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  1. One month and counting lol. I love this story, can't wait for the next chapter.
  2. It's been long enough that I am starting to read some chapters again to refresh myself on the details. 😭
  3. Nash comes across as pretty self-centered-his work, his trips, his marathons, his perceptions, his needing to heal-even when he talks to Penn, he uses "I" a lot and explains how he is feeling or why he did something. None of these things are bad in and of themselves, but even Lee pointed out that Nash didn't have time for him. The Knotts had been inviting Nash to events for years, but he turned them down because it wasn't on the terms he wanted and he judged their motivations without knowing them. I think the only way Nash makes any personal growth is to move beyond this...yes he understands Penn is hurting, but he doesn't seem to be thinking about why and how that might impact Penn. He still frames it through his own lens of hurting. I think that if Nash can move beyond this and re-frame how he sees his world and those around him, Penn might be willing to risk his heart again, but if he doesn't, Penn won't. Both Nash and Penn have long-developed issues and what they most need is to lay their cards on the table-state how they feel and what each of them wants to be for the other.
  4. Great chapter, but now I am dying for Chapter 16.
  5. I love this story and the wait for Chapter 15 is killing me!
  6. Chris1380

    Chapter 5

    This is a great story with great characters. I can't wait for the next chapter!
  7. Wonderful. Thank you for this great story.
  8. Chris1380

    Crumbling

    Wonderful chapter...acceptance by both of them of each other and their flaws.
  9. Great chapter...seems like perhaps enough has finally come out for both Shane and Donovan to begin making progress.
  10. Chris1380

    Brightest Dawn

    I thought this throughout The Chosen: Chad is a dick. It was a great series
  11. Chris1380

    Just Friends?

    Oh no, I meant for Donovan and Shane's relationship to work.
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