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Ticklishboy30

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  1. Damn, it's always sad when they die this young. He was born the same year as my husband. I know he'll be missed.
  2. The silver Twenty-Twenty Lincoln Navigator turned into the townhouse complex and pulled into the spot next to Brandon’s Hyundai. Linda and her husband, Tom, climbed out of the vehicle, and she locked the doors. As they walked up the stairs, Tom noticed the vehicle parked next to Greg’s truck. The patriarch whistled as he pointed at it and said, “Babe, look at the CJ7.” Linda turned her head and nodded. “I’ve never seen another one like it before. It’s definitely unique,” she said.
  3. @Paladin Levie is very special. He and Mikey from "A Ticklish Thriller" are actually my faves of the characters that I've created. Yeah, I'm wondering where this revision will take me. I'm hoping to incorporate some things from my original vision into this one.
  4. Yeah, the Baby Rambo moniker is something that's floated between a couple of stories. I've just felt that was the perfect nickname for my boys when they have to get physical and defend themselves. One thing that's always gotten on my nerves was in my youth gay men were characterized as either being really feninine, or closeted assholes, and I always said to myself if I create a gay male character they're gonna be playful, strong, sensitive, and comfortable with themselves. (I'm 45 now, so yeah Ive got the years under my belt to honestly make that statement. LOL) I love your comments, @centexhairysub
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    Chapter 14

    You and me both. I'm still asking myself the questions you have. I'll be asking them till after I write it. Then I'll be asking why did I write that. LOL Thank you, @centexhairysub
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    Chapter 14

    @Paladin I've already said, I'm definitely not hiding under the bed. Hope I can keep the excitement flowing. LOL You guys are making me actually work and think. LOL
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    Chapter 14

    @Anton_Cloche why, whatever do you mean? I'm innocent of all ridiculousness. You were close, Mystofellese. I named the character after Mister Mistofellese from Cats. We did a predominantly spoken version as a play in high school. There were only three songs. A guy named Danny sang "Gus The Theater Cat" with a girl named Crystal, she also sang "Memory," and I sang Mister Mistofellese. So, I guess I'm adding you to my growing list of ticklers.
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    Chapter 14

    Hope the excitement continues.
  9. Ahh, but what's he gonna do to them in the meantime?
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    Chapter 14

    Ahh, but was it Mystofelles? That's still up for debate, all that's known so far is that he dropped the disc, came back to ask about it, and went to search for Ethan. Hehe sometimes things aren't as they seem. Gotta love my cliffhangers. LOL
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    Chapter 14

    I'm sooo not hiding under the bed. @chris191070 I hope Ethan stays unharmed too. I was happy that Alex was able to feel like he was helpful in figuring things out. I'm still back and forth on who's abducted him. Hehe that's gonna be interesting.
  12. John's call went to voicemail after receiving the nine-one-one text from his son, then he felt a disturbance in his gut and knew his boy was in danger. He called George and asked him to inform the family and to put everyone on high alert while they weren't together. Then he gathered a couple of Deputies to help search, jumped into his truck, put the flashing bubble on the roof, enabled the siren, and sped over to Magic Manor. "This is my night to set this town a-rockin' on its heels. This i
  13. @akascrubber @chris191070 I love the assessments. I was hoping to make Maddox even more creepy and devious than before. As well as giving some insight into his motivation without giving away too much. Hehe
  14. On the way home, Greg remembered he needed to get some things for the dinner he’d planned for them. He quickly called Brandon and told him to go on to the house while he stopped at Kroger. Thirty-one-year-old Maddox Barksley sat in his truck outside the grocery store and got lost in his thoughts. He spent over a decade in prison and was released a few months ago. The ex-con accessed a savings account opened before his imprisonment and withdrew some funds to change his name, get plastic
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    Moving Day

    @Paladin, depending on what happens next you may change your mind about being ready.
  16. Thank you, @centexhairysub. I value and appreciate your input and observations.
  17. Thanks @VBlew. You've been so supportive of both the original unfinished, and the revised versions that I hoped to hear from you on this one. So far 5 chapters have been rewritten, just finished the fifth chapter yesterday.
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    Moving Day

    I really love how the reworking has enhanced everyone and made it easier to understand the family make up.
  19. Levie pulled out a pair of slim-fit, grey jeans and put them on over his blue bikini briefs, then chose a dark green shirt that made his red hair look more fire-like, and after putting on his favorite pair of Scooby-Doo socks, stepped into his tan, two and three-quarter-inch heeled cowboy boots, and called Greg when he was almost finished packing. “Hey, Angel boy,” Greg excitedly said, “How’s your day so far,” he asked. “Hey, hey, can I say hi... I want to say hi to him... C’mon, let m
  20. It was very magical looking. Mark and Stacy would've loved it.
  21. IKR @akascrubber I love revisiting these characters again. Love Of Family was the first full length story I had ever worked on, so the guys in this story are very special to me.
  22. Thank you, @Paladinand like the last revision, there are some altered plot twists. Hehe
  23. Just curious, how do you guys like the cover photo? I found it online and thought it was perfect for the story. @BoyLove @weinerdog @chris191070 @Greg @Paladin @VBlew I'd love to get your thoughts.
  24. I've missed you, Daddy-Greg. It's been fun going back and revising the story, and coming up with slightly different twists. Hehe
  25. Thanks, @chris191070. Although I was happy with the first revision, I also kept thinking of improvements, the semicolons really drove me nuts. LOL
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