lol๐. i knew you ended up making it a little spoiler for the next coming. but really i can't wait to see what happened when Carter wake up ๐ฑ made me stop reading a couple of time Not really ๐!! Some great potential and i like the really strong main characters. Tank you
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I was expecting something different about this chapter ๐ hmm i think i can't wait for the next coming but i really love face to face Carter>David So far I'm still tustly the author for the next coming๐
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thank you Laura i got trouble on patreon i think server overload maybe register another time
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Hum i think Carter is trap not only into alex body but into himself great dilema i cant wait for the nex
