Frankjr

Excellent story to read. The words you use was as though I was seeing an actual movie. It was dark yet sometimes a tad humorous and thrilling.

Love it, love it, love it! And sequels! …….

Damn can you write a story! I am now seeing what you ment to show in this chapter. I think Alexander has always had feelings for Lyn. At first I thought Alexander was a stuck up jock but I’m seeing a new side of him and Brad🤔I’m having second thoughts about him now. It’s like the rolls have changed in Alexander and Brad.

No! Way too soon. What about the things Tony wants to do to help others. Building their own family. …NO!

A seal of approval and well written

👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼 Damn Wayne 👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼 you truly are a writer. This story was outstanding, well done.

Damn I can’t wait!

Wow Wayne, you never cease to amaze me. Like I said in the first chapter, this was something different from your other stories . I wash watching the twilight zone marathon this morning while I was cleaning the floors and it hit me that this story was a like a twilight zone episode. Please don’t take it as an insult this story was amazing. ( now I want a worm cause I want to be 30, flirty and thriving 😬)

Me after reading this chapter

Ok first, wow this is like totally different from your other stories Wayne, I mean totally different but damn great! I love it so far. And only 5 chapters in this story!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter tomorrow. And so far the main characters 👍

All can say is……DAMN