Irony

When I'm reading a story, I have to know the character well before I can feel any large emotion for them. If the author's done a good job of introducing and exploring the main character, then any form of conflict/bad situation will cause me to feel something. And also, I agree with Graeme and Steven. A bad typo or some form of hideous grammar is enough to ruin the moment. I don't have much else to say..

See, Com. I was right. I'm always right. Bobby got Billy in the end. Which means. I won. W00T!1 I WIN! DING DIGN DING 100 POINTS PLZ!1one Mmk. I'll go now.

...... ...... ...... Deep breaths, dear. Calm. ...... ...... ...... WHY. THE HELL. WOULD HE DO THAT? GO HOME, BILLY! -backhands him- Yeah, you'd best stay down there. I can't believe what just happened. I knew it would when I read last weeks one. But... Omg. I'm kinda speachless. I'm rather dissapointed in Billy. Now I hope Brandon comes back and confesses his love for Billy. Then Billy'll be in shit, won't he? -mad cackle-

You should try the three hunters from the newest GFD. The ones from the club. They sound cool. Anyway, good work. It looks really good.

Firstly, Jimmy needs a reality check. Who was the only person there for him when he killed himself? Billy. Who's been his friend when he needed one the most? Billy. Who introduced him to Lee? Billy. He should remember this. If Billy wants to meet up with HIS friend Lee, Jimmy shouldn't complain. Lee's going to start thinking Billy's avoiding him. And Bobby? For God's sake, that kid's annoying. IF he doesn't hurry up and die, I'm going to get really annoyed. Can he not take a hint? BILLY. DOESN'T. FANCY. YOU. Ugh. Now, Brandon needs a good slap. Can he not see Billy doesn't like Bobby? Or is he just SO narrow minded it avoids him completely? Wake up, please, and see what's right before your eyes! Lastly, Billy really shouldn't have ripped the paper up. I mean, it could have been anything. And if it was a lawyer calling about a divorce, then what? He thinks that's going to stop his mum? She'll just forget, will she? God Billy, think. So, as you can tell, I loved the new update. Thanks again for my weekly fix. Much love.

Yes. Yes, that's it. :Pats:

It's obvious that Brandon thinks Billy likes Bobby so he's giving Billy the cold shoulder. He likes him a lot.

This one was so...hm, what's the word? Let me ponder this.. ... ... ... ... Okay, I don't know. I have mixed feelings. The newsest update is so amazing, which I was thrilled about. But at the end, I kept clicking the "Next Chapter" bit, hoping it might magically turn into a link so I could read the next bit. Bobby is getting annoying now. Because of this, I think Billy should hurry up and TELL Brandon he likes him. I think I can see what's happening. Billy and Bobby are going to end up getting together, aren't they? Omg, Bobby, Billy, Brandon.. Bs See, I spot things. Clever, me.

Happy birthday, Jared. We'll have to start spending less on the presents and cakes at this rate.

Hey, that's what a cat would look like if Napoleon decided he was hungry. THE CAT WOULD BE EBOL. MHM. It's true.

I love the new Savage Moon adition. It so totally rocks. *headbangslotsyeah?* So, chyeah. I'm not one for the "the story totally inspired me for this and that", so I won't try. THANKS FOR THE NEW UPDATE THOUGH. KTHXKTHX. <3

Is it me, or is Jimmy just plain lucky? I mean, Billy's been hinting at Brandon for AGES now and it just seems to go over his head, but as soon as Lee guesses that Jimmy likes him, he's all over him. How messed up is this right now? What does Billy have to do? Get a sign proclaiming his love for Brandon? So, yeah. I liked it.

Wow, how...original.

Yay. I think maybe I should do that to. Keep a notebook, that is. It's a good way to keep track.

Omg, you see how evil he is? He leaves these sly little hints. I reckon he does it to wind me up. RAISE MY BLOOD PRESSURE, WILL YOU?

Well, it went completely dead. Hehe. I'll save it!

He updated it for you, Justyn, from all that hassle you've been giving him.

:{ I didn't want it to end. I wanted to see what Jimmy would tell him the next day. Gah. Bully!

Okay, I will. Thanks.

I think it's actually "Live Long Enough to Find the Right One", but then again, I could be wrong.

They say third time lucky, huh? Well, I just realised what this story reminds me of. It kind of reminds me of my life. Not the ultra hot boyfriend and such likes, just the bit about how he has to live in a crummy area, and that he goes to a really good school, which is just like me. Just thought I'd add that...

Justyn, babe. What's with the big Resident Evil obsession? Everywhere I look on your blog I see the Umbrella insignia. It's great to have a hobby but...are you really that obsessed?

Omg. Am I the only person who can't see part 8 & 9?? All I see is: Chapter 4: Forsaken Part A Part B Part C Part D Part E Part F Part G Where's 8 & 9? *moans a lot*

I only noticed this time around because I've read all the stories now, but there are SO many references to Com's other stories, it's kinda cool to see they all interlace somehow. Maybe I'm just being a dork?

I've read the original and I just started reading the remixed ('cause I'm bored) and I'm at the bit in chapter 6 where Tanner is staring out the window when it rains. Well, the main reason I posted this is because you called Tanner 'Taryn'. Wrong story. ^-^ Anyway, that was all. And the fact that I wanted to post. <3 Ciao. x