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MC88

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  1. MC88

    Epilogue

    This was the perfect ending for this story. I’m so sad that it’s done. Going to miss that feeling whenever I got a notice that a new chapter was posted. Hope you continue writing. Would love to see another story from you ❤️
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    Chapter 5

    So good to see this back! Loved every word of it. Happy we get a bit more of an inside look into the mystery that is Kevin Malley
  3. MC88

    Chapter Twenty-Nine

    This was such an emotional chapter. Great work! I think you did the right thing by not ending it where you originally planned, this flows beautifully, and feels like a more natural ending to a chapter at this point in the story.
  4. MC88

    Epilogue

    Thanks for this story❤️ Has been a wonderful journey. Did you say you were doing a spin-off? I hope it’s about Simon❤️
  5. Yeah, and Becker’s not really had a lot of experience in the romance and broken hart part of life yet, having been so closed off from his romantic feelings. I actually think you got some of that showing trough throughout the story. Though you don’t state it directly, it showed in how his relationship with other people and how he reacts to them, one example beeing in his relationship with his siblings. Yeah, nothings quite like that first time someone brakes your hart, but will be interesting to see how they grow as they get themself picked up. Thanks for these stories, they are well writen, easy to get addicted to and it’s been so nice to get to see Kevin’s view of events throug him getting his own story. Looking forward to following what happens to them, and hope you give us more stories in the future.
  6. Love this story! Poor Becker, he still got it bad for Kevin. Looking forward to seeing how things with Conner develops...
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